I Am in Douluo, and the Female Pope Uses Me as Her First Love Substitute.

I have read dozens of chapters so far. First of all, this book has a pretty good setting for the protagonist's martial spirit, and the settings for improving his strength are also reasonable. But I don't understand the choice of the heroine. Faced with a Pope teacher who brings you back but has ulterior motives, he just teaches you knowledge on a daily basis. , Does not have much contact with the protagonist, and is still thinking about Yu Xiaogang. If you treat her as a teacher or a female supporting role to repay her kindness, this is human nature, but falling in love for no reason is more ridiculous. It is better to say that you are motivated by sex, which lowers the image of the protagonist. On the contrary, Qian Renxue is more pure. She only approaches the protagonist out of curiosity and loneliness. She will also provide various help to the protagonist without involving too many interest disputes. The relationship between them is also more pure. There is really no point in forcibly forming a CP in the article. Everything should go with the flow. If this development continues, Qian Renxue will be more logical as the heroine.

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Qian Renxue

Looking at the entire Douluo Yi, from the Golden Dragon Beard Needle with Crystal Hair to the Eight Spider Spears, Immortal Grass, Vast Sea, Universe Cover, etc., All the opportunities Tang San got, big and small, can be left here, and the author will check for any gaps and fill them in.

Shennong appears: Except for the fact that the main character starts with the Yu Xiaogang template and there are no plug-ins, this book is just like the ordinary second-generation Douluo harem novels. Where there should be no brains, there are no brains. Where there should be bugs, there are bugs. Apart from being a little creative, this book has no merit.

Purely cute new author, I found the problem after reading a few chapters. It would have been nice to write an introduction to the effects of dragon blood grass, but the author was kind enough to start talking about Yu Xiaogang's family relationships in the original novel and talk about a bunch of conspiracy theories. Let me ask you whether you wrote this book as a fan or as research notes for the original work? If you can't tell the difference, don't write it!

The perfect world blends into Douluo. . . . . Really unworthy😒

Is this cover picture of the author Die not available? I'll give it a try

Why should the protagonist give the Ice and Fire Eyes to Wuhun Palace? Dugu Fu gave the protagonist the Ice and Fire Eyes and Fairy Grass, so why did the protagonist call everyone in Wuhun Palace to the Eyes? There is a huge difference between the protagonist giving them the fairy grass himself and the Wuhun Palace giving it to them! They owe the protagonist a huge favor by giving it themselves, and the protagonist informs Wuhun Palace, and Wuhun Palace distributes it. That is a favor they owe to Wuhun Palace. Although they also benefit from the protagonist, it is definitely not as big as the protagonist giving it to them in his own name! The Pope came to the Liangyi Eye and saw so many fairy grasses, and said to the protagonist: You have made a great contribution. It feels very strange. It's like you find an antique in the field, and then the relevant department gives you a banner, saying that you have made a great contribution. The protagonist can collect all the fairy grass by himself first, return to Wuhun Palace and say that he has discovered the secret realm, and then give it to the Pope, or he can say in front of the Pope that he has discovered the secret realm, and then give it to the corresponding person.

There is too much intrusion, it's not good-looking ₍⸝⸝·ᴥ·⸝⸝₎

The two Supreme Bones and Chongtong Eyes of the Dai family are too speechless. Are they the perfect ones?

Sister Die actually surpassed the protagonist. Well, the number of likes is outrageous.

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Wang Donger, Ye Guyi, Wang Qiuer, Xiao Xiao, Jiang Nannan, Tianmeng (Nianghua), Electrolux (Nianghua) Ice Emperor, Snow Emperor, Liya, Lijing, Sea Princess, Bajiao, Gillian, Youyou, Orange, Luanfeng, Ke Ke, Xu Jiujiu, Qingya, Wei Na, Mu Xue, Wu Ming, Lan Susu, Lan Luoluo, Nan Qiuqiu, Nan Shuishui , Nana, Meng Hongchen, Moon Appreciation, An Lengye, Fei Yuyan, Yu Mengdi, Yichen (Dou Er), Wang Chengxi, Cain, Dragon Girl, Wu Yun, Wu Yu, Tang Ya, Ma Xiaotao, Zhou Yi, Hibiscus, Han Ruoruo, Ling Luochen, Xixi, Zhu Lu, Cui Yajie, Xu Tianzhen, Bai, Muyue, Su Tong, Zhang Lexuan, Xue Ling Xun (Xueying), Gu Yuena, Bi Ji, Zi Ji, Demon Emperor, Lan Fuzi, Tang Wulin (Nianghua), Wu Changkong (Nianghua), Lang, Ye Xinglan, Xu Xiaoyan, Yuanen Yehui, Wu Siduo, Dai Yun'er, Long Yuxue, Yali, Long Yeyue, Mo Lan, Shi Mengshan, Xia Zhengleng, Tang Ziran's mother, Nunnally, Long Bing, Li Yaoyao, Ling Zichen, Leng Yaozhu, Leng Yulai, Ye Lingtong, Xingxuan, Bai Xiuxiu, Lan Mengqin, Tang Yuge, Yuan Enhuihui, Qiangu Yourou, Le Qingling, Yingluohong, Lan Bing, Tang Ximeng, Yun Calyx, Fairy Queen, Blue Butterfly, Nan Cheng, Chen Wuzhu, Zhang Chujia, Jia Lin, Long Tianyang, Crimson Mother , Song Lao, Cai Mei'er, Xian Lin'er, Ye Xishui, Fengling, Duchess, Huo Yun'er, Dai Luoli's mother, Xu Yun, Xiao Wu, Tang San (Nianghua), Xiao Wu's mother, Ning Rongrong, Zhu Zhuqing, the three Shangguan sisters, Feng Nu, Lan Chen, Su La, Li Haiyang, Anya, Xiang Luan, Ye Lianqin, the Demon King, Lily , Fei Er, Tian Qin, Piaomiao, Mo Yue, Mu Zimo, Hai Xing, Li Muzi, Evil Emperor (Nianghua), Golden Dragon Princess, the first angel god, Qian Renxue, Bibi Dong, Hu Liena, Ye Lingling, Xue Ke, Liu Erlong, Meng Yiran, Chaotian Xiang, Doudou, Bo Saixi, A Yin, Dark Dragon King, Water Dragon King, Lust. God, God of Light, God of Water, Bai Chenxiang, Wife of the Dragon God, Sheng Cai'er, Bai, Lan Yanyu, Li Xin, Meng Qingqing, Sun Wanwan, Qiao Huan'er, Young Master Mei, Su Qin, Peacock Princess (Luo Qingzhu), Jin Miaosen, Huo Ling'er, Reason Heart, Red One to Red Eighteen, Meng Te Shi, The First Generation of Peacock Demon Emperor, Cheng Zicheng, Ling Muxue, Huang Bingbing, Yan Yi, Liuli Tianjing Emperor, Crystal Demon Emperor, Tianyang Tianjing Emperor, Earthyin Tianjing Emperor, Yuan Enxingtian, Li Jiangqi, Qiu Zixuan, Lan Yinhai, Audrey, Hepburn, Ling Menglu, Zisang Liuying, Yue Li, Wang Changxin, Ming Xi, Yan Yao, Tang Ling, God of Kindness, Goddess of Life, Dai Ying

It's been more than ten chapters, but I haven't seen anything that attracted me. Whether it is the strange system, the strange martial spirit, or the protagonist's imagination... There is nothing. The only idea is that the protagonist feeds Luo Sanpao dragon blood grass. It's like there is a little book. The protagonist's golden finger is that the author writes that no one else in Douluo Continent can eat soul beast meat, and the protagonist relies on eating soul beast meat to take off. This kind of thinking that vomits blood

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First of all, I have never been an author, but I want to say, is it difficult to write a hundred chapters a day? It's not that I'm unreasonable. After all, I said at the beginning that I have never been an author.

After looking at it, the author's creativity is quite good. If I just write it as a Douluo fan, I should be able to achieve some results, but I just want to make a lot of chaos and poison points. Now it seems that the author's writing style can't be controlled at all, and it is very likely to die violently later.

Just like Qingjiao's Hell Beginning, it gets off topic as I write it. Obviously the plot of a book should revolve around the protagonist, but because the protagonist is teased too much in the early stage, if the protagonist participates in the plot in the later stage, it would be cruelty. Therefore, fan fiction in which the protagonist is born earlier than Tang San often suffers from a common problem in the middle and later stages - that is, after the plot begins, the protagonist's role is gone, and all the "juniors" compete with Tang San. The protagonist of the story was unknowingly changed to Tang San, and all the plots revolved around him. The protagonist was hidden, and did not appear once in hundreds of chapters, which was very discouraging...

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What the hell, this book is even more weird than Tang Wutong's stitching😦

It's really humorous. Each of the villains is inferior to the other. I'm curious as to how you, a beast master, can fight like Xiao Yan.

Can you please not bring trouble to Xiao Yan's strange fire? I feel really unhappy watching this.

The novel is too confusing to read. The author's imagination is beyond the reach of most people.

Are you writing fan fiction? Wouldn't it be better to be original? What are you writing about?

Don't write about the beginning of waste material flow in the next book⑧. The twin martial spirits are the standard equipment for the protagonist. Only those geniuses with eye body martial arts and powerful beast martial arts like Zihuang Tianlong are good-looking.

Without Bibi Dong, there would be no cash-achieving protagonist. Okay, okay, then we, the top powers, have to make arrangements carefully. We can predict the future and your story has already been running on our fixed route. You can't resist because you can't have such a powerful force.

Recommend a new book - Peerless Tang Sect: I Simulate the Legend of the Dragon King

It sucks. The slow rhythm makes me feel sleepy.

It's not great, it's a big mistake, and the author is self-righteous.