Martial Arts Begins with Orion

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The book is okay, the characters are well drawn, but the pace is too slow, and it has nothing to do with the protagonist's age. I understand that you need to control the pace to release more exciting content, but the early stage is really weak. The content is good but limited, which may be the reason for the mediocre results. After seeing this, I subscribed to a few chapters to support it. I know that everyone who writes books has a temper, and they all feel that what they write is not worthy of others to talk about, but again, this is a craft, and since you are doing this for a living, you have to know what to write, and only when it is completed can more opinions be recognized. People who were delayed in the early stage of this book want to skip the chapter. But writing a book is really hard, I hope it gets better and better 😁😁😁

Elderly underworld, passionate elderly novel, worth reading 🙂

Anyone next to the protagonist's bonus points will benefit. It feels like child's play. This is an extraordinary world. You are not afraid of being caught by the strong and used as pigs.

🙂🙂🙂I just feel that what the author wrote is the opposite of other books. In other cases, the protagonist competes with the older generation. In this book, the protagonist competes with the younger generation.

This book is a source of food and can be invested. Killing decisively, not holy, humane.

It feels like a middle-aged Northeastern man hanging out in the underworld. .

The latest chapter is extremely poorly written, almost like being surrounded by demons, but still rambling on and on, too much nonsense, and no respect for one's own life. Where does fighting give me the time to think about so many other things? The writing is the same as the villain's spring outing.

After reading Chapter 11, you don't want to read anymore. When you see a large prey running away instead of shooting an arrow? Writing about Orion, don't you know about hunting? With a bow, even if a large beast such as a bear or tiger is shot in the torso by an arrow, it will die.

The book is okay. There are too many animals. Personally, I think one or two is best. Even if the writing is very detailed, it will be fine. If there are too many, it will become a zoo.

Author, you have to learn how to sell, and go to the great god areas to sell more. For example, today I helped you sell it at Water Monkey Chengshen. These days, good books will be buried if you don't rely on sales!

Why go into the mountains? Only by relying on the city can you resist the beast tide. Only when you have a bad brain will you go into the mountains and die. There is no need to give the protagonist the wisdom to run away this time.

The author is a veteran, with both writing techniques and life experience, and the path is right. He closely follows the recently successful famous writers. They look for it in the water, but you go to the mountains to find it. You have the resources yourself. If you write it normally, it will be a quality novel. Low-key development, long-term planning, I believe the author will produce a good book.

The writing is good, but when it comes to taking a 40-year-old childhood friend to practice, you have already passed it. You should increase it to the limit yourself, and force it again. If you take the overflowing blood energy several times, you cannot take it every time, and you can't always be stuck at the limit without breaking through. Moreover, cultivation is a very private matter. If someone is sitting next to you, your spiritual sense will be uneasy.

He is in his thirties, so he is old, but due to the injury, the village chief is also an old man in his thirties?

Generally speaking, this novel can be used as a fodder, not a saint; it is quite enjoyable to read with a little bit of flow. Prepare to chase to the end

The tide of beasts has killed so many demons and beasts in the first and second realms, but they have no attribute points? After this battle, at least the people under his command will be in the second level, and their skills will be perfected.

A rare book! The writing of this book is excellent, and it can be seen that the author's writing skills are quite profound, at least starting with a master's degree. Reading it is immersive, the plot is not conventional, the story has ups and downs, and the world view is majestic. The first three chapters are simply the finishing touch and make people want to stop. Some of the people and things in the article are also thought-provoking. The author also handles the moral and ethical issues very well. It is not difficult to see that the author is a very intelligent and charming person in reality, with his own standards of judgment and independence. To summarize, some good books have been rare in recent years. Some people may think that I have exaggerated because I have chosen the best ones. Doesn't this book have shortcomings and regrets? Good question! Readers who can ask this kind of question are not simple at first glance. They must have no problem with their character and are not easily fooled by superficial phenomena. I call them experts! Everything has two sides, and this book is certainly no exception. A thousand readers will have a thousand Hamlets. This book has the following two shortcomings. I hope the author will correct them in time after seeing them. The first shortcoming is that the number of words is too few, and each chapter is short and weak. Of course, this is also a common problem of Qidian authors, who update slowly. The second point that makes me regretful is that I have not seen such an excellent work.

Can the author explain it? How did you learn the walking steps by watching two birds fight? What else is the feathered bird's steps? Where did this footwork come from?

👴This angle is quite novel and interesting, please update soon!

Do you think this kind of eunuch fraud is a new type of fraud? 🙂

Great book! The author must control the rhythm well, don't collapse!

The writing is very good and tasteful, but there is too little promotion. The characters in the book have clear love and hate, affection and righteousness, and the rhythm is well grasped. However, the depiction of the big world view is a bit general, but it is really good. Come on, author.

Is this rhythm going to the palace?

! I estimate that the results will be good if I can update them. So far, I've seen that they are pretty good.

When will the author release the entire title 🙂

Both the monthly ticket and the recommended ticket are given to more points 🥺🥺🥺🥺

Learn about Hua Tuo's Five Animals Play! There are so many martial arts in China that imitate animals! ? Don't be such a noob! And the author, please update, why don't you update again? ?

It's very well written, please keep up the good work!

The writing is very good, and the character and temperament are in line with the tastes of old bookworms. I will give you a monthly pass. Don't blame me for being poor