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To advance the plot, what are you writing about all the time?
In the beginning, it is unreasonable for the popular heroine to get married after meeting her for the first time. No matter how much you talk about it, just give it a similar reason. Don't emphasize this matter over and over again. The more detailed you write, the more loopholes you will find. The lightbulbs in the orphanage fell and were torn out. Then we will quickly advance the plot and it will be easier to write when we get to the cool point. Stop writing about how to make breakfast or knock on the door. Too watery. Just like a running account. What is the main plot to do? Go to the entertainment industry or study law or something to advance the plot. Stop writing down your daily routine. You can't wait to write down what time you went to the toilet and how many drops you peed.
Forehead. It's this kind of fake marriage and then falling in love with each other. If there is a fake marriage and then they break up after a few years, the taste is almost the same 😁
I feel that this book is quite good, but the positioning of the heroine is not likable. If the heroine is an actor, it will screen out a large part of the pure love party. Unless the author wants to write a harem story, otherwise, write a single heroine. If the heroine is an actor, it is a poisonous point, so your book has never been published. If I am an old bookworm now, why can I bear to read this type of book? Because I am not invested in this role at all, if my wife is an actor, she will definitely mind and feel conflicted.
It's too bland and doesn't attract the desire to continue reading.
First of all, your wife is a celebrity and you also have a car. Why do you take a taxi instead of driving when you go out? Aren't you afraid of being recognized?
The layout of the male protagonist's home, book friends who are thinking about dressing up in poverty can refer to it.
Simple style, the author still likes this decoration style
A must-see! And answer some book friends' doubts and a little setting of this book
The first question: The heroine is an actress, but will there be any kissing scenes? Although the heroine is an actress, she does not have any kissing scenes or intimate contact scenes. She will transform later due to some reasons. This has actually been foreshadowed in the previous article. The second question: the pace of this book. In fact, this book tends to be semi-slow and easy-going, but it is said that the timeline will pass very quickly due to the heroine's work, so I think the pace can be a little slower when the male and female protagonists get along, but not too slow. Writing too fast will not be able to write about the relationship between the male and female protagonists. However, for some male or female partners, such as Wang Shuliang, the pace of their interactions will be faster. The third question: Is this book positioned as fictional entertainment or real-life entertainment? In fact, it is not easy to distinguish the author. After all, this is the first time that the author has tried to write this kind of urban article. Because the author is a law student, relatively speaking, he will have a slightly stronger awareness of copyright. For example, the lyrics of the heroine's original song "Evening Breeze" were all edited by the author, so the positioning should still be an overhead entertainment article, right? The fourth question: Regarding the three views of the male protagonist of this book. The author's personal outlook on life is quite good, so the characters in my novel, whether they are male and female protagonists or male and female partners, actually have pretty good outlook on life, and they won't follow the same old tricks, such as the white lotus, to disgust readers. Let's read the novel I just want to be happy and joyful. I hope that my readers will not be happy when reading my article, but at least it will not make them uncomfortable. Therefore, when you see some toxic points, you may wish to mention them to the author for reference. I will refer to the good suggestions. The fifth question: Is this book a cuckold novel or a dog-licking novel? The author is actually a pure love warrior and cannot accept any cuckold plot. The dog-licking novel is even more outrageous. Some book friends don't read it carefully and think that the male protagonist is just licking the female protagonist if he treats her better. I really want to refute this. The male and female protagonists are husband and wife by agreement. I think the least they can do is to be polite and respectful to each other. To put it bluntly, if they don't respect each other, how can they get the certificate? What's more, if the male protagonist is not nice to the female protagonist, there is no basis for a warm relationship. The author is quite disgusted with fast-food love, so I wanted to let the male and female protagonists in the novel have a process of emotional warming before falling in love, so that the female protagonist does not fall in love with the male protagonist inexplicably. Last question: When will this book be updated? Because the author is a college student and has already secured a graduate degree, he is sometimes busy with his studies, but he can still keep it updated twice a day. The update time is at 0 am, 12 noon, and 6 pm every day. In these three time periods, sometimes it is too slow and the update will be stuck. However, the author is about to go on winter vacation, so the update time can be fixed later. Thank you to all the book friends for reading this, please trust the author and I guarantee that you will not lose money if you enter the trap! Finally, I wish all book friends all the best and happiness in everything. May you live thousands of years and never miss spring.
I have played a female lead and a male lead in a costume drama, and I was fired as CP. Isn't it nonsense that there is no kissing scene or intimate scene?
What I wrote is just like boiled water, no mood swings at all.
Pig's trotters are in law, so are you afraid of being violently attacked by fans online? 😏
Do you know why I chose this one? Because if you find a girlfriend who is in the industry, the protagonist will definitely cause trouble in the industry. Come on, if you are married inside and outside the industry, the one outside the industry must be involved in entertainment. The key to those entertainment films is to copy songs and variety shows to help the heroine. I vomited. So I support the author in filling in the blank areas!
The writing was too stiff and felt awkward. It would have been better if it was more natural. This is a daily routine of love, not a running account.
Refining
Let's make a complaint: Regarding the flash marriage and encounter between the male and female protagonists, there are still some flaws.
The male protagonist dabbles in two or three professions, not too many, otherwise it will feel fresh if he is versatile.
Come on, come on
Comfortable😌
I have been reading various fantasy, suspenseful, and military-city novels for several years, and many of the emotional lines are too complicated and strange. Suddenly, I felt good reading this kind of fresh and fresh novel that is basically a pure love life style. Hahahahahahahahahahahaha. It's very natural. Compared with most urban novels that are about getting into trouble just for the sake of getting into trouble, this one is really comfortable to read 👏 At least for the time being, I have read almost a hundred chapters 👏
Looking at it, Chapter 175 is gone 😰
Hee hee
Later, I will write about the protagonist going to participate in an exciting offer and becoming a tutor lawyer, so I will write about the latest season.
After seeing Chapters 5 and 6 after it was released, one of the advantages of this book is that there are no poisonous points, but it is also not attractive. I thought that if I persisted, I would be able to read it, but it just didn't feel right. There were obviously no poisonous points, and it was okay to read, but I just couldn't get into it. Looking back carefully, my personal feelings are as follows. First, the cohabitation life of the male and female protagonists is not like a man and a woman, but like two men living together. As a love theme, even if it is a daily novel, it is not this daily method. Second, the priorities are unclear. It takes a long time to describe the daily life of the male protagonist and his male classmates. It is really speechless. I feel that the daily life of the male protagonist and his male classmates is not necessarily less than the daily life of the male and female protagonists. This is quite rare in daily novels. Third, it is the heroine's agent. There are two reasons for this. On the one hand, due to personal reasons, I naturally don't have a good impression of the heroine's agent, but this agent appears very frequently. On the other hand, when the male and female protagonists are having a sweet daily routine, there is basically a 70% chance that the agent will show up to show off their face. To put it bluntly, the priority is unclear. In general, I have seen about 5 chapters on the shelf. The male and female protagonists have no feelings about their daily love life, but each light bulb is brighter than the other. Coupled with a lot of non-romance routines that have little effect on relationships, my feeling about this book is that I can read it, but it is boring.
What is the answer to the book club group?
The Qin Junshuo I filled in is wrong, and the Ashuo is wrong as well. What's going on with the author?