Hong Kong Crossover: The Stormy Road of the Underworld

Talented writers are the kind who are too ambitious and not down to earth. Going in the opposite direction of the trend. Other highlights, because the heart energy is limited by itself. It's not that I can't write, the moral sense in his novels is too strong. This is impossible to say. A young and Dangerous comic. You have a strong sense of morality, even stronger than the drama. The results can be better, but how to say it? You damn sense of social responsibility. I can't even find a little girl, what can I say? This is still a novel. It's so noble, there's nothing I can complain about.

Suddenly, after chapter 40, I feel so watery, not as good as before.

The biggest problem for the author is that the protagonist follows the plot and you don't have your own main line. You come back for revenge. What is your plan? What are you going to do? How are you doing it? Look at what you wrote, arresting people and killing people are all done openly, arresting Shuai Chao, a rich man who sells flour, you arrest him, you have a gun but don't resist, if he dies, the money and goods are gone, no one will trouble you? Crossing the sea to kill someone without even changing your clothes would be considered cool, but that would mean you are brainless. You will be arrested as soon as you become famous. Things can be done, but they must be done in secret without leaving any evidence. When you write something, you have to sink yourself into it, learn more about it and find more information, instead of floating on the surface and missing a lot of details.

There are more than 50 collections in the backend. If you feel you have any bad points after reading it, please tell me. The word count is smaller now, and it is easier to adjust. As a book writer, some of the bad points you see are from different angles, and sometimes I can't notice them. Also, there have been very few Hong Kong variety shows in Qidian in the past two years, so there is no reference for comparison, so I basically rely on everyone to point out the shortcomings. 1: The main plot of the first part is revenge, but the protagonist prepares an honest revenge so that Uncle Xing can also experience the feeling of being abandoned by the society, so there will be a process of accumulation of strength in the early stage. 2: The character problem of the protagonist is that the protagonist will be cruel to scum and damned people, such as She Zaiwei. But for some normal rivers and lakes fights, such as white pigs, they will not be killed. 3: In addition to the movie plot, some characters from Hong Kong dramas will be added, such as (Ding Xie, Li Zhaotian, Ma Shounan, Huo Jingliang, Yip Wing Tim, Ding Qiao, etc.). 4: The villain, I definitely want to try my best to write the villain with an IQ, such as the first Ding Ye who appears, but I can only say that I try my best (writing problem) 5: The protagonist has a golden finger, but it will not be too wide. That is, if it reaches the strength value of Li Jie and Tian Yangsheng, ordinary people can fight about ten. 6: The protagonist is a native of Xiangjiang. He only inherited the memory of film and television dramas, so he has no skills in making money in Bitcoin, stock trading, and real estate. 7: Face change, the main character's brother is an undercover agent. Firstly, in order to cope with the review, the first chapter was reviewed 5 times before passing, and a large section of Chapter 19 was also deleted. Secondly, it was explained that the protagonist is not actually an undercover agent anymore, and the relationship with Gong Jiapei is to have a line that can lead to many good police movies and TV series. 8: Regarding the heroine issue, in the past, Hong Kong drama heroines were written around the roles played by Qiu Shuzhen, Gigi Lai, and Vivian Chow, but I want to write something different. Currently, the tentative ones include Sister Hong, Sister E, and Senator Shek from the Bay Island. 9: There will be a mainland plot in the middle, which will be introduced through Song Shichang in Zhongnanhai Bodyguard. In the early stage, it will involve Zhao Hongbing, Zhang Yue, and Liu Huaqiang. Later there will be Uncle Dong and Gao Qiqiang. 10: There will also be some Korean plots, such as Ding Qing, Lao Mian, Zheng Qitie, Zhang Qian, etc. 11: On the Japanese side, there will be a line leading to the hot-blooded district, through He Xin's daughter, but it won't be too much. In addition, the Yamaguchi group will also be involved. Don't worry about updates. I wrote more than 40,000 words in three days. I will not save the manuscript. I will post as much as I write. You can invest with confidence. If you have recommendation votes, it is best to vote for it. Of course, the most important thing is that I hope you can comment more.

Authors should learn to draw pictures themselves. This is very important to increase the sense of immersion.

I didn't want to read it after reading the introduction, it was so frustrating. I read the novel to feel happy and to make up for the regrets in the movie. This is like being tortured. What a bullshit.

Is there Mona?

It's best not to keep the flies away. With his mouth, if he offends people as soon as he opens his mouth, then he is offending people or on the way to offending them.

The continuity of the plot is so poor. When I reached chapter 60, I felt that there were 4-5 incoherent things. It seemed as if a paragraph suddenly jumped while the novel was being written. I was confused.

It's very simple