In Siheyuan, I Am the Iron-Headed Boy.

The salespeople in the supply and marketing cooperative have such bad attitudes, why doesn't the protagonist teach them a lesson? ? Instead, they use the social atmosphere of the era to make us readers feel aggrieved? ! If I were the author, I would write that the protagonist used the space storage ability to collect most of the things in the supply and marketing cooperative through the air! Then I took part of the money at the counter and put it in the pocket of the salesperson who had a bad attitude towards me! The rest is fun, just make the other party lose their job! Don't tell me what I'm not guilty of, just because we are time travellers! The time traveler wants to retaliate tooth for tooth, eye for eye, repay a hundredfold, lawless! And the risk is small! Just rely on the golden finger! If you can't do whatever you want, then this golden finger is too cheap!

It can basically be regarded as the end of the story. The protagonist lifts the lid directly or indirectly twice and actually covers it. How can the streets be afraid of this? Is it okay for people to just arrest people with guns, report them to the police, and set an example? To give the author some ideas, if you are afraid that Yi Zhonghai will no longer have Liu Haizhong and Yan Bugui will step down and there will be no plot to write, you can add new residents, such as enemy agents who hide their identities, intellectuals who return to serve their country, street gangs, or retired intelligence agents, etc., And then just find a more complex case on the Internet as a template to apply to the rolling mill or courtyard. Even if you write based on the plot of Conan, you can write several episodes. It also has a lot of words.

I saw the protagonist going to the street office to expose the filth in all the courtyard houses, the kind that would be enough to get shot, and at the same time he persuaded Director Wang to only monitor the unsolved problems, and he lost interest in it. . .

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It's better to build a separate courtyard house next door, and then hang out at No. 95. It's disgusting. Just like Wang Dapeng, he wants to be a great man every day (Siheyuan: Who can compare with me in evil deeds)

It's extremely toxic, and what I write about every day is trivial things.

First, make sure you understand the era when writing. There is a big difference between the year 1951 when the People's Republic of China was liberated and the 1960s. You are trying to change the national conditions from the 1950s to the 1960s after the plot begins. This is not rigorous.

If the timeline of fan fiction is messed up, the book will be useless.

A lot of things that write about the courtyard are trivial and they dare not write about the outside world. I have written hundreds of chapters and am still in the courtyard 🔨🔨🔨

This book sets the time point in 1951 for the sake of Huairu. But in fact, other plots and character traits could only take shape and take place after the TV series started in 1965, and 1951 was still the period of military control. Therefore, this book seems very fragmented. It would be better to set the resurrected widow goddess in the laundry pool, which would be more reasonable in the 1960s.

There is so much nonsense, so much description, so much descriptiveness in every look and every sentence.

When Jia Dongxu got married, the ticket system had not yet been implemented.

Since we are going to write a chronology, we have to check the basic information. There are many common sense errors in the first few chapters. There are also many words in the writing that do not convey the meaning.

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Let Sister Qin accept Ma Hua as an apprentice, make a small stove and bring Ma Hua with her, let Ma Hua first become a fool, become a regular, become a chef, and then become a squad leader

The magic shield has been released, nothing look

Author, you should design a system to critically hit a fairy sword and instantly kill all the neighbors in the courtyard. Isn't this better than a lot of meat? I was afraid of being reported after eating it.

I saw in the chapter review that the author said that he had never watched the TV series, and I immediately thought it was reasonable.

The monthly pass has been given, can I give it a boost?

The system just sends and sends messages without any brains. Can't the golden finger be so big? Just give me some skills and talents.

Chapters 23-29 Are there no rewards for such a violent revelation?

Liu Haizhong was asked to report, why did he report it himself before? It's not even chapter 30 and the whole hospital has been attacked. Who will you attack next? Is it still a courtyard house when you quarrel with others?

After reading so many novels like this, Jia Dongxu should be a reliable person. It can't be as bad as the novel makes it.