The Perfect Me Is Yue Chan

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel that the author wants to write one story at a time. Many plots appear too abruptly. As a fan fiction, the original character setting has been changed, and Yuechan's primary and secondary identities cannot be distinguished. Back to the plot, the connection is not very good. Liu Shen doesn't agree to accept you, so you can go to the skull giant. Why are you afraid of the influence of Qing Yue Yan? No. 10 Is not afraid of the influence of the Emperor Fire of the Footprint Emperor. You can just accept it as a source of support. If you don't have a backer, you go to Uncle Jingbi and Master Bird to ask for the True Phoenix Art. How could these two people take you there just by saying a few words? They can still sense whether you are one of their own. Without the imprint of their own aura, are they not afraid of overturning if they take you there like this? Even if they have forgotten a lot, they have been in the False God Realm for so long and are used to seeing the world. It is really unreasonable for the two of them to take you to find the treasure. Keep reading if you want to see it, I'm here.

I'm really sorry, I've wanted to write it for a long time. What I'm looking at is the protagonist. I don't have a real sense of how strong the clone is. If I really want to write about it, I can mention it in passing, or do a group portrait in the middle and later stages. The supporting characters start to compete for the scene from the very beginning of the book's plot. I know this is because I want to write about how promising the protagonist will be in the future by relying on his clones. But it's not fun to have high potential in the early stage and then become violent in the later stage. How many fantasy books are not violent in the end? This strength is expected. It depends on how you become stronger step by step. Don't be indifferent because of this. To put it bluntly, I still haven't figured out whether the book will be read later. When I saw Chapter 91, I originally thought it was a normal settlement process, but it turned out that the protagonist missed the mark before he felt happy. The author really wants to write a story about Chi Ke. As long as the protagonist is not omniscient and omnipotent, there is always a way to write Chi Chi reasonably. But, why write about eating this turtle? The main character is so eccentric that you want to live the whole life? But my entire sense is that of a clone created by the protagonist at a great expense. It is not the same consciousness as the protagonist, but the same as the supporting character. The protagonist does not have much reward and does not have much role. A supporting character's clone directly leaks out the protagonist. Or do you want to have a love-and-kill relationship? To be honest, if she really wants to write this, she has to go to the Immortal Emperor on her own. Depending on the situation in the original work, unless the author wants to write a perfect "I Am Leng Yuan" or a perfect love world, otherwise she will be killed or turned into a puppet. This is back again.

The author could have written more, but there is simply not enough to read. There are only six or seven pictures, which is not enough.

The author is beginning to test the bottom line. The last time the plot was written like this was Ding Ding's "Sword Girl", and the last time it was written like this was "Luo Re". It's less than 500,000 words and he's rushing to backstab him. If he doesn't withdraw now, he's just waiting to be disgusted.

I just watched it and I didn't understand it. The protagonist himself is an avatar. After finally getting rid of this identity, he ended up with a bunch of red and white avatars, but they were still the kind of avatars with self-awareness.

Please give me your opinion. Do you prefer the protagonist to be single or Lily?

The author only introduces two, Liu Shen, a slow-moving strategy type, ruthless emperor, a late appearance, domineering queen type, Liu Shen and ruthless Da E Emperor, the Lily partners chosen for the protagonist are tentatively decided!

Regarding Lily, book friends all think that the ruthless Emperor and Liu Shen are not good, so they will be eliminated. Now we are soliciting everyone's opinions. Huo Ling'er, Witch, and Yun Xi are the three for the time being. Everyone will vote for one!

Success persuaded me to quit, but the author Bai Hewen still needs to practice more. As for the plot in the Golden Bowl, the enemy is an ancient creature who likes to talk about pornographic waste. The black clone goes through the process first, talks to each other before the battle, but is called pornographically, and then starts fighting. Then after the red clone came, he first crippled others and watched others open up, saying that they were not in a hurry, but after the person finished opening up, they continued the process again, talked before the battle, and were told that they were yellow again, and then continued to beat them. What does the author mean? The villain dies because he talks too much. You talk too much and you are arrogant, self-indulgent and masochistic? So far I have seen a clip of Qingbai, and the rest is all about interacting with the male supporting character, crazy interactions, just like the heroine subtly said: I am very beautiful, come on and talk dirty about me, I don't mind if you finish your sentence, I am beating you to death. I don't understand the point of writing this!

Don't be a poisonous person. Lily is a lily. If you become a poisonous person, every website will talk about you.

Black-clad Yuechan

Damn, it's even more poisonous. What I hate most is that in transformation stories, in addition to the protagonist himself, there are also transformations. What is the difference between this and gay men?

I can't accept it, so I should abandon this book, right?

The writing was pretty good at first, but as I read later, it became more and more strange. I stepped on the lily and gave up.

Book club, everyone can come in and chat!

Red Yuechan

The perspective of five subsidiary characters has been created before the protagonist has even stood up. The protagonist is the core of the branch. You are putting the cart before the horse and switching perspectives back and forth. So who is the protagonist?

I read that the author talked about having Lily with Liu Shen and Ruren. em... If it were other novels, that would be fine. The main thing is that Perfect World, Covering the Sky, and Holy Ruins are not suitable for romance. The relationships between men and women are rarely described, let alone Lily. In other words, this kind of world is not suitable for lilies, and is best suited for singles. Just look at Ye Fan. If the author hadn't used Ji Haoyue to forcefully promote "emotion", neither Ji Ziyue nor Ye Fan would have succeeded. Before this, was their interaction, or emotional line, obvious? Actually, the main reason is that the world of the trilogy is not suitable for such things like relationships. There is a sense that the "world" is too difficult to cope with, and there is no sense of long-lasting love between children and children. Best for singles.

I feel like the author's name is useless. There is also a strange idea. The protagonist has to create magic without much ability. It is funny that he can't survive the calamity of creating magic. A child is as childish as changing the world

I have seen Wen who turned into a willow god, and Yuechan was tied up with willow branches and played 🙂

No, you're calling it finished? It hasn't even reached the upper limit yet.

After reading Chapter 63, I want to laugh when I think of Yue Chan as the protagonist. It is obvious that Yuexian in red is the protagonist. In terms of combat power, Hong Yi can slap Yue Chan to death with a slap. In terms of opportunity, Hong Yi can easily have tools without any effort at all. Yue Chan can give him opportunities and treasures. Send me training resources. In terms of plot, Yuechan has so little plot that she is not worthy of carrying shoes for five incarnations. It's 63 chapters, and basically all the plots are about incarnations. Yuechan is completely the cultivation tool of the five incarnations. If there is anything missing, Yuechan will get it by herself.

The protagonist is Yue Chan, and Shi Hao is the second protagonist. The training is completely different from the original work. He is given more roles because he will soon become her. This is a big change. Through Shi Hao, Yue Chan and the five incarnations are expressed. The battle between the two stones will be postponed and will not happen in the wilderness.

Are you sure the protagonist is Yue Chan? Are you sure it's not the Red-dressed Moon Fairy who is the protagonist?

The author is really afraid of you, eunuch, it's so hard to find a perfect fan, why do you have to?