Immortality Begins with Piercing Eyes

Now that a bunch of people have fanatical beliefs, it's time to kill the landlords openly. Sure enough, that's how it is when writing about indigenous people. Only when the author presses to the extreme can he become murderous. If the time traveler is a landowner, he has already planned to maintain his status as an immortal master. After all, the people's wisdom is uncivilized and their beliefs are extremely scary. If the landowner is a devil, he is a devil, and he has the skills to protect the Tao and will be afraid of ordinary people.

I don't understand why you should listen to that Mr. Niu, why don't you just kill Mr. Niu? Looking for a follower to take care of this town and collect resources at the same time

I really can't figure it out. Tianlinggen requires ten levels of Qi training to build a foundation. Five Spiritual Roots require fourteen or five levels of Qi training to build a foundation. The most important thing is that the technique only reaches the tenth level of Qi training. How to fix it later? Just ➕reiki will be enough? Then why did you work so hard on the second half of the technique? For those spells? Oh, that's not right, spells are automatically understood upon reaching that level of cultivation. Well, cow! I really don't know how much imagination the author has. When the setting of the novel about cultivating immortals is basically fixed, he made major changes. It is another step to break through and automatically master the spells that come with the technique, and it is also a ten-level foundation building exercise for a single spiritual root. Other spiritual roots must continue to be cultivated. It was really uncomfortable to watch. If I had never read the book about cultivating immortals before, there would be no problem in accepting it. Unfortunately, I have been a bookworm for more than ten years.

The book is well written, but the main character's IQ is too low.

I can't tell that it's about cultivating immortals. I just see that it's all about trivial calculations. I can't understand it. The poisonous point is that the protagonist's IQ is not enough to fool the readers.

Immortal cultivators are still controlled by mortals, how can this immortal still cultivate? After reading more than ten chapters, I just couldn't stand it anymore.

The protagonist starts cultivating immortality after escaping from the mortal landowner Lao Cai. After entering the world of immortality, he first accumulates resources and develops trump cards, and then carries out primitive accumulation of capital and completes the basic knowledge to do other things. Second point, if there are cheats, you don't first use the cheats to assist your practice. In order to break through the foundation building, you expose yourself to danger. Breaking through the foundation building and forcing yourself to suppress the realm always makes people feel baffled. First, use the cheats to get a few trump cards.

I beg you readers not to keep reading, but to pursue reading. Only by pursuing reading can you get a better recommendation position. It is very likely that raising a book will lead to death. Please give me your support. Xiaolan's outline and details have been designed, and she will gradually enter the room. We will live forever together, thank you for your support! !

It doesn't matter whether you write about indigenous people or not, but as the protagonist, whether he is the center of all plots or not, he must survive to the cycle of all plots, so he must have the necessary character and ability. If you really want to write about so-called ordinary people and down-to-earth people, then you will not survive more than three chapters, and you have to write him to death at the beginning. How can such a character be the protagonist?

Not bad, much better than those with extra points

I haven't read it yet, but it's worth adding a bookshelf if I don't have a system.

Mortal flow feels awkward, there is no need to imitate the writing style of Mortal flow

I'm very confused, why can't the alchemy monk clearly see that the male protagonist's cultivation level is too smart for other people?

Another Aboriginal Cultivation of Immortality

The writing style is sophisticated, the narrative is smooth, the structure is grand, and the timing of the arrangement is good. However, the plot is a bit slow, and the emotional drama is not described thoroughly enough. I look forward to a big explosion. If you can persist, this book will have the appearance of a masterpiece. I, Ying Hao, come to the Wild Age with the Gate of All Realms, travel through the heavens, gather endless luck, open the first destiny dynasty in the ages, use the way of the ultimate emperor to make all realms surrender, and become the eternal supreme emperor of heaven. PS: I am currently writing about The Wilderness, and I may write about Swallowing the Starry Sky, Perfect World, Under One Person, Douluo Dalu, Covering the Sky, Wu Dong Qian Kun, Snow Eagle Lord, Feijian Dao, Cangyuan Tu, Eternal Life, Yuan Tianzun, Beyond Time...

There is a problem with Chapter 5. After killing Bai He, you can suddenly tell the hidden diseases of the whole village. Although Niu Landlord needs puppets, he is not at all curious about Bai He's inheritance. I will search your body. In case you have any method of cultivating immortality and immortality, you must know that Bai He wants to cultivate immortality and shake the devil.

"The Heroine: Cultivation of Immortality in the City" took the title of the book and ran around the comment area, just in case someone really took a look at it, hehe~ Also, the author is a newbie, so his writing may be a little bad, so readers, please be merciful and be gentle with your criticism.

Not bad, I read it in one sitting