Fisherman: Add Some Life to My Attributes

I subscribed to a chapter to complain and read the first few chapters. Did the author watch too many Haihai videos? There are all kinds of dramas about writing a book and talking to yourself all the time. You have to know that this is a book, not a live broadcast or a short video. A live short video needs to be chatty and chatty to be watched, but a novel is different, it is too embarrassing to watch.

Wang Dahai is one paragraph at a time. Didn't we learn a few tricks in primary school composition?

It's a bit awkward, the sense of immersion is not strong, the writing skills are still a bit poor, some parts feel not handled so smoothly, and the transitions are stiff. . . 😒😒😒

This protagonist has no emotions at all. In addition to hurrying up to make money every day, I also hurry up to make money. Tiantian has done nothing else but make money. The protagonist just eats and sleeps to make money every day, every day. I never saw the protagonist doing anything else, not even to relax. Not to mention having a golden finger, I know that I won't be short of money in the future. Even if I don't have a golden finger, no one will be like the protagonist. He does nothing but make money every day. Just like the protagonist has no friends, no relatives, and no hobbies. I don't even watch any videos. What's the point of the author keeping the protagonist alive? The protagonist might as well be dead. What's the point of living? Depend on

The protagonist is like a robot, making money by knowing that the machine is without any emotion. It's the same every day, no surprises at all, it looks so boring

Making money by sticking to the rules and seizing the time, the protagonist is so obsessed with money that he has no time to rest at all. You already have a golden finger. You know you won't be short of money in the future, but you still worry about making money. It's really boring. I can't do any other activities. I just make money every day. I'm tired of watching it.

Every time I have a conversation with someone, I always use the word "ah"! So disgusting

The protagonist, don't know how to enjoy life just to make money! Neither women nor children!

Thousands of people travel to the sea every day, I'm convinced

You can catch the sea in the early stage. If you have money, you should go fishing or fish first, otherwise it will be boring to watch.

Three ounces of blue crab king? I'm guessing I'm not even an adult yet, would you like to have some common sense?

Stone crabs are not poisonous, I'm speechless! After seeing such an introduction, I have no desire to read it.

Is the protagonist's equipment bound to his parents and relatives? ? ?

It's not enough at all. Please give me more.