Watching in the Dark Night

I have read the 23 new chapters so far. It can be seen that the author has a certain writing skills. The plot of the whole book is compact and the writing is smooth. I am still looking forward to the following stories. Please hurry up for more updates 😊

I actually discovered such a niche article. It's really interesting. I really want to know the ending soon! ! !

The author's writing is quite good. I won't talk about the advantages. I'm afraid you'll be proud. Let's talk about a few issues: 1. The heroine's characteristics are not distinctive. Different from traditional novels, the most important thing in online novels is the characters. Even if the readers cannot remember the plot, they must remember the characters first. But it's almost thirty chapters now, and the heroine's character traits haven't been established yet. It feels like she's just a "camera" watching the plot develop, and she barely even takes the initiative to advance the plot. To put it bluntly, the supporting characters Bai Man, who has not yet had a drink, and Le Jie, who delivers the coffee, are off the production line within a few chapters, and they stand up well. 2. The system is too slow to heat up! The term "three golden chapters" may be a bit exaggerated, but more than 20 chapters have not revealed the plot, which is too slow in an online article! Generally speaking, if it is a fun novel, the fun points should be revealed within five chapters; if it is a plot novel, the core conflict should be revealed within ten chapters. It's almost thirty chapters, and this "murder notice" is still half-covered. The heroine hasn't even confirmed its existence yet. This is too slow. 3. The dead people died too close together, making it a bit surreal. Since the work is based on a realistic background and is not about fantasy and immortality, it cannot be too distorted. In reality, if fatal incidents occur in the same company, all employees will stop working at most on the third incident, and the public security organs will be fully involved. How is it possible that four or five of my colleagues have died, but others are still going to work as if nothing is wrong? The author somewhat underestimates the importance of "murder". And it will become increasingly difficult to write in the future. You can't just kill people in this company, right? Don't be offended by the author for saying so much! But it is precisely because I feel that this article is well written, with smooth writing, natural descriptions, and the ability to establish a character with just a few strokes, that I hope it can be written better, be more engaging, and be liked by more readers, so as not to be lost in the vast sea of ​​literature in the starting point. The buyer is the one who picks the goods! Anyway, I voted for all the recommendations.

Haha, why do you want to peek at me at work😭😭

Ahhhh, there are only a few female videos that have no cp suspense reasoning, so excited! ! !

The writing is good, but the pace is too slow! It's not suitable for a web novel…and did the heroine really say that she was forcibly depraved? Otherwise I don't understand why you are so slow...

Why are there no investment projects?

So is there a ghost? It seems that the main character has lost his memory or looks very similar to others.

Very good, eye-catching, looking forward to the follow-up

It feels like I used to read mystery novels. Come on, author.

Can the mental journey of a wretched man be weakened and simplified? It's so disgusting... It's so depressing that I can't stand it anymore

Nice looking, it's a pity that the taxi driver was not punished

I would like to ask if this final ending will open up another novel?