Immortal Qin

Instead of focusing on cultivating immortality, you only know how to engage in political struggles with these people? Too stupid. Is this kind of intelligence worthy of cultivating immortality? If I were the protagonist and took people and things to hide in Yamaichi, and when I am successful in my cultivation, I would tell everyone in the world that I don't eat beef!

It seems like I haven't read anything until I reach chapter 50. Nothing has changed in history, and the strength is rubbish. If you want to cause trouble, your strength has increased. You can destroy an entire country by one person. However, your strength is still so rubbish and you still want to cause trouble everywhere. This is too stupid.

Isn't it just me? What the hell is the plot of Guigu? It's really disgusting.

Indeed, being a father to a cat looks disgusting

Don't write about cats and dogs, especially about cats and dogs being sons. If you want to write about cats and dogs, just write about killing them if they don't obey. Isn't it about licking dogs? The current author writes that he likes to be a minotaur, pick up worn shoes, and be a dog licker. It's different for you. You act like a licking dog for a cat.

No, did the author not understand the attraction of his book? We want to read the part about cultivating immortals, not the historical literature.

Brother, if you don't cultivate immortality, why don't you make paper? Still want a fiefdom?

Is the author writing about a person who thinks he is perfect? ​​He is writing about his own character. I care too much!

This book still can't break away from all the similar settings of the Immortal Qin Empire. It says that it is building an Immortal Qin, but it says that the innocent girl in Guigu Valley is worshiped, the cat girl loves it, and the girl admires it. This is okay. At least it doesn't feel obvious. A stallion seeks immortality to become an Immortal Qin. The plot is the same as the story of a princess who is in trouble in the dense forest and is sent to his door. The princess also wants to recruit her as a son-in-law. It's funny, just like the main character's cultivation of immortality is useless, and he wants to send a daughter to his bed so that Wei Guo can get it. It's really disdainful. The King of Qin and Ying Zheng assisted him, and he said that the main character was running away with no words and no explanation. No one thought it was impossible to get married as soon as they wanted. Three wives and four concubines, what kind of routine plot of a distressed princess coming to your doorstep with an engagement, makes people think that this princess is worse than a street girl standing on the roadside. A woman is not as good as a maid, not as good as an innocent girl from Guigu. This Immortal Cultivator also talked about building Immortal Qin, saying that one person is the enemy of the country, and also talking about Immortal Qin. In the end, he still needed to rely on the Queen of Wei, who was not as powerful as Qin, to establish an Immortal Qin through a marriage contract. It was worse than bullshit. How could a ten-year alliance be made with this trick? The protagonist killed all the kings alone and supported their king. The queen or the princess or the lover will take control of the country, and then train a few ministers who are cultivating immortals and benevolent. No need to worry. There is another article about cultivating immortals and establishing the Qin Dynasty. It says how the unintentional stallion was forced, or build a brothel to gather the beauties from all over the world. Be more magnanimous and lewd. A little more slutty, at least it will make people feel different.

Obviously there are so many animals to write about. Just write about cats and dogs for ten thousand years, right? At the beginning, most of the only animals are cats and dogs. Don't you get tired of it?

This cat wrote it, as long as the author is happy

The writing style is average, the contextual logic is poor and the misuse of words is a big problem. The logic of the small plot is also poor. Don't worry about these and you can take a look at the subsequent development.

What kind of thing was written after it was put on the shelves? You forced a counter-logical plot just for the sake of sensationalism. You are a cultivator. .

It was fine at first, but when I saw the part about Ghost Valley, I was disgusted. I had just subscribed for 100 chapters, and I wasn't in the mood to read any more, so I ran away.

Don't keep books, you will really die! Follow-up recommendations all rely on continued reading. Without continued reading, there would be no recommendations. No recommendation, no motivation to keep writing So don't keep books!

Qing Shui Wen, the water was seriously added. After reading the free version, I tried the paid version, and it was still a mess.

Wang Ben (date of birth and death unknown), born in Dongxiang, Pinyang, Qin Dynasty (now Fuping County, Shaanxi Province), was a famous general during the Qin Dynasty. Wang Jian's son. In the 21st year of the Qin Dynasty (226 BC), Wang Ben led his troops to attack Chu. The following year, Wang Ben led an army of 600,000 to attack Wei, surrounded Daliang, the capital of Wei, and diverted water from the Yellow River to Daliang. Later, Daliang City was destroyed, and the king of Wei pretended to surrender, taking all the land of Wei, and the state of Wei was destroyed. In the twenty-fifth year of the Qin Dynasty (222 BC), Wang Ben led his troops to attack Yan State Liaodong, captured Yan Wang Xi, and destroyed the Yan State. Then he returned to attack the state of Dai and captured Dai Wangjia. The two countries Yan and Zhao were completely destroyed. In the twenty-sixth year of the Qin Dynasty (221 BC), Wang Ben was ordered to lead his army south to attack Qi. Wang Ben learned the lesson of defeating Chu and underestimating the enemy. He avoided the front of Qi and went south from Yan. He took advantage of the weakness and penetrated directly into Linzi, catching the Qi people off guard and quickly falling apart. The Qin army captured Linzi in one fell swoop, Qi Wangjian surrendered, Qi was destroyed, and China was unified. In Qin's war to unify China, he made outstanding military exploits and was awarded the title of Marquis of Tongwu for his merits. He once accompanied the First Emperor of Qin on his eastward tour of Langye.

I was getting bored, so I skipped to the latest chapter and couldn't stand it anymore.

The first ten or so chapters were somewhat interesting. I thought it would develop like the power system of Mingyue in the Qin Dynasty, and eventually become the Creator. Unfortunately, it didn't just collapse.

Somewhat similar to an AI fixed framework

There are still a lot of typos, and the details are a bit difficult to figure out. If you want to write well, you need to pay attention to these problems. I can only say that you should work harder.

To be honest, it's pretty good-looking. Although it's a bit watered down, the process is slowly advancing and the training system hasn't collapsed yet. Come on.

What the hell is Wei? Shouldn't it be?

Why are there so many typos😥

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