Join the Zhenfu Division: Split the Future with One Knife

I couldn't stand it anymore after Chapter 4, and couldn't move when I saw a woman.

Are you keeping a running account? After reading it for a long time, I can't even put in a character's perspective. It's like a primary school student writing a composition. There is no emotion. Keeping a running account.

Good looking, supportive, decisive in killing, love love love

The writing talks too much to oneself, and it might have been popular. It's like the up owner at Bilibili who read the manuscript. Talking to oneself is not very good.

The writing is half-written, and it makes people feel embarrassed and sick from hearing it.

Hey, I don't know what the situation is. It's probably because of the writing style. I think the label of the protagonist is okay, but it doesn't look good when written out.

They commented and complained, explaining that the novel has content that can be brought into it, but they think some of it is unreasonable or the protagonist is stupid, and they try to get the stupid content changed, especially in the early stages of the book, when readers have a low tolerance for content. Compared with other newcomers, you have been writing for more than a month. At present, your score has reached more than 100 monthly tickets and more than 1,000 collections, which is very good. In another 50 chapters, you should be on the shelves to make money. How much you can earn depends on how many readers can spend money to continue reading. There is no need to focus on the protagonist's shortcomings in order to highlight his character. Remember that readers are looking for idols when reading books. The protagonist can be invincible or weaker than the supporting characters, but he must be better than the readers who read the book, especially in terms of IQ, EQ, words and deeds.

A knife splits the road between life and death

I don't know if the author reads the book review or not. There is nothing wrong with the setting. Maybe it's a problem with the writing style? I can't let people in, and I can't tell what's wrong.

It's so well written and so beautiful

It's so well written. It's so beautifully written.

"The Heroine: Cultivation of Immortality in the City" took the title of the book and ran around the comment area, just in case someone really took a look at it, hehe~ Also, the author is a newbie, so his writing may be a little bad, so readers, please be merciful and be gentle with your criticism.

Not at this level, the introduction is written topsy-turvy.

These parents are so in charge. There are so many words written about the parents and sister. It feels like the main character is a mama's boy. If you buy a chicken, your parents should educate you. It's really poisonous.

The writing on this money is simply messy. If a country behaves like this, ordinary people will probably die long ago.

Did you send it to the wrong website? It's not suitable for you to start at the beginning.