In the Great World of Martial Arts, You Use the Tao of Talisman to Rule the Ages?

The setting is really good, I hope it can be maintained, and there won't be any inexplicable intelligence-dampening plots such as being young and old. It looks pretty good so far.

I read it after collecting 70 chapters. The good start attracted me, but it was a bit boring before it was released. I felt that these 70 chapters were a bit useless. Martial arts did not describe the advantages of the world of cultivating immortals, and cultivating immortals did not describe the characteristics of martial arts. It feels like the food is tasteless and it would be a pity to throw it away. There is no coolness, and there is no foreshadowing of trying to make a big splash. New authors, please work harder 🙂 Everyone reads novels just to have fun. Unless your writing is good, you still need to learn how to make it cool to attract readers.

Chapter 72 has just reached the second level of Qi Refining. I'm afraid it will take thousands of chapters to build the foundation. It's a common problem for Qidian authors to spend a lot of space writing about low levels.

After you have reached the first level of Qi training, you have not made up for your body's deficiencies by eating meat for a month, and you still have to make up for it for two or three months. What kind of immortality are you doing? Could it be that he knew that he was going to write a bad story later and deliberately suppressed his realm?

I'm convinced, but I haven't read that novel about how cultivating immortals and upgrading still drains the body.

I feel that the author is writing a little slowly. Although the writing style is excellent, he is not an experienced author after all and has no fan base. I am afraid that he will not be able to retain people in the end.

Come on, the book is very good. The first thirty chapters rank among the top ten books I read this year 😍

I don't see the difference between the two worlds. Things from the world of cultivating immortals and mana can be taken to the world of martial arts to be stronger than martial arts. The things of martial arts are better than those of cultivating immortals in the world of cultivating immortals. You say you have outstanding talent. , You didn't show any magic. Not exploring information. The main theme is one, condescending and looking at the natives of the two worlds.

After seeing the latest chapters, according to this trend, it takes 400 chapters to establish the foundation state. Another point is that the body in the world of immortality. According to this trend, it is difficult to establish the foundation in 1,000 chapters. I write too much on a daily basis, and sometimes I have to repeat a sentence many times.

Others are okay, but what on earth do the rich people in the city have to do so? To put it bluntly, a warrior cannot do it head-on. Sneak attacks are always possible, but it is impossible for every member of the main line to be protected. It really pisses people off. One person dies today and the other person dies tomorrow. When someone breaks through, everyone will be dead. People like the He family are, to put it bluntly, just pigs. As soon as the two Qihai night clothes were put on, the He family would be gone. If the county magistrate dared to investigate, he would be killed so that he would not dare to marry or have children. If the county magistrate is angry, he can barely command others. If he practiced hard, he probably wouldn't survive until dawn. This is not very scientific. Everything else is okay, almost watchable.

I originally thought that when writing about two worlds, the protagonist will rise quickly. It seems to be a hydrology. Judging from the current writing trend, it may be a kind of rising battle and overcoming the realm. There is also a double time novel like yours, writing two worlds at the same time. One world and another world. The world is not over when it is refreshing, or the world is changed as soon as it is refreshing. Jumping back and forth feels too fragmented. Shouldn't you rewrite this world first and then rewrite the other world after a while?

Seeing this, the protagonist's mentality should change. A person's character cannot be static. Without strength, he has the mentality of an ordinary person. He is submissive and respectful when talking to others. But when he becomes an immortal cultivator and his class changes, he should reflect the mentality of a strong person. According to the evolution theory now generally believed, humans evolved from monkeys, but Who would regard monkeys as their own kind? When the protagonist becomes stronger, he should also have a strong mentality and be different from mortals. Don't hang out with mortals day by day. Even after his strength has improved, he still hunts and replenishes his nutrition in the ravines. It's too low to rely on hunting. Even if you hunt, you can't rely entirely on hunting.

For Xinshou Village, isn't it bad to be too bland? We have to be tough and engage in so many conflicts. We are almost at the level. Wouldn't it be better to go to the outside world right away? You have to write hundreds of chapters in Novice Village. Readers will get tired of it. It's like the mortal Han Paopao's style of play is the real six. Keep changing maps. If you can't beat another one, you can come back for revenge when you are strong enough. The way to survive is not limited to a certain place. Running and developing is the way to survive, instead of playing a single-player game and eating up one place before running to another place. The subject matter of this book is still acceptable, but I still can't let go of the writing. I'm tired of seeing some of it.

It's not that the writing is slow, it's that it's overpowering. To put it bluntly, it's just abusing the author.

The first fifty chapters are really good, and I have been following it. Before it was released, the style of painting changed drastically, and it was extremely pretentious. It didn't seem like it was written by the same person, which made me wonder if the account was sold.

How many people have used this piece of trash before? It's fine if you look like a middle-aged person, but it has to be a piece of trash.

I didn't understand the next few chapters. Isn't it a bit too suppressive to suppress the clones in the world of immortality?

All I can say is... It looked pretty good at the beginning...

I heard from the big guys in the author group that you have to take the initiative to pursue reading in the early stage, otherwise it will be difficult to test the water, so I am asking here (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

A big parallel importer, working hard to get water, in the world of martial arts, you can eat, drink, and practice drawing talismans all the time. Why do you keep running to the small market in the city? Go to a small market and write three or five chapters. A supporting character who has nothing to do is only one or two chapters. You are also trying to build relationships and favors in a small village. Are you a cultivator? Uncle Xiang, who received the goods, tried his best to talk in a sloppy manner. It was too sloppy.

What a pity! ! The author committed suicide and was admitted to the hospital... Although I admire the author's great courage, but... I think the novel is very good! ! ! As a result, I just died like this 😆😆 I really like the protagonist Chen Lin, he is cautious but courageous. It's a pity that the author lacks ability or courage and turns out to be a eunuch! ! ! ! I really looked forward to Chen Lin using the Talisman Immortal to suppress all enemies in the world of martial arts, and the Martial Emperor in the world of cultivating immortals... Unfortunately, it's gone, gone, gone! !

It's quite interesting how the two sides' qualifications are reversed. A genius in the world of martial arts who cultivates immortality, and a genius who practices martial arts in the world of cultivation.

I said it would have to be cut sooner or later. Two worlds, two bodies.

The first book is obviously a high-quality one, but the book is so eunuch-y. I suggest you polish it in the next book.

It's just as I expected, okay

I feel that there is a little bit of follow-up reading. I hope the author will not give up because of the lack of follow-up reading in the early stage and write slowly!

Not bad, just too little. Coming from Nanshan Traveler, I thought at least the content was similar to him. I didn't expect it would be less. Please update more soon.

When Xiu Xian didn't give him any talent at all, he began to feel unbalanced. He wanted to give it a try and see if he could solve it.

The writing is good, and the readership is okay, but it's weird that there's no recommendation. I saw this book from Cute Foodie

I pushed Qidian again, but there was no change after I clicked on it.