
Douluo: Bibi Dong, Why Are You Crying After I Leave!
斗罗:比比东,我走后你哭什么!
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- Completed
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- 583k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I can understand exchanging memories with Sanyan, but why are there still memories from the previous life? You're kidding me, it's too funny.
The protagonist is really a waste. As a time traveler, he still works as a licker for a dog. It is unreasonable for the protagonist not to die. He should die.
Man, this genre is not popular anymore. It used to be okay, but now there are too many of them. The male protagonist is a dog licker, and then he stops licking after being reborn. The female protagonist comes to chase him again, and then chases her husband in the crematorium. There are too many of this kind now. I don't even bother to read this kind of routine. The most annoying ones are dog lickers, cuckolds, and giving away women.
It's so licking. It's been like that for ten years and I'm still licking my pussy.
This talent background can also allow 🍬 to inherit the throne, right? 😅😅😅, It doesn't matter whether you lick it or not, it's all written like this, but the protagonist is really fw😅, the more nb you write in this second life, the more it looks like the protagonist fw
The protagonist created is very problematic
There are quite a few problems. Qian Renxue did not inherit the martial spirit of the protagonist or Bibi Dong. You can say that she mutated into a seraph and her adoptive father was killed. She remained unmoved and continued to lick Bibi Dong. She traveled through time and knew the plot and was a step ahead of Tang San. In the end, Tang San became a god and Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue were killed (the plot of the first chapter). She went up and gave it to her for free. The original Qian Renxue Renxue chased Tang San for hundreds of years, but because she had feelings for Tang San, she let it go. The protagonist did nothing when he traveled back in time (he knew the plot and gave away his daughter). Otherwise, there is no way to explain how Tang San escaped. The worst thing was Qianxunji (the apprentice he accepted eventually killed him, and his adopted son became a white-eyed wolf. His father sacrificed Qian Renxue to become a god, and the inheritance of the angel god was also broken)
It's outrageous. With this background and the plot, can't a Tang San be killed? I directly took the Ice and Fire Mandarin Duck Pot and gave Qian Renxue enough fatherly love to prevent her from being an undercover agent. Even if the horns of the pig were a pig, I couldn't think of how to lose.
It's hard to imagine a normal time-traveler acting like a licking dog, traveling to a fantasy world, not working hard to cultivate and grow, and becoming a 🐶? In the past, the underworld cultivators worked hard to plunder resources, and they did not have the habit of being a dog licker. You said that if it was some kind of dog licking system, it would be fine if there were rewards, but they still licked when there was nothing. I really don't understand.
The guy next door really let go. You kept talking about keeping a distance, but then you fucked me again. I really can't hold it in anymore.
This kind of flow is really bad. Do you want to read what you write in your profile? A 12-winged fallen angel, Qian Renxue has only six wings and is born at level 20. Dou Yi, this fallen angel martial soul, should treat Qian Daoliu as saying that the power is good or bad depending on the user. But if you use a god-level talent as a love dog... Most people would think it is LOW. If you practice normally and reach level 95 before 30, there will be no problem. Where will the plot end? What kind of woman do you want that you don't have? Use Shuangwen's talent to make it like this. The plot structure of Chasing the Husband's Crematorium must be reasonable, it is indeed a poison 😅
In your previous introduction, "Bibi Dong has no green protagonist, has no relationship with Yu Xiaogang, and has no relationship with Yu Xiaogang in the original work." You emphasized that this was just to accept Bibi Dong after rebirth. What's wrong? The author's cuckold is also divided into dark green, light green and fluorescent green? Do you know what it means that once you are unfaithful, you will never be hired?
The protagonist is inexplicable, and the introduction is also inexplicable. I feel like it was written by a woman.
The more you write about the protagonist and the heroine, the less familiar they become. Other fanfics wish that the hero and the heroine sleep together all the time. But now you find that the heroine and the child look like a couple, and the hero becomes a third party, which is superfluous 😅
Typical studio writing
Chapter 26 is on the shelves Studio article
Brother, if you want to write about licking dogs, you should learn more about licking dogs. Ask the licking dogs around you. They are willing to die, but it is absolutely impossible to give up and not lick them. Just like a person whose IQ is not too high (stupid), it is impossible to become smart after being reborn. There is also a love brain, which you may not have encountered before and is really helpless. I don't even want to describe it, but if you tell me that the love brain suddenly woke up that day, or that person didn't lose his memory or changed to a different person, otherwise don't bother me.
The idea of licking the dog is that they must die together. As a time traveler, you don't know that God can resurrect people. The protagonist will not become a god and later resurrect Qian Renxue.
After reading the comments, I feel relieved. You guys still have brains.
Have you read the author's short stories on Douyin?🤭
The introduction is poisonous at first glance. This kind of PS-marked content is often applied for in novels. It's a good starting point.
I already feel sick to my stomach from dog-licking stories, and now I want to know who the heroine is? I won't continue watching Bibi Dong, it's so disgusting. The protagonist licks so hard, but in the end Bibi Dong still loves Yu Xiaogang deeply. Is this considered spiritual cheating in some sense?
You dare to kill Tang San, you are awesome. Assume that God Shura, who has the core of the God Realm, does not exist. This protagonist is nothing but a licking dog with a weak brain. When he pretends that there is only Douluo Star but no God Realm, he still feels that God Shura, who has the core of the God Realm in hand, is just like that, so confident and arrogant. The heart is as high as the sky. Look at the protagonists in the fan fiction. One of them is a licker. The country is easy to change, but the nature is hard to change, which is a waste of resources.
At first glance, it looks like: Bibi Dong, why are you crying when I go through your back door?
How could Tang San be born if they had directly destroyed the birth point of Tang San?
What is the author's mentality?
When I see the protagonist, I think that in the previous life, the protagonist was the victim of his girlfriend being abducted by a black man, right?
The main plot is over before it even begins. Later on, the writing got worse and worse. More and more intelligent.
How about the author make up an ending? This ending is really bad.
Authors join the group to let the author have a good time, it seems he likes to be scolded
This spacious description has the beauty of ancient female videos 🙂
The first life: The ultimate big licking dog, the second life: Neptune, the character change of this protagonist is too outrageous, was it just for the purpose of writing a stallion to pave the way 😂
Is this finished? Oh my God! It feels like there are a lot of holes that have not been filled 😅