Douluo: Martial Spirit Egg, a Drop of Blood Can Hatch a Martial Spirit

Why did Chen Ze travel through time? Is he live broadcasting in Wuhun Continent now?

I had an idea before, asking a Blue Silver Grass spirit master to plant Blue Silver Grass on the island to transform the environment and let the Blue Silver Grass martial spirit evolve.

With the protagonist's current strength and identity, it would be ideal to cooperate with the Qibao Glass Sect. Without background and backing, I'm afraid he will be eaten up and wiped out.

To be honest, I don't understand what you want to do. You just take the blood and leave. You have to hang out in front of Tang Hao and show that you are the Blue Silver Emperor to see if he kills you, right? What do you think? Not to mention that Lan Yincao can only have one emperor, but if you steal the throne from his wife, what do you want him to think? You blocked Tang San's future path, Tang Hao didn't want to give you a blow? Forcibly lowering Tang Hao's IQ, the protagonist is really "resourceful"

Aren't you making enough money? Give up the idea of ​​massages and concealed weapons

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It was okay at first, but later on, everyone knew that Tang Hao was near Tang San, and he was still there forcing Lai Lai, speechless.

The power of the Golden Holy Dragon must be expressed. Don't just look at the elements. Gold and silver have special meanings in Douluo Continent.

As I said in the comments before, I can't explain the poisonous aspects of these two chapters with just the 150 words in the comment area, so I'll just talk about them here. First of all, the protagonist is not stable enough. Douluo fans basically come to see the gang of Tang family and Yu Xiaotan suffer. Therefore, Douluo fans basically have a default rule, that is, the protagonist must crush the opponent, even if it cannot be crushed by combat power, it must be crushed by IQ. Author, you have limited the protagonist's combat power in the early stage. The poisonous point in the next two chapters is the group's intelligence reduction. Although it may be because you are not good at writing storylines other than the plot, so you instinctively follow the plot of the original work, but forcibly writing the plot for the sake of the plot is a taboo in writing novels, and it is also a poisonous point that many people cannot understand. The personalities and psychological activities of Yu Xiaogang and Tang San actually do not need to be forced to change by scripting the plot. Yu Xiaogang himself is an abandoned son, his nature is weak, and Tang San is a hypocrite. You have to understand the meaning of hypocrite. In the early stage, he was just a man in sheep's clothing. Wolf, so he pays great attention to the interest relationship in the early stage. After learning that the protagonist has a mysterious skill and there is no conflict with Tang San in the early stage, the normal plot should be that Yu Xiaotan goes to show off his theory, is pointed out by the protagonist and becomes angry, and then Tang San demands an apology from the protagonist, and finally turns against him. The tone of Douluo's book is also relatively clear. Soul masters have a very important position in the civilian community, so the guard office in the original work is actually a poisonous point. Generally speaking, fans need to avoid the poisonous points in the original work as much as possible, and your writing amplifies the poisonous points in the original work, which leads to a serious personality split between Yu Xiaogan and Tang San, and they forcefully create conflicts with the protagonist. This shows that the protagonist himself does not have his own concepts, and does not conform to the sense of maturity of the two reincarnated generations. The whole process feels like a child playing house. These two white-eyed wolves forcibly created the plot for the sake of the plot, while the protagonist forcibly changed the tone for the sake of fabricating the plot. Later, it led to a conflict between Tang Hao and the protagonist. In the previous two situations where the plot collapsed, no matter how good you write Tang Hao's plot, it will still make readers feel awkward, which is also a poisonous point. If you want to position Xiao Wu as the heroine, then you should not conflict with Tang San at this time. Instead, you need to create conflicts in the later stage to improve the protagonist's social status. The place where the conflict is created needs a "life and death crisis" to reflect it. This plot can be assigned to Er Ming, and it also provides a long enough plot logic for the protagonist's growth value. But the protagonist is too weak. When he was weak, he did not temporarily avoid Tang Hao's thoughts and insisted on saving face. This became a manifestation of "childishness". Don't you think the protagonist's [character that serves the plot] is extremely explosive in the novel? If you don't want to be a heroine, or want to open a harem, then you should let the protagonist go out alone in the early stage. With the funds earned previously and the Wuhun Palace subsidy, he needs to go out alone in the early stage to temporarily separate the relationship with the Tang family and Yu Xiaogang. You didn't achieve both endings. The plot of opening a store can be said to be impossible in the first place. It was written a little badly from the beginning, and you forcibly created conflicts in the middle that made the plot deviate from the plot, and the poisonous points naturally emerged from it. Author, if you have nothing to do, you can read these two chapters by yourself. You should be able to feel the contradictions. The two plots of Yu Xiaogan [who suddenly stopped being weak and became tough] and Tang San [who stopped being a hypocrite and indirectly became a thug] led to the change of the protagonist [becoming an honest person who was bullied]. You have arranged such a very poisonous NPC plot for the protagonist, which is really fatal. It is impossible to change it. If you change these two chapters, you may have to change everything later. . .

There is no logic at all, and I still like to follow the original work. Apart from the egg at the beginning, there is no buying point. The character of the protagonist keeps changing, sometimes he is wise, and sometimes he is mentally retarded.

Your positive energy label appeared in Douluo fandom, and it made me tremble with fear.

It's all poison. If you haven't seen it, run away!

I feel there is something wrong with the setting. The Golden Holy Dragon is stronger than the Blue Silver Emperor First of all, what exactly the Golden Holy Dragon is needs to be understood. First of all, the names are divided into the Golden Holy Dragon King and the Light Holy Dragon King (because these two appear in the original work), so they should be their hybrids. According to the fact that Emperor Tian has the ultimate darkness, it can be deduced that they have ultimate gold and light respectively But Douluo II's Moon is not the ultimate light. It can be deduced that the Light Holy Dragon is the retreat of the Light Holy Dragon King. (There is a bug here. It is written in Baidu Encyclopedia that Munn has the ultimate light. In Chapter 68 of the original book, it is written that there are only three in the Shrek Perpetual Calendar. I don't know who is wrong), so the golden holy dragon is a hybrid and cannot have ultimate attributes, so he only has It may be the 8th level martial spirit (the ultimate is 9, God's gift is not within the scope of discussion). The Blue Silver Emperor has a very strong vitality. Even if it is not the ultimate, it should be a little bit close. Therefore, it is impossible for the 8th level to have as big a gap as the author wrote

It becomes more and more complicated later on. The ratio of female martial arts souls to souls is already awesome. Why hide it and join forces? This is too far-fetched. A level 39 soul sect actually went to compete with a great soul master. You must be very smart. Can you write invincible articles? Forget it if you can't. It's just disgusting. Call it a cool article, but there is nothing cool about it. The more you look at it, the more boring it becomes, especially the fourth soul ring. Sword Douluo helps you get the soul ring. Tell the truth, will you die if you get a high-level soul ring? If you still have to do it secretly, then there is no point in joining the force. The author is just enjoying the popularity, right?

As long as there is a ladder for advancement, it's okay. It's unrealistic for everyone to be like a dragon. There will always be classes, as long as they don't solidify.

Dai Mubai, the first soul skill, defense +50%, the third soul skill, attack power, defense and strength are doubled, lasting for half an hour, the fifth soul skill is strengthened by 150%, the seventh soul skill is strengthened by 300%, the protagonist's soul skill is a bit weak in comparison...

None of the author's previous works are quite accurate, which hurts

Speechless, he didn't run away even after taking the blood. The outside world is so big, and he had to make such a mess of things in Notting City, and he almost lost his life. This is what the former Tang Sect world boss made me laugh at. If you can't grasp it, don't write it.

There are so many articles about Douluo, why is there no Wuhun in the secret room space system? When the Wuhun is revealed, Bibi Dong is scared to death. Xueer, do you want to know why your mother hates you? This matter can only be demonstrated, not explained.

Obviously I have more soul bones than I can use up, so why do I still want to grab the Eight Spider Spears? Feeling so redundant? Also lowered the protagonist's personality? Not cost-effective at all

Gangzi's martial spirit has a bit of the blood of the Holy Dragon of Light

The Blue Silver Emperor is really not that powerful. Why do you like Bluesilver Grass so much? Is your mother haunting you?

There are so many poison points. Why does the protagonist Soul Lord disguise himself as a great soul master to fight in the Soul Fighting Competition? It's a very awkward way to pretend.

There's nothing clever about it, I'm still following the same old path

You're stupid enough. You're pretending to be evil. You have to be a healing soul master with a horse charm. Once you become famous, you're still short of money.

Recommend the book, Peerless Tang Sect: Ice Limits. Welcome all the big guys to come and taste it. Click on the avatar to see it. I wish the author to become a high-quality product as soon as possible. (can be deleted)

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