Alliance: from Pirate to Speaker

It's a pity that this writing style is too small for lol fans, even smaller than the audience for competition articles. If it were a pirate fan, it would probably be another pirate code.

Mature authors should consciously illustrate pictures, including the protagonist and supporting characters.

I am the man who wants to become the Pirate King! ! !

After reading Chapter 12, it was too slow, too slow, so slow that I lost my patience. It should be more enjoyable with good writing. Apart from the good writing, the plot didn't attract me at all, and the golden finger upgrades didn't feel satisfying either.

Controlling reviews will not make your grades better. I agree with what the person said before. The pub did not handle it well.

It's very boring from the beginning. Not many readers want to see a garbage place like Bilgewater. Others are either Noxus or Ionia, and even the most difficult ones are Zuampi City. Bilgewater has nothing to see except salad, and Gretel and Cards are two bastards. This place has a very bad story, to be honest.

Back then, One Piece was the best One Piece novel I had ever read. This one has many similar ones.

The protagonist should accept the Piltover policewoman 🙂

It looks good, the writing is very touching, and it feels very immersive. I have found a treasure. Keep updating, author. When you sign the contract, I will reward you and vote for you monthly. It's OK to update two pages a day. Come on, write well. Let me vote for you first.

Thank you to all the book friends who voted for and silently supported, thank you very much! Hope to pass the 100th floor!

It's too childish. From the moment you get on the ship, you don't kill the one on the left but save the one on the right. Then what kind of pirate do you think you are? The mentally retarded protagonist, who was a loner in the past and had to make friends with anyone he met, still dares to kill pirates with strangers to make up for his losses? How dare you trust him? How dare you flash the revolver casually later, and how dare you keep saying you just want to save people?

The starting speed is a bit slow, and the details are more accurate.

The writing is very smooth and the settings are innovative. Come on

The plot moves too fast, and there are too many meaningless characters, which makes the viewer feel dizzy. There are a lot of characters that feel like they can be combined. In so many villages, there are various village chiefs, relatives, and their foreign aid, which greatly affects the perception.

Good guy, it's over before it even begins. It seems like another eunuch has joined Qidian.

Write more and love to read. You are talented in writing novels. Your novels are as good as The Super Mechanic.

How far can this go? You can't even survive the Soul-Eating Night, right? This golden finger might as well find a remote place and wait to die in LOL

1 "Monsters from Corsica land at the port of Joinan 2 "The unexplainable man-eating devil approaches Grasse 3 "Despicable and shameless kleptocrats enter Grenoble 4 "Napoleon Bonaparte captures Lyon 5 "General Napoleon approaches Fontainebleau 6 "His Majesty the Supreme Emperor arrives today to himself Faithful Paris

I thought it was cut off, but it turned out to be updated. Good guy, you are also on annual leave, right? !

Do you want to write or not? If you don't want to write, just say it. If something happens, let me know. Don't stop easily.

Update as quickly as possible, keep up the good work It's not enough to watch.

The results are so dismal, it seems that it was cut, burnt, burnt

It was sent and then disappeared, can you give me an accurate message? Being a eunuch wastes everyone's money, right?

"One Piece: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" If you are short on books, you can read this book. It is a very interesting and novel pirate fanfic. This book stretches the timeline to before Rocks attacks the Valley of the Gods. The protagonist Li Yuan has his own domineering body-tempering secret "Sword God Body Tempering Art". Rise up in the Rocks Pirates, become a cadre, and plunder the property of the Celestial Dragons in the Valley of Gods. After the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, participate in the New World Hegemony and occupy Wano Country. Become the world's greatest swordsman and dominate the new world with Whitebeard and others. The protagonist has four children, Stephens-Gane, Wei Zhuang, Esdeath, and Chi Tong. They are all great swordsmen, competing with Hawkeye and Red Hair...

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You didn't say anything when you revised the article, but directly changed the message shown here and deleted my comment. I originally wanted to argue with it, but when I saw it was the author, I started scolding me. I didn't expect that you could not change the article, so I was wrong.

After looking at the protagonist's height, bye bye, what level of disability is 172 in Pirate Time?