Country in My Mind

It feels pretty good. Will there be any updates later?

I have so much free time that as long as I create a world, it will be a prehistoric one. Can you write something else? Can you create your own superpower dynasty, a civilization of divine weapons, or even a Western fantasy type? The Great Desolate Current is almost nauseating to watch now. Traveling to the Great Desolate World, ascending to the Great Desolate World, the God Realm of All People is still the Great Desolate World, and this three hundred kilograms of Creation Current is still the Great Desolate World.

Extraordinary people need to fight for reality, but don't give it too easily. It will extend the time of reality. Don't let realistic people learn too easily. You have already given them the basics, so don't give them anything else. Rely on their efforts.

Submit it to the national readers, come and have a fist fight 😏

How to put it, I was interested in the subject matter, but there was an obvious mistake in the first 4 chapters, and the author did not correct it at all. This mistake is that the protagonist can accelerate the time of that world, but the protagonist said that the maximum acceleration is ten thousand times. At the end of the fourth chapter, the protagonist said that he can accelerate time a hundred times. The result is that 1 day in reality = 100 years in the world in the protagonist's mind, so the previous so-called acceleration of time by 10,000 times is 1 day in reality = 10,000 years in the world in the protagonist's mind, regardless of the unit, right? 😰🥵

There are quite a lot of bugs, including time flow issues, the size of the created world, plot development speed, etc.

Compared with those old things, they are too tender and lack a lot of details, which makes them a bit tasteless.

Thirteen-year-old bookworm died of poisoning

This writing shows a conflict of views, always portraying the country like a villain, and writing about things that are against the country. Is it too comfortable to live a peaceful life? I hope there will be chaos.

Why doesn't the protagonist turn over his brain to the country?

The avatar wrote the same thing as two people, so how come they were schizophrenic?

The whole novel seems to highlight personal heroism. The plot is too long-winded, like an old woman's,

It feels like the author wants to pretend to be B again, but he hasn't learned how to pretend to be B. Is it a blind act? In reality, cultivation of immortality requires the soul to dissipate in order to practice Qi? May I ask where the soul comes from if you have already become immortals in reality?

The story is okay, but the logic is very poor. There is no energy or soul in the real world. How can humans practice in dreams and then be able to practice in reality? . . .

Cognition determines imagination, and cognition is too poor

It's the prehistoric creation flow again, this novel will collapse, and the author's thinking is still stuck in the ancient era before 2020. Out of date🤫

I don't know what to say, the writing is pretty good, but I randomly met a classmate who once liked him. So he devoted himself to his own world of cultivating immortals and became the number one cultivator. There's nothing wrong with it, but it's very awkward. Nowhere to complain

The protagonist's... Pretense is a bit out of character

Every cell is a world for me to crawl through.

The author's control of the plot progress needs to be improved. The plot is a bit stiff and the writing is average. Overall, it has promise but lacks experience.

Is the author's imagination so poor?

As soon as I saw the game, I didn't want to watch it! ! ! ! !

Is it AI? The sentences are unclear.

The last Elf World I wrote was so ugly that I didn't even want to read it.

Why not create a technological world? The productivity of the technological world can definitely support countless people. Wouldn't there be more soul power in this way? And you can also feed back real-world technology, creating a technological explosion.

If you want a career, don't engage in moral kidnapping, that's all.

I didn't like it very much and ended up with a player

The subject matter is a creation text from five or six years ago, and the level is that of a novice text from 10 years ago.

Generally speaking, the content of the first 200 chapters can be said to be very exciting, but the follow-up is a bit weak If you like to watch the behind-the-scenes harvesting of leeks, you can check it out. It is quite exciting, but it does not compare with the macro history, touching the greatness of nature, and the power of time like I Am God. After 200 chapters, I feel a little unable to find my direction, and the development goals are uncertain. For example, you can harvest and create the world. There is no need to care about the world. Just follow the content and history. Just go through two time travels and experience it. The protagonist does not need to participate. Dish, just throw the power into it and change it quantitatively. The main thing is to be in reality, protect the reality without problems, use the virtual world to create world experience to change quantitatively, make a post-equipment to store power, you can play with these things, and give up everything again. The current content feels like all kinds of things will happen, and no place is safe. , And it is not controlled by the protagonist. It is said that it is the God of Creation. None of the worlds actually created can be actually controlled, and there is a risk of losing control. It feels like a random change can kill the protagonist. It is like a person suddenly gaining the power of the God of Creation and creating a bunch of dangerous worlds. The God of Creation is at risk of killing himself at any time. The previous one is weird, returning to the virtual world, where real people go to gain strength and harvest leeks. Then I feel a little out of control, various powers come to reality, and then various worlds are not controlled. If it is not controlled, just don't control it. Wherever there are problems, just solve them. It feels like you can create the world to gain power. There is no need to fixate on one world and there is not much to gain.

If you play too much with morality, it becomes a ghost bus.