I Prayed to All the Saints at the Beginning, and Only Zhunti Answered Me

To be honest, since I want to write about Western religions, my advice to the author is to write well and write about real Buddhist things, such as Buddhist discussions on emptiness, the nature of the Tathagata, etc., Or Buddhist theories such as Bodhicitta. Only when you have an understanding can you write good things. Otherwise, you are just covering up. Come on.

To be honest, since I want to write about Western religions, my advice to the author is to write well and write about real Buddhist things, such as Buddhist discussions on emptiness, the nature of the Tathagata, etc., Or Buddhist theories such as Bodhicitta. Only when you have an understanding can you write good things. Otherwise, you are just covering up. Come on.

Empress Nuwa is suffering! She is obviously the ancestor of human beings, but a group of unscrupulous authors are trying their best to discredit her

There are few ancient texts written about Western religions, so please keep writing.

After seeing the latest, give a brief review, respect the author's settings, and only make objective reviews, not personal conjectures. First, in terms of subject matter, it is very bold and finds an unusual path among the old routines. There are many prehistoric novels written about them over and over again, but most of them are the interception religion or the rise of the human race. There are also less people's religion or the devil's religion. There is a high probability that they will travel through time and become someone who has taken away the opportunity of such and such, or how awesome they will become as a new character in the end. There is a high probability that the Western faction will appear as a villain or a stepping stone. The author boldly chose the Western religion that few people have touched. It has to be said that the subject matter is very new and gives people a bright feeling. In it, we can see the difficulty and persistence of the Second Saint of the West. The West is already poor and weak. Who doesn't want to make their family stronger, and the Second Saint of the West's attitude has never been high. He will help if something goes wrong. Although some of his later behaviors may be biased, in the early stage, the attitude of the Second Saint is to build his own home even if he begs for food. Overall, it's pretty good. After all, it's a new direction. I hope you can work on it. Secondly, in terms of writing style, the first sentence I can say is average to above average. Although it cannot be compared with the big writers from all sides, it has the writing power of a normal high-quality article. The author is pretty good in describing psychology or scenes. It may be slightly lacking in fighting, but it is still okay. It is just a little thin and does not affect reading. It is not bad in other aspects. Third, in terms of plot, it is barely okay, and the most important thing is that it is reasonable. The plots that have appeared in the article up to now, except for teaching the saints to practice, are all reasonable. Whether it is the ginseng fruit banquet or the previous apprenticeship, it can be justified under the author's own settings. There are no poisonous points, and there are also shortcomings. First of all, it is very abrupt. The protagonist suddenly taught the saint how to practice. This is not very reasonable in ancient times. Secondly, it is not cool enough, but it may be that the author is foreshadowing it, so he just presses the button without saying it. Also, the transition of the plot is not blunt, and some common and effective methods are used to tweet, which is quite satisfactory. Fourth, in terms of characters, it is barely acceptable. After all, it is only 100,000 words, so I can't tell much. As far as I have written so far, Zhunti's shamelessness is not reflected, but his love for his disciples and his hope to revive the West are written. Tongtian's wanton and unrestrained is almost the same, and the others are insufficient. Most of the others are like this, not three-dimensional enough, but it is inevitable. After all, it is not even 200,000 words. I hope to write better in the future. Generally speaking, yes, it is pretty good among the novels of the same batch. If you stick to the stable output, it is not a big problem to get a high-quality novel. As for whether it will be higher, it is hard to say. The first big climax has not yet come, so I won't speculate more. Again, I respect the author and hope to work hard.

Watching The Great Desolate World, I really miss the so-called school beauties and goddesses before time travel, especially because the protagonist is trapped in an illusion and has been practicing Buddhism for so many years in vain. The mentality is too bad. After seeing today's chapter, I almost wanted to give up. Get over it quickly. . .

To be honest, Western religions don't want all rubbish. Western religions require great perseverance, great wisdom, and great magic power. You have nothing to rely on to let saints guide you; and the Taoist sect is also open to convenience. The Taoist Heavenly Lord has macro-control, Yuanshi Tianzun provides elite education, and Lingbao Tianzun provides ordinary education. As long as you listen to his sermons, you can claim to be his disciple. As long as you want to learn, you can't go there except Wa Palace? Just praying in place and want to enter the saint's door? I couldn't dream of such a big one😓

The other saints written by the author are like children. They get angry easily because of a word. My girlfriend is not so easy to get angry. Her plan is too simple.

A poor guy with a precarious life can join the top force in the world and yet he is still disappointed. In fact, I think the most taboo thing in Honghuang literature is to have a strong eye but a weak hand, especially if you don't start with three thousand gods and demons and are innately powerful, so you shouldn't have so many ideas and take yourself so seriously.

I haven't read it since I first started teaching in the West. It's a very interesting book.

In one sentence, how could the heaven be so little to me? Made me funny

Why are you going to become a disciple before you become a saint? It feels weird to be given careless advice on how to become a saint. People and ghosts will arrest you and search for your soul.

Playing tricks in front of a saint who has lived for who knows how many years,

Chapter 2 makes my scalp numb with embarrassment

Finally, there is a prehistoric article about Western religion!

The protagonist feels a bit smart. The subject matter is okay, but the character creation is not so good. It depends on how many words you can write. If you can keep writing and enrich the characters, it may be good in the future. After all, the subject matter is okay and there are too few Western teachings to start writing, but good grass may be a bit difficult.

I feel like the idea is good, but the writing is not very strong. The protagonist is not afraid of cause and effect and is a lot of nonsense.

Mo Xiaozhunti is a crazy immortal, this person has true mystery in his belly Go to Zixiao to seek Dafa, how much is a mere face worth?

The writing of "Honghuang" gives me the feeling of a Chinese martial arts world 😥

It is also good to write about Western religions. As long as Western religions are beautified~ The Western spiritual veins are cut off, which is the best position for time travelers to develop technology and fight ferocious beasts. It is also the best position to transform the world. As long as Western religions can strongly support it, hundreds of millions of people can develop various Qi methods. It is also good for thousands of people to repair the earth's veins. Even if the spiritual veins of the West are cut off, it is also good to write the West as a perfect world, that kind of wild world. Similarly, if the spiritual veins are thin, it is also good to transform the world. It is also good to use the blood of vicious beasts to transform the qualifications. Together with the saints, we can transform the world ~

The plot of Bixiao is simply unbelievable. After just a few words of chatting, I got lovesick in a fantasy world. It is just as deceptive as the plot between the Empress and Luffy in One Piece. I'm really speechless, my mind is full of bad things and I don't know how to spit them out. The other previously written plots are pretty good, but there are few western-taught themes. Generally speaking, Western saints first establish a religion and then make great aspirations before becoming saints. The author has changed that here.

To be honest, although I don't like Western religions, I feel that if there are no plug-ins in the prehistoric times, it will most likely be the easiest to practice in Western religions, followed by Jiejiao. However, if you want to practice advanced inheritance, it is estimated that 99.9∞% Will not be possible unless the talent is really good.

To be honest, the subject matter is very pleasing, but the writing style is too poor. If the understanding of Buddhist philosophy is linked to promotion, it will lead to becoming a god. At present, the author does not have that kind of literacy, and the writing is very white and white.

The subject matter is okay, but the results are not. Now is the age of making money. No one is looking at you and you have no motivation to write. Don't tell me that you are not short of money. Let's forget it. Anyway, there are almost no people who are not short of money.

This, I've never seen anything like this before. Take a look

"Honghuangliu" is badly written. I wonder if the author has any new ideas.

Isn't Demon Emperor Jun the Emperor of Heaven? The supreme boss who dominates the three realms and six realms? During the collapse of the Great Shang Dynasty, Daozu directly took action to destroy the Heavenly Court ruled by the demon clan, and then supported Haotian to ascend the throne of Heavenly Emperor and conferred the title of God on the gods.

Why didn't we choose multiple heroines?

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?