The Forbidden Area for Stealing That Covers the Sky

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Call him Jade Emperor! The main character's Tao is based on the Holy Spirit's Stone Embryo. The advanced point is "Jade". "Stone" is too ugly, and there is also a stone emperor who uses his honorable name. It's better to give the ancient queen a code name that is more in line with the times, so the Jade Emperor sounds nicer (it's okay to be called the emperor, there was a Western Emperor in ancient times, and it can still be used in mythology)

The setting is good, but it's a pity that the writing is the same as "Liu Shui Zhang". Zhe Tian's main feature is the majestic description of training and battle scenes. What you wrote is not as good as "Even Fighting to Break the Sky".

Why does it seem that the more I look at him, the more he seems to be reincarnated into the Feathered Emperor?

I checked the original text, and it was never mentioned anywhere that Fuxi was the first emperor in ancient times. And the original text doesn't say who is the first emperor in ancient times, I can set it like this. But the problem is that this is a second guess. But what Dao Yan clearly said was that he became enlightened one or two million years ago, and he appeared too early. Even if we take the middle value, he is still a character from 1.5 Million years ago. This is indeed difficult to balance. I will consider it. Secondly, the Heavenly Demon Emperor was made up by me. The main plot of this book is indeed unclear at the moment, and my outline is indeed not well organized. It's also quite embarrassing, but there is no outline for the road of life. You can just be the protagonist and follow the trend. In addition, I feel that cultivation can be regarded as a way to connect the plot, and it can barely be regarded as the main line.

The protagonist wanders around blindly just because he wants to improve his cultivation. He doesn't feel comfortable using plug-ins to improve his cultivation. This is absolutely ridiculous.

Shen Nong Comes Here. First of all, this book has no heroine. There are three slightly ambiguous women, but they are just like normal conversations. They are old virgins who have lived for hundreds of thousands of years and were ridiculed by immortals. The whole book feels inexplicable. There are no grand scenes. There are more than a dozen to The siege of Zun is basically a pass. Most of the time, fists are used to coax each other and people are hit. The weapons are basically useless. It is really boring. It is all based on the content and the basic original plot of defeating the first person in the Queen's Kaidi Road to attract me. But it is really inexplicable. There is a fairyland. The residual block is used as a stepping point. It is already much stronger than the Immortal Emperor. The entire Feixian Waterfall in the Zhetian Realm can interfere with the Zhetian Realm. I have to create a restricted area to return the king and act as a nanny. Moreover, two kings dare to break into the restricted area. I really can't stand it anymore. It's disgusting. The Demon Emperor Snow in front of me Yueqing also said that he only saved the girl once, but this time it made me sick. To be honest, Xue Yueqing's character did not regret the death of the Taoist companion after becoming enlightened. This is not Xue Yueqing. This book can only be used as hay. Read it in Shuhuang, it is really dull.

I don't quite understand why the protagonist can't kill the emperor. And when there was no conflict, I wanted to kill him. It's true that Immortal killed many ancient emperors for the sake of cultivating Taoism, but what's wrong with cultivating Taoism by hook or by crook? It's normal. Ye Fan killed a lot of innocent people in his hands, and they were all killed on Dilu. Why doesn't anyone scold Ye Fan? Emotionally, you all think that it is right for Di Lu Zhengfeng to kill fellow travelers, and that it is wrong for Xian Lu Qixuo to kill a few fellow travelers. It's just darkness, right? What about double standards? Besides, the Immortal Emperor has never initiated a dark turmoil. Much stronger than those Dark Supremes. Why did Ye Fanfei want to be killed? One is because Ye Fan was sneak attacked by the immortal, and the other is that Ye Fan and the black dog are brothers, and the owner of the black dog is Wu Shi, and Wu Shi was also stolen by the immortal. That's why they are mortal enemies. That's why Ye Fan and the others insisted on killing the emperor. But the protagonist of this book had no reason to become enemies with Immortal from the very beginning. The author himself wrote the part in the book where the protagonist kills the Dark Lord. If people don't see the protagonist being so fierce, they won't provoke him. As a result, the protagonist insists on getting more revenge. You don't think your record is brilliant enough, right? You have to kill the Emperor Lele.

It feels like the author wrote this before even reading the original work. It doesn't matter that the first emperor in ancient times was not Fuxi. I tolerated Daoyan's appearance at the beginning. It's outrageous that you brought a black dog with you at the beginning of Wu Shi. Wu Shi was a dog that was adopted in his later years in the first life, okay? The timeline is very messy. It doesn't matter what you set up if the original work didn't mention it. You didn't write it correctly even if it was clearly stated in the original work. You obviously lacked preparation.

I wish you a sword at the end of every novel and a happy marriage.

Let me share my personal opinion. If Zhe Tian wants to write a long story, it is best to write as much content as possible before becoming an emperor, write a little more before becoming an emperor and becoming an immortal, and end it quickly after becoming an immortal. After all, they are from the same family as Zhetian. The protagonist is usually invincible after becoming emperor, let alone becoming an immortal. Invincible writing is not easy to write. If the writing style is not good, it will make people feel that it is quite weak. What does this book say? The protagonist is about to become a king, what are you planning to write next? Should I write something from the perspective of a disciple, or should I quickly fly through time from the perspective of a bystander and stretch the timeline to Ye Fan's period? When it comes to Ye Fan's era, how do you plan to write? Seeing that you wrote about Weirdness and the Great Sacrifice earlier, did you just write down the content from the original period and then fight against Weirdness with Ye Fan and the others? If not, how can you write it later? By the time of the original work, the protagonist is probably the Immortal King Then the problem comes again. If it is to fight against the weird and the big sacrifice, multiple protagonists are of little use. At most, it is not as miserable as what the red-haired monster wrote. We still have to wait until the kidney deficiency period to counterattack. Then I might as well just watch the kidney deficiency fanfic. What if instead of fighting against Weiyi and Daji, we write about Ye Fan and the others, what will the protagonist do? Be a nanny? To be honest, I personally think this book is about to be written. The best content after the protagonist becomes emperor is to sleep and transform. Then, time quickly transitions to Ye Fan's period, waking up several times in the middle to make arrangements, and then watching Ye Fan and others grow up, become immortals, and then enter the fairyland together. In this way, the end of the book will be much easier to write. Is there any use for the protagonist to enter the fairyland so early? Useless! The writing is like a book, quite watery

This book is a eunuch!

Do you dare to call me Shi Hao🤓

In the final analysis, the supreme being in the restricted area that covers the sky is just that, Emperor Puxin. With the qualifications of a True Immortal Emperor, you can find a new evolutionary path when you become a Supreme (quasi-Emperor).

Ye Fan was born, only to find that everyone in the world was his enemy

Don't write anything later. Going back to the chaotic ancient times, these are almost ruined. He just insists on taking advantage of No. 10'S cause and effect.

You can write about the ruthless emperor as the heroine or the father of the Wu Shi Emperor.

I think it's good that the author can make the decision to break away from the original work, step out of the comfort zone, and not continue to stay in the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths. At least he is quite motivated. But the subsequent plot still needs to be carefully polished. After all, you are writing a fan story, not a pure original. This time period is very embarrassing. If you don't want to write about going back to the past, waiting for the Nine Dragons to pull the coffin and sailing, or traveling through the holy ruins, it will be difficult to feel happy. After all, everyone is mainly here for the theme of the trilogy. Blindly original plot is counterproductive.

Mars at this point in time should be an ancient planet of life, not as desolate as in the original work. Some people on the Internet speculate that the Fuxi Dragon Monument was destroyed during the war on Mars.

Refund

Is it worthy of us?

ε=(´ο｀*))) Alas, the author swung his sword and thought about it, but he still hasn't returned yet

The author has gone into the factory and cut himself with a knife. This knife is really cruel.

What the hell Refund

Refund

I don't feel bad, there are thirteen Taoist friends above me. What's more, there is still the first one on the list 😊

In fact, it is better to be more cliched, just stay in the immortal world, and then the water wave begins and the ruthless Qing Emperor Ye Fan, and finally they, the Red Dust Immortal and the protagonist Immortal King, open the gate of the immortal world together and finish the show.

Just a few days after raising it, it actually died.

I won't even read the new book, old eunuch.

It's April Fool's Day, you better be kidding us!