I Use Chinese Painting to Shock the Extraordinary World

The idea is quite good, but when I saw my sister and the family rules, I couldn't bear it anymore and died of poison.

The idea is good, but the plot is a bit ridiculous and not strong enough. The fun part of this kind of novel is how to pretend to be cool quietly. The author needs to strengthen it.

Shock. Shocked. Still shocked

The creativity is good, but the plot is toxic! Chinese style painting pays attention to the background, connotation, grandeur and profound artistic conception. However, the protagonist adds those nonsensical and funny plots, and the integration feels very awkward! Can't go up, can't go down, positioning is messed up!

The book is a good book. The more you write it, the more you read it. Don't be confused.

Let me just say one thing, s is too poisonous.

The author draws a picture, has he posted any pictures? Take a look if you have it

I was attracted by the traditional Chinese painting, but in fact there are so many chapters where the protagonist creates too few divine patterns, and the description of the divine patterns is not specific. When reading this kind of article, I definitely hope that the protagonist will create more interesting and powerful Chinese paintings. He also wrote about exercises, alchemy, and other miscellaneous things, which were not clear enough and felt like they were overshadowing the rest of the book.

The creativity is good, but the writing quality is a bit poor and the routines are not good. The divine patterns drawn before time travel are invalid. After time traveling, I met a garbage supporting character and drew a divine pattern. The protagonist's jade pen and the supporting character's Wu Gu body transformed into level eight workers in two seconds. Then the villain appeared to question the protagonist. And I've been poisoned.

To be honest, the villain's introduction may be stiff, but it's okay. But when I saw the darkness of that school later, where all the backstage staff were there, I really couldn't stand it. How can I put it, did I feel that the world was too dark? If this is the case, you might as well directly show that this is a dark side world, instead of shaping an orderly world as a whole.

The subject matter and ideas are both good. It's really not good at writing. Is there a master who can rewrite it?

The creativity is good, but the routine is not good. This kind of setting should use the routine of that old eunuch Keyu.

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The idea is pretty good, but I don't like cross-level combat.

Let's learn Chinese painting and then write...

Everyone died from the poison, so I didn't even dare to click on it.