Qing Yunian: I Am Really Not a Saint.

If we really travel to Qingyu Nian, the first thing is to survive, and the second thing is to find museums and obtain military bases and other military bases. Especially after a disaster, the highest authority should be the survivors, not controlled by artificial intelligence.

Is the heroine the Queen Mother of the Northern Qi Dynasty?

I've read Chapter 60 and can't stand it anymore. Even though he was a great master, he had no qualifications at all for Emperor Qing. Babysitter👍👍👍

How to say it? It is recommended that the author write original works. The author's control of the plot and character creation are quite good. If you have such ability, it is better to write original works.

The writing before Chapter 87 was very good, but after Chapter 87 it doesn't look like it was written by the same person, how can I put it? Forced wisdom, what is the great master? Even if the writing is not particularly awesome, first of all, if you want to leave, no one can stop you, and you are not afraid of retaliation afterwards or turning over to the enemy and committing assassination? Second, the author, why don't you read it yourself and look at the character of the protagonist in the novel you wrote? He is just a 996 ordinary person. How can he be successful if he has a system? Can a guy who dropped out of high school think of becoming a saint? Have you ever thought about the problem that his life experience is not enough and his vision and knowledge are not enough to support him? Third, my IQ is quite normal in the front, but I know that I have grown up, but I am tough in the back? Is this because the protagonist is inflated or is he afraid that his force value will collapse and force him to suppress it?

Grandmaster? (You are from Yandu, right?) The classic plot of Pangu blood playing basketball (exaggerated description) A great master is surrounded by a group of ninth-level players and cannot escape! 😅 Yan Xiaoyi shot an arrow from the front and broke the Grandmaster's arm 🤭. Didn't this sneak attack kill the Grandmaster on the spot? 🥵 (Compared to the Demon Sword Lu Xiaobu) The ninth rank besieged the grand master and took the attack head-on. The ninth rank only took a few steps back (he is worthy of being a perfect half-step master of the ninth rank! Or is he already a different kind of enlightenment?) Those who have strict requirements for combat power can give up, otherwise they will be poisoned to death.

It feels like the protagonist's Grandmaster's strength is just a decoration. Everyone wants to kill him. I'm really speechless. It's like a nuclear weapon is despised by someone holding an RPG, outrageous

It is difficult for the protagonist to defeat several ninth-level masters. The other grand masters defend a city by themselves. Even Emperor Qing, who is the grand master, does not want to mess with him. If the grand master wants to leave, no one will stay. He can fight guerrillas and kill the country by himself.

Celebrate more than a year, look for pomelo mines, but they are all spiritual stones 😁😁😁

The author has no outline at all, and many places are different from the original work. He always writes the same plot as the original work, without considering the situation of each character at all, and makes these people look like fools! For example, the whole country knew about Fan Xian's life experience, but when Chen Pingping talked to Emperor Qing, she said that only a few people knew about Fan Xian! Also, the protagonist is Ang Lee instead of Fan Xian. What does it mean to keep writing about Fan Xian? Are you addicted to copying original works? Isn't it good to read the original work?

After it was released, Qingguo chased the protagonist so hastily. Don't forget that the protagonist is already a great master. When his mortal enemy Si Gu Jian came, he didn't come out to chase him. As a result, the protagonist, who was not in great conflict, went to the palace once and really fell out. It felt like Emperor Qing's brain was struck by lightning.

I don't want to be alone and deserted, even if it's someone scolding me (●°u°●)​"

I read Chapter 10 and it's not very good. The nanny flow is very painful to read.

When the protagonist appears, the small situation changes; when the protagonist intervenes, the general situation changes! The protagonist has so many magical skills, but in the end he can't beat Emperor Qing. Emperor Qing is stronger, but in the original battle at Dadongshan, Emperor Qing is strictly speaking a sneak attack.

After it was put on the shelf, I felt like someone had changed, and I didn't know what I was writing.

It's the second season. How do you feel about the strength of Grandmaster? Can the strongest Ninth Grade master a single move? I really thought it was the same gap between Wu Jue and Li Mochou. 🤭

A book full of bugs. In the dozen or so chapters of "Fan Xian's Journey to Jiangnan", the protagonist never appears once and they are all about Fan Xian. Why did you subscribe?

It seriously lowered the Grandmaster's combat power. The author relied entirely on his own imagination. You still need to read the original fan fiction.

How should I put it? It feels very awkward. The pig's feet mixed with Fan Xian and Emperor Qing are very speechless. I feel that the protagonist is very arrogant and stupid. He doesn't use modern knowledge or super-modern knowledge from other worlds. He just grinds down Emperor Qing. The most important thing is that he can't defeat him. I don't know. What's the use of this trick, what's the use of Fan Xian, what's the use of Emperor Qing, as long as one of the pig's trotters can be trained well to defeat Emperor Qing, there is a 99% winning rate. When Emperor Qing beats you, you think of a group fight, but returning the pig's trotters will be the same. Do you have any brains? ? ? Emperor Qing was a man of that era who thought of this method. Is this the only method you, a time traveler, thought of? ? Are you stupid? ? Then why do you need pig's feet?

It's so stupid. Now that I have the strength, I'm still estimating the time rules. Just write like this. I can't do what I can do in ten thousand chapters.

Did you stop this one and start writing another one?

I skipped the subscription and watched it. There are many bright spots, such as the fighting scenes, the early stage of the plot was bluntly promoted, and several waves of people were persuaded to retreat. With the plot and details polished, it can be a good book.

That's it for this one. After all, I just wrote it. I can understand it. I'll do my best for the next one.

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Four hundred chapters and it's not over yet

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I said why does it look so familiar? It turns out to be you, the author, Nothing to do tonight, just listen to music on the hook (Shangfeng Yue)

The author's writing is really good. It's the first time in many years that he supports the original version.

In a world of nuclear radiation, come and penetrate me. You'll die if you don't go in. If there's no explanation for this, I can't watch it.

You seem to have written a rubbish book. Fortunately, I didn't spend my subscription points. I can't even read the free chapters. I'll just say goodbye.