Douluo: Draw the Lotus Lantern at the Beginning

Tang Hao has already killed you, but you still dare to hang out in front of Tang Hao. It is best to graduate from elementary school and go to another academy. Going to Shrek is just asking for death.

Write the Fengshen Kicks as awesome, and don't make them like other fans. The Aeolus Kicks are nothing but speed.

Let me tell the author about a martial arts secret book that is even more evil than the Evil Sword Manual and the Sunflower Book, the Dream-Breaking Knife. The reason is that a general spent his whole life practicing sword skills and was invincible. However, after returning from a victorious battle, his wife cheated on him without any reason or reason. Because of a simple cheating, he was angry and didn't understand, so he killed his wife with a knife, and later became a demon. After being beheaded by righteous people, he left behind a cursed super martial arts secret book "Dream Breaking Knife". Once he practices, a man will cheat on his wife, his daughter will cheat on his family, and his wife will cheat on him. All the women you love in it, the women you love will definitely cheat. However, the more they cheat, the stronger and scarier you will be. The stronger and scarier you are, the more ruthlessly your women will cheat. In an infinite cycle, you will step on your left foot and ascend to the sky with your right foot. There is a monk. He didn't believe in evil because he didn't have a wife. As a result, after he became a master of martial arts, his eighty-year-old mother cheated on him... He also became a demon and was beheaded by righteous people... Mainly because they were cheated hard enough. There is no limit to the dream-breaking knife. The author can adopt it and give it a try

Good guy, another black bunny.

A bunch of people's comments have no focus, old bottles, new wine, old routines and new themes. The previous series of birth and junior college trends are not very good. I don't know what the meaning of this is. There is no opportunity and no backing. It is purely based on the golden finger lottery. The supporting characters have some brains, but they don't match the settings of the original work. However, I feel that the pretentious and slap-in-the-face plot is a bit draggy. I suggest you write less about what the brainless supporting characters say, and instead write about the domineering side of the protagonist. I don't know if some of the places were set by the author himself or mistakenly set up, but they don't particularly affect the perception. Generally speaking, it's not a particularly bad Douluo fanfic, so you can give it a look.

At first when I read the beginning, I thought it was a serious fanfic, even though it was written in a deliberately shady way. But

The author is very thoughtful, although it is a bit deliberately dark, but it looks okay.

Author, your eight stars are too exaggerated. The most you can get is four stars. Originally, only the complete game can be counted as five stars. This is more reasonable!

Every time I see something written in a book, I write about Naruto or One Piece. This is just like the current movies. If you are afraid of death, can't you write your own style?

The novel I wrote after an 11-day break was recommended by the editor in the category. What does the Qidian editor do for food?

To be honest, Tang Hao wouldn't do this unless he was his biological son. It depends on what the author said. If he was his biological son, then Tang Hao would not have murderous intentions. At most, the protagonist would be able to assist Tang San instead of just obeying Tang San. Although Tang Hao's character was not good, he was still good to his family.

The author's opinion is that the skills of Japanese comics are hesitant and stronger than those of Chinese comics. Could it be that none of the skills of Chinese comics can restrain Douluo Wuhun? You can use Japanese manga skills to make up the numbers.

Author, there is something wrong with your lottery mechanism. How can a high-explosive water be called a six-star?

Can the author hurry up and write two chapters in one day so that the foreigner next door can see it and think I look down on it?

Tang San: The evil Tang Feng is simply unacceptable!

Update soon. I finished reading it in one night🙄

Emmm I don't know why I didn't have the desire to read Luffy when I saw it in the introduction. The painting style is different. Of course it's not just Luffy, but also other modern weapons. I also want to complain about it, but I'm afraid that Tang San can play with hidden weapons and the protagonist plays with guns. This is indeed my personal poison. I don't like to see reforms. Such energy-producing weapons should not appear in the fantasy martial arts section, especially in this sewer world. It will give me the illusion that it is not as good as our world.

Levels 7-8 are still modern weapons, and your level 10 is considered awesome in the fantasy world of immortality. This is too big a leap, and the drawing style of the summoned character is wrong. Not to mention summoning Dou Po from next door, the martial arts style is better than the pirate, especially Luffy's style. You can only accept it if you watch anime. If he is your friend, you will definitely not be able to stand it.

Update once a day, I don't want to keep it anymore 😳

Compared to me, who can't even be considered a provocateur, you're doing quite well. I'm just a part-time coder, so it would be best if I could have a reader. I can write three thousand words a day without me, just don't forget your original intention and just entertain yourself.

Ling Zichen, who summoned Dou San, came over and made huge profits immediately.

Recommended book: Douluo: I, the King of Two Gods, beat Tang San violently

It's too strong of a personal emotional desire and I can't stand it anymore. Douluo should write some wonderful ideas for upgrading. A strong emotional desire is worse than watching a Gongdou drama!