Konoha: Starting from the Duel Ground

Are you still writing this book? You used to have two chapters a day, but now you have one chapter every two or three days. You just started a new book and you don't want to write this one anymore? Just say what do you mean

The heroine is not Namikaze Minato bad reviews

Author, you don't know how to fight, right? The book I read before had the same feeling as Sasuke with Eternal Eyes🐶

Cos

The book is good, but it's a pity that if I keep it, I'm afraid it will become useless. If I don't keep it, it will be uncomfortable to read. What a disgusting rule

It's quite interesting, because this book has been downloaded for the Naruto mobile game. I hope to stick with it until it is finished and change the 0 on the introduction to 1. I will support it after it is released 😍

Brother, please use less idioms. Except for Madara, few people understand what they mean. In real life, when you say idioms and poems to Xiaozhi, not many people understand what they mean. When I see these, I always want to pick my toes. It's so embarrassing.

After seeing too much of the darkness, I feel that the happy Hokage is quite comfortable 🤓

Uchiha Haru

It's pretty, it can be considered a popular fairy grass.

Gradually, I came up with the idea of ​​using illusion to control the author's code

If you start a new book and then end the old one, I will never read any of your new books. Even if it is a Naruto fan, I will never subscribe to it until I am sure it was not written by you.

I saw that there were zero 10,000-word masterpieces written in the introduction, and I fell into deep thought.

The author's writing is very good, relaxed and pleasant The rhythm is also very appropriate It is not a boring strength improvement to kill monsters, but a writing driven by the emotions between people The disadvantage is that the lines used in other works are used in the second half of the passion, which seems a bit nondescript and is a bit of a joke that does not fit the atmosphere of the time. When it comes to casual daily jokes, it's just a seasoning. When it comes to serious scenes, try not to show off. Fortunately, the author is not the kind of person who doesn't read readers' comments. I saw the latest chapter last night, and I have been enduring a sense of dislocation. For example, when the protagonist declares his ideals, he borrows the emperor's lines. I feel that this part is barely consistent, so I didn't say anything. The later use of swords for dialogues really made me a little nervous, and it was a bit inconsistent with the current scene, so I mentioned it, and the author changed it very quickly. At that time, Jian Lai had the atmosphere of overwhelming the building, and it felt like killing a chicken with a sledgehammer. But the author has changed it a lot and it looks much more natural. After the revision, I read the latest chapter again. It was very good. It improved the sense of immersion and the progress was obvious. Refining famous scenes from other works and turning them into your own, trying to match the world view in the work. With slight modifications, copying it will be a bit inconsistent. ps: At first, I thought the author was too intolerant of criticism, so he deleted my comments. Then I looked back at the latest chapter and modified the paragraphs, causing the comments to disappear.

Please tell me the most powerful pupil technique in your mind, and explain why it is the Eight Thousand Spears. Uchiha Hikari was born in the wrong era. When she was active, there were no reincarnations of Asura and Indra. Otherwise, with the ability of the Eight Thousand Spears, it is hard to say whether she can reach the Sixth Path, and the Samsara Eye will have no pressure.

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The author's cool operation

I want to follow the book, but after looking at the update frequency, I feel like the author is going to cut it off. Don't dare to chase

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🤭🤭The author has cut it off, and any unfinished new books will not be read.

When you open a new book, you won't care about the old ones, right?🤫

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Original Kaleidoscope Eye Technique 2. Hachiman God Can realize all wishes, but will consume varying amounts of power according to the difficulty of the wish. (If you wish to turn a pair of non-blood kaleidoscopes into blood kaleidoscopes to help you open the eternal eyes, the consumption will be very low, but if you wish to open the eternal eyes directly, the pupil power will be insufficient and it will fail. If you force it, your two eyes will be merged into one eternal eye. However, you can use it like this when you are about to go blind. Later, you can find another eternal eye or a pair of kaleidoscopes and use the pupil technique to make a wish and transform them into your own eternal eyes.)

Understand what I mean

It looks great. Author, can you tell me how many words it contains? Too little and not enough to see! I hope the work will be longer but I'm afraid you won't be able to grasp it. . . 🙂Come on, update soon

Write more and it's not enough

{"NickName":"Lingxia Zhiren","UserId":307295565} Is it still updated? All my investment is gone😭😭😭

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