
The Great Wall of China: Dragons and Sacrifice
巨兵长城传:龙与献祭
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- Completed
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- 464k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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The dragons are the most vicious There is an unknown ancient secret core There is a great conspiracy They left behind a hundred thousand giant soldiers The source of all evil is also the end of all evil ~ Zhuoquan But left behind enough power to destroy it ~ Emperor Yin But with Giant soldier hook A fly was born from it Working for the Dragon Clan It's a pity that this dirty thing rebelled This is normal He was born in filth So he calls himself the future But he only dares to hide in a remote corner of the rift in time and space The Dragon Clan's plan is being implemented They want to control the world They dare not go against the general trend of heaven So they plot against all living beings Use their greed to make them kill each other Consume each other's luck Why were the four kingdoms initially divided It was because of the secret promotion of the Dragon Clan When their plan matures Finally Come to the world Enjoy the belief in luck But the heaven and earth have their own pure and righteous air The seeds sprout quietly Goodness cannot be wiped out The hope of the world comes into being Praise truth, goodness and beauty Praise greed, anger and ignorance Praise fate Heart is the power of everything
"How to be a good author?"
Author, you still have a lot of room for improvement!
This is the only one in Qidian. The one who has written The Great Wall of China for a long time is the only one in my heart. Moonlight is written very, very well. I strongly recommend all Furui Controllers to read it 🤓.
Official Extra (1) The artifact reappears, the Nine-Way Reincarnation Bell "Hahahaha, you just want to compete with our Dragon Clan?" An Yue laughed, with a hint of disdain for Ono and the others in his tone, "Ants are ants after all, how can they shake a towering tree?" After An Yue said this, he released a little bit of the Dragon Clan's pressure "Uh-huh!" "What a strong pressure..." Ono also released his White Flame Shape Element, and then walked towards An Yue with difficulty under the pressure, "I must... Let the ice flow come back! I want to tell him personally, no matter what decision he makes, the world... Qingshui Kingdom... Will be guarded by us... Together!" "Ice flow? Haha , are you talking about the little rabbit with a frozen form?" An Yue looked at Xiaoye with interest, with a contemptuous smile as if he was laughing at Xiaoye's overestimation, "I'm sorry, that little rabbit is voluntary, and I guess he has been transformed by now." "Transformation?" Xiao. Ye stared at An Yue closely, and then suddenly felt a little uneasy in his heart, "You guy" "What did you do to the ice flow!" "Oh? Little wolf cub wants to know" "Since, you want to know so much, then I will tell you a little bit" An Yue looked at Ono's expression with interest at this time, and couldn't help but feel good "The little rabbit named Bingliu has not only been completely assimilated into our thoughts, but even his memory has been tampered with. But, in order to prevent him from going back on his word, I have used special means to peel off his personality and put him in a relatively safe place. Now he is our most loyal servant." After An Yue finished speaking, he swept Ono away with his dragon tail. Go out "I advise you not to do those useless things. You should be grateful to Bingliu. It was he who sacrificed himself in exchange for your safety. Don't be ungrateful." An Yue looked at Xiaoye and said fiercely "How could it be..." "Bingliu's personality... Has been stripped out?" Brother Lu looked at An Yue in shock and anger. "You bastard!" "Oh, Xiaolu is angry, but there is no way to save your friends, hahahahahaha!" An Yue laughed at Ono and the others for overestimating their capabilities, and then strengthened their own defense ———————— "What a good servant, right?" Chiba sat On the comfortable sofa, he looked with interest at Bingliu, who was kneeling next to him while holding his hand, and then rubbed Bingliu's ears. "It feels really good. No wonder you are merciful." "But are you really sure that you killed the guy named Ye Ming? That guy broke into the ruins alone." Chiba looked at herself. The confidant general "My subordinates confirmed before leaving that he was indeed killed by me." "And I saw him fall into Broken Dragon Cliff with my own eyes. I'm afraid he has already died." "Hahahaha, you did a good job. The artifact on that guy is very detrimental to us." Hearing this Ye Ming was killed, Qianye couldn't help but feel in a good mood, and then rewarded his confidant general with some rare magic weapons, and then let him leave "Oh my, that little wolf cub is really obsessed with you, but you are quite obedient. You actually signed a contract voluntarily giving up your master's personality without hesitation." Qianye touched Bingliu and hung his head. After hearing this, Qianye's eyes darkened, and then he smiled self-deprecatingly, "Forget it, there must be no mistakes in this plan. After all, the underground dragon city is going to be ruled." No one in the world can stop it!" ———————— "Master, master, wake up." Hunter Xing carried the injured and unconscious Ye Ming on his back, and then flew with his sword to a grassland not far from the Qingshui border. "Master, master, wake up!" Hunter Xing anxiously carried it on his body! He used a bandage to bandage Ye Ming's wound, then looked at Ye Ming worriedly, and then stayed by Ye Ming's side Although they didn't get along for a long time, Hunter Xing had already regarded Ye Ming as his brother, and for the first time, he felt in Ye Ming the kind of family affection and sense of security that neither Wang Yue nor Zhui Yun had. At this point, Hunter Star Willing to follow Ye Ming "Huh?, What is this?" Hunting Star saw that a cloth bag around Ye Ming's waist was shining with some light blue light, and then he untied it and opened it. Inside the cloth bag was a bell-shaped object that looked very ancient When Hunting Star took out the object, he saw that it was about 30 meters tall. Thirty centimeters, with a diameter of about nine centimeters. The material should be made of brass. It has a handle and a tongue inside the bell. There are nine different areas outside the bell, and each area is engraved with some strange patterns and words. But from the text, Hunting Star can vaguely tell what it is, but the pattern is unknown "Strange, the words on this bell, um ~, it's a bit difficult to understand." "Well, it should be, hell... Way, hungry... Ghost way, repair... Luo way, heaven... Way, animal... Animal way, white light... Way, deceitful way, reincarnation... Way, dragon destruction... Way." Hunting Star could barely see the words clearly, but because he didn't understand the patterns, he put the bell back into the cloth bag, and then continued to guard Ye Ming.
Aha! The first one we saw
No? When did my Brother Lu have sex with Third Brother...? I feel like I'm blind🤔
Whim
Assume that Lan Hun'er's limbs are now tied with ropes and his mouth is gagged, and Lan Hun'er will definitely be unable to struggle away. At this time, someone has been taking turns stroking Lan Hun'er everywhere, and saying "good dog" while touching, I am curious whether Lan Hun'er will be angry.
Hehe, I will post tonight! Post the next extra story
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In terms of the author's writing style: there are few descriptions of the environment, especially the description of the natural environment, which lacks a certain buffer. I am more satisfied with the character creation. I personally feel that the only characters that have been more successfully created are Charo and Bingliu (who have complex psychology, candidness, and awe-inspiring righteousness). There is Xiaojiabiyu, who has the righteousness of the world, but also has his own selfishness) and there is Lan Hun'er🌚 (who thinks highly of himself due to his extraordinary talent and is unwilling to ask for advice and study. He is also greedy. He seems to be mature and has his own team, but in fact he is not clear about big things. He has no independent opinion at all and does not have much spleen in Mocheng Mansion. He who is angry and uses force to intimidate the rebellious half-year-old brat is one of the better villains now, (everyone else seems to be dead) The world view is still hazy, so I won't comment here, but I don't seem to see a few foreshadowings (I hope the author can refute my statement) ) In terms of plot, the author seems to be going crazy😣, from the initial group adventure, to the bloody battle, and now it has become love in troubled times (not that I like it) The emotional relationship is quite messy, I like it 😍 (bushi wobuchengren) The shaping of the Three Kingdoms is very vague. It is basically consistent with the animation and does not affect the plot. However, cultural differences can be written. This can be used later to create conflicts and promote the development of the story.
Author, you haven't updated for two days in a row. Please update immediately before 9 o'clock tomorrow. Thousands of people have written this book.
Our Tutu hasn't posted anything for a long time😣 I remember he is a veteran fan of the author
Riddle
I didn't exist in the past, but I am everywhere. Everything in the world is chasing me, who am I?
Finished writing, start posting! Hehe 😌😌, but it's another side story. Hehe, there's some information.
I am the real winner
I am first✌️
Hmm, can you find a partner for our Ye Ming? We don't want much, Wang Yue or anything else will do.
Why…
I said before that I wanted to join the group, but only one person came
Let us thank Lei Chi for saving this book Say thank you little mouse
Did you see it😰
On Bai Chen (1)
There are no character settings here, but there are some geographical and hydrological settings that I conceived. I hope it can help the author complete the world view. I hope the author will give it a lot of consideration I hope all book friends will give it a gentle thumbs up and thank you️ From the map given in the original work, it can be seen that Bai Chen's geographical location is in a three-encirclement structure. From a military perspective, it has a strategic buffering effect on Black Wind and Jinsha. From an economic perspective, it is also the only way to connect the three countries, which shows the importance of geography. Based on the map, the following inferences can be drawn: (1) Bai Chen reaches Heifeng Plateau in the north, and the terrain decreases from north to south. (The pictures given in the original work are not standard) Suppose (1) is at Heifeng Plateau The part of the original Baichen territory that decreases to the north has a continental climate, a cold and humid climate, fertile soil, and a relatively gentle terrain Setup (2) The eastern part of Baichen is close to Baicheng and has an obvious monsoon climate, the same as that of southern Qingshui. It is characterized by hot and rainy summers and mild and humid winters Shezi (3) The southern part of Baichen is close to Jinsha, which is a typical desert climate. But fortunately, it is irrigated by the Honghe River, which has an extremely large amount of water. Therefore, oases are widely spread without any desert weather. (This river will be explained later) (2) Rivers and Mountains Looking at the original map and the map I created, you can find that the Black Peak Plateau is just like our Qinghai-Tibet Plateau, with widespread glaciers and continuous snow-capped mountains. Many large rivers originate here, and most of the many large rivers in Baichen originate from the Black Peak Plateau (Here we can learn from the settings of other book friends) Looking at the new map, from left to right, the first orange one is the Sarakuya Mountains, and The Hong River originates from the North Sarakuya Mountains and flows out from the North Sarakuya Pass. (Sarakuya translates the local proverb of Black Peak, which can be literally translated as iron arms, or an iron-like barrier, metaphorically for protection) Shezi (1) Sara The Kuya Mountains, Sarakuya Pass, and the Hong River (the original name of this river was the Sarakuya River, but later it was named after the flying dragon and the landing rainbow in the poem of King Feiliu, so it was called the Hong River. The white color is the place where I conceived the river, and the blue color is the original river. I try to use the white river as the river Mainly flow) And from here to the right, the second pink one is the Neelanitra Mountains, from which the Neelanitra River originates, but it flows from the South Sarakuya Pass and finally merges into the Hong River Shezi (2) Neelanitra Mountains, Neelanitra River, and South Sarakuya Pass From left to right, the third yellow mountain range and the fourth green mountain range are the Big Blade Mountain and the Little Blade Mountain. The river originating from the west of the Big Blade Mountain is called Dashaka River, which starts from Nila. The Nitra Pass flows out and merges into the Hong River Shezi (3) Dadaofeng Mountain and Xiaodaofeng Mountain, Nilanitra Pass, Dashaka River Between the Big and Small Daofeng Mountains, there is no mountain pass, but it is surrounded by a basin-like terrain. You can see a A river originates from the Blade's Edge Mountains (no one is sure which one it originates from), and then flows into the basin to form a large lake. This river is called the Shuangdao River. That lake is the holy lake respected by everyone in Black Peak, Lake Santiago, known as the Eye of the Earth Setzi (4) Shuangdao River, The Eye of the Earth - Santiago Lake (the translation comes from the Black Peak proverb, the literal translation should be called the great and inviolable holy lake) These are the first, and the second issue will be published later. Thank you for reading. Thank you for reading. Thank you manually
I don't believe it anymore
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On Bai Chen (2)
There are no characters in the setting this time, but some historical and background ideas about Bai Chen My opinion: Bai Chen will definitely return to the country Judging from the author's previous book and the current book, the serfdom in Qingshui and the current constitutional monarchy in Jinsha are relatively feudal and dark, with solidified classes. College students have ended up like Larry, which shows that the upper class has firmly blocked rights. The tenant farmers in Qingshui are willing to flee the country in order to make a living. The gap between the rich and the poor in Jinsha is too big, and the life of the people at the bottom is not their destiny, leaving them wandering between madness. Assuming that the other three countries have a history of 1,000 years, Bai Chen may only be 400 years old, but his significance will affect thousands of generations. Here I boldly conceive that before Bai Chen founded the country, the mainland was in a slave society, and Bai Chen was the first to break slavery. Bai Chen was a slave who founded the country. The background is a major slave uprising, initiated by the ancestors of the Yeqing tribe (cats) and the Wang tribe (dogs). These two tribes are the main races among slaves. Cats are the smallest and weakest among all felines, so they are discriminated against and excluded by other feline families. Because of their loyal but relatively (I say relatively) gentle nature, and their natural barking, dogs are oppressed and exploited by large carnivores, mainly wolves. Even though the two groups are very similar in genes and appearance, and sometimes even confused, they are still expelled by the wolves. Because of their strong bodies, excellent adaptability and super immunity, they are loved by slave owners and exploiters, and are also popular among slave owners and exploiters. How unfortunate it is to be exploited by the wolf tribe Settings (1) Slave language (Ye Qing is an external translation, originally meaning that you can see as clearly at night as during the day, which refers to cats, while Wang Ze is an onomatopoeia, referring to dogs) According to the previous setting, the establishment of Bai Chen Kingdom has a milestone significance. We can also see from the plot written by the author that the Bai He family can also start a business with other cranes. From this we can know that the presence of nobles in a race plays a positive role in resisting overall racial exploitation in a specific era. Of course, in the current social background of Jinsha, it is no longer useful. They have switched from exploiting a specific slave race to exploiting the people at the bottom. We can see it from the life of Dahuang. And Bai Chen's destruction of the country was a very sudden event. Bai Chen's founding of the country was to fight for the corresponding human rights for low-level slaves like cats and dogs. Bai Chen's fall was the past history repeating itself again. In addition, the current extreme social extremes In the turmoil, people will once again think of Bai Chen's glory Under the impetus of this kind of public opinion, even if Bai Chen does not establish a country, there will be thousands of Bai Chen who will establish a country The Yeqing clan is gone, but there are still thousands of Yeqing clan
Author, I have never missed every update of your previous work. In particular, there are several characters and settings in the previous work that I particularly like. Can these characters appear more in the future? Thank you, author. I really like your work. Bai Ying (the first general of the Black Peak Kingdom, the strongest in the world, but has defects in form and instability of form. He has an invincible body and muscles like a god and a sculpture. He can only use other moves such as Taijutsu Bajitian and Tianjian. He cannot use the white flame form like Ono. It will have side effects, but His strength is still invincible in the world) Qianlong (Heiying's younger son, he will tremble with excitement when fighting) Huiying (I really want to see this character appear. The author may have forgotten after finishing the last part. Baiying's strength is invincible in the world. Heiying cannot deal with Baiying. In order to balance the strength To stabilize their rule, Black Shadow used the blood of his eldest brother White Shadow to clone White Shadow, also known as Gray Shadow, to deal with his eldest brother White Shadow. Black Shadow finally found a way to deal with his eldest brother White Shadow. Gray Shadow is White Shadow's cloned wolf. Not only does he look exactly the same as White Shadow, all his moves are exactly the same in all aspects, even his strength. , The gray shadow is simply the second white shadow, and the black shadow also lamented in the previous part: He is indeed a child made with the blood of his eldest brother, and he looks exactly the same as my impression of his eldest brother when he was a child) I want to see more appearances and battles between the three of them in the future, as well as the interaction between them, thank the author
Because I wanted to illustrate the characters in the novel, I created another picture studio.
I'm about to become mentally ill😳
Build various buildings for fans
I suddenly discovered that Erha seemed to be the middle part of the head. I went to Isaac and you hid it quite deeply.
Build a building here. Everything you want to say to Isaac and your contributions are here.
As in the title 😍🌹❤️
I like you❤️
Garbage giant soldiers🙄 are either copied from giants or copied from pirates. This is what Chinese comics are like. The salt-alkali land is all copied from stitch monsters🪨🪨
I just recently finished reading the original text of Book 1, and after searching for a long time, I found it at the starting point. It's really interesting to write. But when I found out, it was no longer updated. What a pity.
Happy birthday
It seems Isaac is going to start school and cause trouble (horrified face)