I, Who Was at the Bottom of the Fairy World, Descended to Earth

I don't know how to comment, I just think it's weird

I read very slowly, reading word by word and line by line. It took me 17 minutes to finish reading four chapters. Chapter 4: Five poison points exploded in a row, send them away directly. ------------------------Boundary line-------------------- Poison point 1: The fourth-level sect-protecting formation of the Jindan Sect in the lower realm is always on, and it is the most powerful one. (Awesome!) (Huashen Sect is not as heroic as you!) —————————————————— Poisonous Point 2: What's even more awesome is that the author does not mention the level of spiritual veins of the Jindan Sect's Fu Di. It seems to be the spiritual veins gathered by the sect itself using spiritual stones. (666 Awesome Klass) (Shenhao!!!) ———————————————————— Poison point 3: The fourth-order formation that can compete with Yuanying's combat power is actually affected by the weather of ordinary flowers, grass, and lake water? ———————————————————— Poison point 4: Lingshi is added to the formation every three days, so the whole sect holds a competition every three days to prevent secrets from being leaked. ( ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ) ———————————————————— Poison point 5: The ancestor of Jindan does not understand the mana fluctuations at the level of Nascent Soul Lord. The formation was attacked by a sneak attack, The ancestor immediately roared, "Who dares to invade my Taoist mansion!" ———————————————————————— At first I saw that my senses were good, and I thought I had found a small masterpiece, but it turned out that I was poisoned and died.

After reading the introduction, I thought it was a member of the motherland in the immortal world who was doing whatever he wanted in the mortal world, but he ended up being a coward and trying to revive the sect for others. The author's introduction is a scam.

The words and sentences are all in the category of pretentious novice writing, or a triad cultivating fairy tale. It has tried its poison and slipped away.

Sure enough, after becoming a Nascent Soul, he is still a licking slave. Alas, why do you like being a slave so much these days?

If Wuyu is already in the fairy world, will there still be mortals? The weakest one in the Immortal Realm should be a Qi practitioner or something like that, right? 😅 What kind of rubbish Immortal Realm? When fighting later, is it possible that the Immortal Emperor will sweep away a square radius of 5 meters with all his strength?

In just a small Nascent Soul stage, we started to talk about cause and effect. What kind of immortal is this? You are using the spiritual energy of heaven and earth every moment. How much karma do you owe? I think the causal relationship should start from the immortal. No more rubbish novels.

What kind of raki stuff are you writing about? At the beginning of the game, you still get treasures from Nascent Soul and can travel through the lower realm at will? Treat someone's terminal illness as a reward for asking for directions, or sneak into someone's sect and take over as their elder? Do you want to build your sect into a first-class sect? Also summoning disciples to give guidance and practice? The last one is also rewarded with a great opportunity? It would be strange if a sect like yours doesn't close down! Why should I be rewarded if I haven't done any great work? You don't even understand rewards and punishments and why are you writing a book? Don't you understand that you are not worried about scarcity but about inequality? Wherever there are people, there will be fights. I really think that I can be invincible with my own strength.

People in the Nascent Soul realm can't search for souls like ordinary people? Illusion? Do you still want to exchange information with Lianqi? If you are timid in the upper world, will you still be timid in the lower world? If you insist on pretending to be an ancestor, even if others know that you have a problem, is it possible that they can guess that you come from the upper world? Absolutely, you are running around provoking enemies for a sect that does not belong to you, and you think you are smart. What kind of crazy thinking is this? If you are really religious, you should spend decades pretending to build a foundation (tens of days in the fairy world) to clear your identity, and just pretend to be an ancestor who was plotted by the enemy. There is no benefit at all. It is just a dog licking, right?

You are at the bottom of the fairy world, and you are also at the bottom of the lower world.

Bai Bubai, literate, misused, almost, those who, also, look uncomfortable

I can only say that the creativity is good, but the author should unify the vocabulary. Sometimes it is written in vernacular, and sometimes it is written in semi-classical Chinese. It is annoying to read.

Sneaking into a world as big as the Lower Realm, you find a sect to restrict yourself. You sell things from the Upper Realm and buy spiritual stones in the Upper Realm. Not to mention that there is nothing for sale in a place as big as the Upper Realm, and Yuanying is only at the bottom, and he comes down with a bunch of oil bottles, and his wealth can lead to the gods.

I can't write it well and I want to be literary and artistic. It just feels like vernacular mixed with classical Chinese, and then the dialogue is awkward and the brain circuit is very zz. Asking someone to see a doctor for your father, then a senior came and asked why he didn't ask me to see a doctor for your father. He said that I was afraid that it would be evil because of the karma. Then the senior asked a few questions and said that I should give your father a look. You replied that it can't be cured, just wait for death. This wave of logic is perfect 💯

The writing is very good, and the fighting scenes, including descriptions of various scenes, are quite touching, but the people in your book can't stand up. I don't understand how the people who came to watch in the first few chapters had the courage to evaluate a Nascent Soul Lord, especially when the other party had just killed a hostile Nascent Soul. Did they eat the courage of a bear's heart and a leopard's guts? It's okay for one person to be like this, everyone is like this. What happens frequently in your book is that low-level people question face-to-face a big master of cultivation whose life and death are completely in the hands of one person. Is this the world of cultivation you wrote about that is really about strength and the order of dignity and inferiority is profound? No one seems to take their lives seriously at all! One is more righteous than the other, and they all live by talking nonsense? To be honest, relying on such mindless words to cause conflicts and advance the plot is really frustrating to watch. The true master of Yuanying is completely lost!

You are not suitable for writing books, so don't write anymore. You are the author who can make me read novels, but I can't stand it until the fourth chapter. Strong 👍

. . . I feel irritated when reading classical Chinese and vernacular Chinese

With such a strong accent on classical Chinese translation, how could one not write about the Spring and Autumn Period, Warring States Period, and Qin Dynasty?

It's better to just write in vernacular. One moment it's classical Chinese and the other it's vernacular. It's so confusing. .

It's well written. I'll follow it. I hope the author doesn't become a eunuch.

It's really poisonous, this setting is in vain

There is no energy loss when traveling through planes? Infinite travel? No limit?

Well written, don't write it next time!

The writing is very appetizing😍😍😍

So far it looks pretty good, I hope I don't write it to waste

I have read about Chapter 5 so far, and I feel it is pretty well written. You can look forward to it. Good luck, author.

I started going to the palace the day after it was released, and I was smiling.

Aboriginal literature, no sense of substitution, not a time traveler

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The writing is okay and the storyline is good. A rare good book that pays attention to details.