The Battle Begins with Obtaining the Immortal Thief of Liuku

Don't talk about Xiao Yan being so great and upright. Xiao Yan once said to Xiao Yu something like "I want to rape you." As for the people in the family who ridiculed him, why didn't Xiao Yan think about his own reasons? Before he was defeated by the Dou Qi, Xiao Yan was arrogant, complacent, and looked like a toy. To be honest, I really can't see how he has the maturity and stability of a time traveler's soul. He is only wretched and unbearable. If Yao Lao Fei Dou Qi hadn't tested him for three years, what good would he have had. Furthermore, after being deposed, Xiao Zhan, as the patriarch of the clan, openly used public funds for private purposes, misappropriating public funds and other family resources for a useless person, which was even more outrageous. It is understandable that he became a genius before he was deposed and took up more resources in the clan. However, in the three years after he was deposed, the things Xiao Zhan did were really unreasonable. He only had eyes for Yan'er, and he was very unqualified as a clan leader. Don't blame others for ridiculing you after you fell into despair. It is true that this family has problems in life and work. If it weren't for the aura of the protagonist, he would have disappeared without a trace!

I don't understand that when Nalan Yanran breaks off the engagement, the protagonist wants to speak out. In the original novel, Xiao Xun'er, who is so protective of her husband, only said one sentence after the end. The protagonist's intervention in the middle is not only useless but also embarrassing.

I read a lot of Dou Po fanfics. As long as anti-inflammatory drugs are in the same family, the plot of breaking off the engagement will inevitably be written. To be honest, it's a bit boring, so why can't I write something else?

The author's knowledge and depth of understanding of the original work of Dou Po is average. From this perspective, writing Dou Po fan fiction is a bit reluctant. The depth of understanding of each character in the original work is about 60 to 70%. I have been reading online novels for almost 20 years. I have also read Dou Po twice and listened to the audio book once, so I am quite familiar with this book. Therefore, I will review this fanfic for Everbright readers and the author of this book, for your reference only. The ability to control the plot and shape the protagonist is a bit weak, and should be at a lower-middle level among all online article authors. It is above average among Dou Po fans. In terms of writing style, it ranks at the lowest level among all online article authors. It is above average among Dou Po fans. The creativity of the plot is currently following the original work, and I have not seen the level of plot creation. There are some poisonous content, but compared to other Dou Po fandoms, the poisonous content is relatively small! Rating: Seven points for understanding of the original work, five points for writing ability, five points for protagonist creation, six points for plot control, and unknown plot innovation ability. Summary: This is a writing work by a not too mature author. It's impossible to expect great results, but if you keep updating, you may be able to make a living (one or two thousand a month). Recommendations to readers: It should be noted that the level of writers of fan fiction is generally not high. After all, few of those with high level will write about fighting against the fan, thereby reducing the share of monetary profits. Therefore, those who like Dou Po fan can read it and support the author. This fanfic is above average among all Dou Po fanfics. For readers who like to read Dou Po fan fiction, it is worth a read. For discerning readers, this book is not recommended. The book itself has many shortcomings. Advice to the author: Make more progress and hope to get better and better. The book itself should have more free chapters, focusing on practice and progress.