Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from Environmental Management Experience

Why do you keep reading and writing about women's novels on male channels lately? Big guys go to female channels and write them.

I personally quite like the female protagonist, but what I hate is the female channel style, but there are so many female channels that I want to write here.

Does the author have a CP for the heroine? If so, is it 100 or BG?

There's nothing wrong with male-female stories. Most of them actually want to read Baihe. The author of Baiyuedan still wants to say that readers should be mentally prepared. If they don't understand what they write, they'll eat both sides. They'll get scolded in the later stages of writing.

There's something wrong with the writing style. It looks like the writing style of a female video. I'm not sure if it's due to my poor writing skills.

This introduction reminds me of that book about the Necromancer who plants trees.

It is now 2023.11.24 17:03 The beginning is very well written, I will definitely sign the contract! Invest now!

I originally wanted to give some opinions, but seeing that the old friends in the comment area are more enthusiastic than the other, I thought about it and let it go. Instead of engaging in the author's mentality, I will just give some suggestions. The author's experience is obviously insufficient, so the overall article will have a sense of fantasy that is seriously divorced from reality. Therefore, it is recommended not to write in a realistic direction, use strengths and avoid weaknesses, learn from the light novel style, only focus on characters, and it may be better to write in an absurd and humorous direction.

The author should pay attention to typos! There is also Li Chou, who started out as a foundation builder, but within a few chapters he became a golden elixir. The previous chapter was written half a year ago, and the following one was written a few days ago. It seems that it was not written by one person. The author should pay attention and make some changes. It would affect the reading experience too much.

I feel like the details are not explained clearly, and I can't understand it when I look at it. For example, why did the hot guy in the ring struggle to hold on from the beginning? Isn't there a special guy who can't hit no matter how hard he hits and wants to send it? There is no explanation of how he can hold on. Generally speaking, we have been calling back and forth inexplicably. In the process of environmental protection, which is the main axis of environmental protection, should we fight to protect the environment? There is still some hope, and I hope to add something after protecting the environment. Now I have protected the environment from the beginning. I feel really confused about the arena and the flying boat robbery later. What are these people doing? Environmental protection. How can the protagonist become stronger if we don't protect the environment?

It's so long-winded, even if we have a fight, the parents will have to talk for a long time.

Delayed. Talking about this in the ring. Also added some taunts from fantasy passers-by. Also convinced.