Tokyo Is Reborn with Superpowers

I read it because of the recommendation of the daily guide. The related book is of course the book next door, "Tokyo: Weekly Updated Super Powers". The advantages and disadvantages of the book next door are obvious. The disadvantage is that there is no long-term plan, so I was actually very happy when I saw this book. Since this book draws on the book next door, it should be easy to be better than the previous one! ...... Can you do it? In fact, this book has its own track There are a lot of things I want to say, so I can only talk about them one by one in an unorganized manner ① This book is an ancient urban novel about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, rather than the recent I-don't-eat-beef invincible novel. ②The protagonist's ability in this book is growth type, and he has not yet reached the power of being invincible in the world at this stage. However, because the author borrowed the plot of the invincible novel next door, the content cannot be self-consistent. In order to solve this problem, the author gave a very A serious explanation makes it less interesting For example, the protagonist goes out to kill bad guys at night because the protagonist hates bad guys, or hates evil... I am not saying that this reason is bad or incorrect, just that I personally don't find it interesting enough ③The protagonist will search for property after killing the bad guys. This is a characteristic of ancient urban literature, that is, the protagonist's growth is all-round growth, the growth of abilities, property, and connections ④The plot pushes the protagonist forward, not the main character. Characters drive the plot, which is a characteristic of ancient urban supernatural literature ⑤The characterization of the character next door is subtraction, while the characterization of this book is addition. Regardless of whether the author next door will use this character or not, he will add the description of this character in the previous article. If it is not used later in the article, then just disappear or write him dead. The author of this article uses addition and directly introduces new characters when needed. The advantage lies in the exquisiteness of the character relationship, but the disadvantage is that the character relationship is not broad enough. This is also the case in ancient urban literature. Features ⑥The girl with no foreshadowing betrays the protagonist. This is why I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 27. The protagonist helped a girl who was bullied earlier. At this time, the girl came to the protagonist to confess her love. I can accept this part of the plot. The problem is that the girl is introduced later as a very powerful ninja and can fight well. She also followed the protagonist for a period of time before confessing to the protagonist. There is no foreshadowing in this plot. Ah... This is a characteristic of ancient urban literature ⑦ The author is eager to inform readers of his rigorous worldview, which leads him to directly write a large section of the setting in the early stage, rather than writing the setting in a way of plot advancement. The characteristics of ancient supernatural power writing are Summary, because I have only seen 27 chapters, so I can't rate it. I can only say that it is the kind of ordinary ancient and early writing. An urban supernatural novel about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. If it were to be on the level of "Hidden Killer", I would probably kill the author to write it. However, if an urban novelist of San Shao's level is about the same, those who are interested can look forward to the follow-up development, because it can be seen that the author is alive. I just say that I am not very interested in this type of article right now.

What are you writing about in this update of your new book? Let's go to work in a factory.

But what Aizen said was wrong. People always place their unattainable hopes on the strong, so leaders come from this; And the strong also place their unattainable hopes on the stronger, so there is the king of all people, and further, there is the god of all. So the correct answer is Humans are monkeys who want to pretend to be gods; Gods are humans who protect everything; (It seems that I have received a lot of doubts, so I will add the last paragraph: Therefore, we are both prisoners, and the Soul King is in the Soul King Palace , and Aizen is in Mujian. If you still can't understand, let's explain it with a common saying: Nobility is the epitaph of the noble, Despicable is the passport of the despicable) I really like your Mu Qiang's distorted face.

The protagonist's name was Shinto Souji at first, but he changed his name directly after 5 chapters. The first five chapters and the following ones are not from the same book at all.

The big change is your lie. It's two books.

Why are Chapter 5 and Chapter 6 directly separated? Do you feel like there are a few storylines missing in the middle?

It's better to re-open the whole text because it looks like two novels

What the hell? Mixing two books? As I watched, it suddenly turned into another book!

What the hell? The first 20 chapters and the following chapters are not the same book. The plot and the protagonist are different. This is ridiculous.

So please don't keep books, it's really easy to keep them to death now.

You can refer to the book "Those who do whatever they want". For the protagonist who has extraordinary power and extraordinary power, doing things behind the scenes has no other meaning except to enjoy the fun of doing things. Instead of doing this, it would be better to become an ancestor and enjoy the life of an extraordinary and powerful person.

It's a good-looking author, but I hope to change it later. It's already the main text, and the strength needs to be improved, otherwise it will be uncomfortable. It seems that there are many female protagonists, and I hope there will be more.

Chapter 43, Shinto General Secretary, Chapter 44, Minamoto General Secretary, and the content before and after chapters 43 and 44 are completely incompatible. They are completely two books. How did they copy and paste? This kind of book has the nerve to ask us for recommendations and monthly passes! ～～(ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

The books are very similar, I hope there are differences later

Isn't this a completely different book?

It looks okay so far. I can see that I have borrowed from the book next door. I hope I can write my own style Updates are indeed a bit slow. Come on.

Chapters 10 and 11, the previous text does not match the latter, and the protagonist suddenly changed his name. It has a strong sense of separation. Will anyone really read this if this is not changed?

Can I add a Ding? Can I add some essence? Do you understand?

What are you writing about? Most of the first three chapters are a bunch of nonsense. Go home and screw some screws.

I know you changed it, but I didn't expect it to be changed to another book.

I personally think there's nothing wrong with the change, it looks pretty good. Because I have forgotten the last book, I am reading the new one now.

God is God, and those gods you call are just magicians, or simply imagined by some liars. As an atheist, I respect ghosts and gods and stay away from them, but in my knowledge, the next moment, the earth, the sun, the silver The river system, or even the entire universe, was immediately destroyed, smashed, and ground into powder. Gods would not "look down at it." What's more, the so-called human beings are just a speck of dust in the universe, with a little "mold" parasitic on it, which is meaningless.

Those who update once a day basically cannot guarantee that it will be cool in the morning and evening.