My Superpower Is Not Hypnosis, It's Command!

I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 11. First of all, your setting is fine. Secondly, the protagonist won 80 million in prizes. Why should he report it to the police? Even if the protagonist spends the 80 million, he has not committed a crime. After all, the protagonist thinks that he has won the lottery. Then, the female Liumen said that the winning mobile phone can be kept, so I can tell you clearly that not only will it not be left to you, but the protagonist's mobile phone will also be detained, because this mobile phone has calls, messages, and exchanges with the fraudster, which serves as a sufficient reason to be used as evidence (item). Then the protagonist will be temporarily detained. It is not sure whether the protagonist participated in the fraud or whether the protagonist committed a crime, but the money was indeed transferred to the protagonist. It is not sure whether the protagonist went to the police because of the uneven distribution of the spoils. (There are many real cases of reporting uneven spoils.) Therefore, this process must be done this way. Don't ask me how I know. Therefore, the author should be less than 18 years old. He does not know the world of adults and how society is structured. He only relies on his 10 years of growth experience to stand in the ivory tower to imagine and make up random stories outside the ivory tower. This is very imprecise, this is very irresponsible, and it is very insulting to the reader's IQ. For irresponsible creation, readers have the right to criticize you. If you don't understand the plot of the story, you can check the information, don't make it up randomly, that is too fake.

I would like to give the author some advice. Don't always emphasize the Apple 16 pro or the chairman's daughter. You overemphasize the importance of "money" in your article. Every line is full of worship of money. However, the strong smell of copper makes the whole work unbearable. Money is very important in reality, but it is unwise to keep emphasizing the importance of money in a super power novel. We are entangled with money every day, and it is really vulgar to have to contend with money in the world of novels. Many authors have a bad habit of substituting their worship of money into their works.

Did you really go to college? Now that university still ranks the school beauties😅

When I look for new books, I feel very uncomfortable when I see this kind of book. I was attracted by the outline and tone of this book, but also tortured by the author's writing style.

Repeating those reasons for not falling in love is very annoying

The setting is okay and very creative, but the protagonist is really big-hearted. He wants to hide himself while using his abilities in other people's houses. He can barely tolerate the two episodes of rabies and drug abuse. The part where he starts training cats under the nose of other people's private surveillance is really ridiculous.

The author has no common sense, or he lives in a gentle country, and thinks about the world too well, just like the clear-eyed college student

Can you order yourself? For example, order yourself to study, order yourself to exercise

I subscribe specifically to troll you. Don't you, the author, have some ideas in your mind? If you don't have that ability, you can't do anything like scene switching! The whole sense of reading is extremely fragmented. You can't even understand the basic narrative well, and you still want to go to heaven.

With the protagonist's ability, if he goes to work for the Record Committee and is an inspection team, his nickname could be Living Yama

The overall feeling is quite good, and it gives you a feeling that the author failed in Chinese composition, but if you read it without thinking, you will find that this book is indeed good. The protagonist uses super powers, and the plot is quite to my liking. I started reading novels when I was in elementary school for 10 years. From pirated copies to genuine ones, I got tired of reading all kinds of novels. I just like this kind of calm novel without deep hatred.

Why not order your body's sensitivity to increase a thousand times, feel the friction of cells to generate electric current, then enter the electric current push, then enter the magnetic field rotation, and then defeat the whole fucking world with one person's power

I don't know if this kind of school beauties are from the same world as me. Why haven't I been in a school with beauties since I was a child? . .

How could the shareholder information of a pharmaceutical company be hidden? With such advanced technology, the protagonist's information would have been exposed long ago.

At the beginning, a nuclear bomb-level ability was released, but he was not allowed to use it. The protagonist had to use the nuclear bomb to hit the ants for fear of being harmed. Then give him sticks first, and then upgrade to nuclear bombs step by step. In fact, if you can really get the "order" and control key figures step by step, you can become the king of the world right away.

I want to know whether a person doing scientific research can break through the bottleneck when he is ordered by the protagonist.

The idea is good, but the writing is terrible, and many parts of the plot simply cannot withstand scrutiny. For example, the part about reporting a crime, where the police and the reporter learned about the case in a cafe, or one-on-one, wow.

The plot does not advance, the protagonist does not appear, and the male supporting actors do have a lot of scenes. . . Putting the cart before the horse

Seeing Chapter 3 does not conform to the thinking of the brain

More or not? If you don't update it, I'll move it out.

Beat this eunuch to death, one card a month!

I've been keeping it up, keep it up, I'll give it a monthly pass

Let me go. After n months, is this resurrected again? Dude, to be honest, you've forgotten the outline, right? 🤔 If there's anything else you can do to save it, can you explain it in a single chapter? If there is any rescue, I will vote for you, otherwise I won't waste my monthly votes.

It's difficult to stretch, so I change it once a month.