I Work as a Housekeeper in Guilou

As a novice, I do have some problems in controlling the rhythm of the story, but I can see that the writing is spiritual, and I can also see some clever ideas in the copy. I can look forward to the future! Keep up the good work

The writing is quite good, the author, at least the copy and so on, my IQ is quite good. But a common problem among female fans and female fans is that in the early stage, the people around them are all women, whether they are Asuka or Xiaobai, which brings down the work. The balance between men and women is difficult to write, and it is easy to be ambiguous if you are not careful. It is normal for female fans to accidentally have a lot of men like the female protagonist. The male channel also accidentally contains a bunch of women who like the male protagonist. It is very difficult to find a non-CP novel with a normal male-to-female ratio and no ambiguity. Either the people around you are all of the same sex, or they are all ambiguous. This is the same for both male and female readers. Actually, especially for Asuka, there is nothing wrong with this organization, and there is no problem if the boss is a girl. However, many members of Asuka are currently known to be girls. Don't you think it's a bit tacky? Just like thousands of female channels, there are even many Asukas around the protagonist. Don't you think this is a bit too coincidental? There is even a boss of Asuka whom the protagonist knows. What is the difference between this and the protagonist falling off a cliff and finding a treasure? This is my idea. There is no need to debate whether I agree or disagree. After all, book reviews are meant to collect readers' various ideas to make the work better. 🙂So don't criticize me and oppose me just because you don't agree with me. I don't want to add this sentence either. But I have encountered too many such things. I have read novels since I was a child. I have encountered all kinds of irrationality. I am exhausted and quarreling 🤔 Do you have any friends like me?

Everything else is good, but I'm not happy about the sudden arrival of a younger brother who doesn't understand why. It feels like the heroine is a different person.

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The plot makes people feel a little speechless. I don't know why the heroine has so much courage to say that she wants to blow up the officialdom. Her only skill is obviously ghost building. They are all given by the authorities. I always feel like I'm talking big. And the younger brother who wrote it is also inexplicable. Killing that younger brother was also inexplicable, as well as his real friend Song. And inexplicable. Throughout the whole process, we didn't see how powerful the heroine herself is. From the beginning to the end, I got the game and just said that I was going to blow up the game. It made me think that he had learned some skills on his own. The copy is really good. But the writing is too long and the ink is stained. And the connection is also very confusing. Especially when a copy suddenly appeared recently. It's not interesting at all.

Does the author not understand the game well? Passive skills are usually a long-term buff, or are automatically triggered under certain conditions and cannot be used actively; active skills are your choice whether to use them or not.

I really like the mother-daughter plot between Shuang Li and I hope to see more appearances of Ma Li in the Guilou version! Also, the plot of Xia Di and the setting of the ghost clone still feel very abrupt. I can't understand the meaning of his existence and can't connect it with the story 😓

It's good-looking, and the character creation is also good. The protagonist is sharp, cautious and smart, but some of the motivations for his actions are not that clear. Sometimes the copy is a bit incomprehensible.

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The author is getting more and more into the zone. I had no desire to pay before, but now I think I can give it a try.

I would like to ask if this book will be updated? Is it a trap?

After reading it, my evaluation is that it looks good.

I found it by chance and didn't expect it to be so well written. I feel that it becomes more and more fluent as I read further, and the people in the various copies I encountered became more vivid. Really good!

The author's ideas are really good and every copy is very interesting! I really like the protagonist's character and work style. There are some shortcomings but they don't prevent it from being good-looking. The long dungeon is okay in the early stage, but the writing is very jumpy at the end, which is a bit difficult to understand. It seems that important things are brushed off in one stroke/a key item or character suddenly appears out of thin air 🙂

Really nice book! Why not update it! ! !

The character identities and plot design are eye-catching. I keep up with the updates every day 🌹