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What I can't understand the most about Zhichou's novels is that one by one is dressed as the legitimate son of a prince, and the ultimate goal is to marry a fifth-rank official concubine. Like the original hero, you go to brothels every day, marry ten or eight concubines, raise a few concubines, and have several illegitimate children. If you don't marry a legitimate legitimate daughter, you can marry it. How much effort do you have to do?

You can write a concubine of the Hou family, even the second son. The family difference between the only son of the powerful Hou family and a concubine of a fifth-rank official is too big. The eldest daughter of the Sheng family is not worthy of the role of the protagonist. Even if Gu Er fails the ranking and has an illegitimate wife, the eldest lady they want to plan for him is the granddaughter of the current court elder. , This is a perfect match. If you look at the original novel, Gu Tingye was married to his dead wife for the second time, and Sheng Minglan was still married to someone high. You can write that the main character is a concubine or that the second son becomes rich after getting engaged. In modern times, it is equivalent to the only son of a deputy national boss marrying the illegitimate daughter of a department chief.

Read the first chapter and then read the table of contents. The original plot has not been changed, it is still the same old routine of forcibly inserting the protagonist and then recruiting the daughter. Mainly because you have a writing mission, it won't change the plot, and I don't even dare to think about it. If the protagonist can do well in the final mission, it can only be a bad review.

In fact, it is better for Minglan to accompany Gu Lao Er

Chapter 1 2 tasks. 1. To make Minglan happy, has the author thought about how to achieve happiness? Second, everyone has an ending. The completion of the mission depends on everyone's ending. Aren't Wei Xiaoniang and the baby in her belly the biggest variables? As long as you write them to death, neither of your two tasks will be satisfactory.

Continue to update. The heroine Sheng Minglan is very good.

I like the heroine Minglan

Throughout the history of the Song Dynasty, Yanmen Pass was almost always in the hands of the Liao State. Well, you said you were trying to do it on an empty basis, but the problem is that you have to follow the basic rules when trying to do so. Yanmen Pass is a pass on the Great Wall, and the Liao soldiers fought from north to south. You go The support is from south to north, with Yanmen Pass in the middle. If tens of thousands of cavalry can bypass Yanmen Pass and directly attack the Liao army camp, then this pass is of no use. The Liao people are not fools. They can just go around it.

The more I read this book, the more inexplicable it becomes! The plot is a little far-fetched in places!

Many plots are too far-fetched, especially the emotional scene at the beginning, which is full of dog-licking and obscenity, and also seems very abrupt. There are also many characters in the article whose words and deeds really do not consider the background of the times and dare to say anything casually.

I really can't write about Minglan, there are too many written about her.

No, in the first chapter, the protagonist leads the troops and makes a name for himself. In the second chapter, the protagonist is still young. You are simply insulting our IQ and eyes. Brother Secondly, the generals of the Song Dynasty will not be able to command the army for a long time, let alone without supervisors and civil servants. You really look down on Zhao Kuangyin, and you are still a black guard. . . .