I'm Back from the End of the World

The writing style is not amazing but it is definitely passable. The feeling of being eloquently told is okay after reading it. But precisely because of this, it feels too bland. The biggest problem is the pace. After reading five chapters, I haven't seen the crisis, conflict, suspense, or Goldfinger's showmanship. This makes it difficult for people to want to continue reading. For example, when Lu Feng appears at the beginning, the protagonist neither pretends to be cool nor suffers too much humiliation and grievance, then the words he appears in are actually hydrographs. It's a bit early, it's better to simplify it and push it later. I also have a suggestion for writing. Because online articles are read on mobile phones, it is best not to make them into long paragraphs. For example, in Chapter 5, where Professor Qin speaks, large chunks of content are gathered together, which makes people's scalp numb. This can be changed.

Nga Come on, come on, these days There are all kinds of non-professional writers for entertainment It would be amazing to finish a novel Look at the devil after get off work 😰 ps This novel has been completed, details nga whirlpool area

Coming from the quagmire, let's take a look at the situation first

Very well written, a master of writing. It's not very popular, but the writing can compare with the rankings. Come on

The book is a good book, but it's hard to read, and it's hard to write the previous feeling well in the later part

Don't kill me with an emotional knife 😰

It's a good book, the writing is good, and the characters are very three-dimensional. As the novel progresses, you can feel the character's personality slowly changing, and the plot theme is also well-organized. But the pace is very slow, and you have to watch it bit by bit. Halfway through, you feel like you want to watch it but don't want to. I hope the author will keep up the good work and make the next book better.