Be Serious, This Is a Cultivator!

Premise: The following are my personal opinions Summary: A very different kind of funny cultivating immortality, an alternative invincible novel Theme: A very novel, cruel and serious world of cultivating immortals meets a protagonist with a funny style, which makes people's eyes shine at the beginning In terms of the plot: most of the time it is a nonsensical comedy style with complex ingredients, but it has its own underlying logic and contains certain anti-routine plots. The protagonist has a bitter life experience and a deep hatred Writing: Clear and smooth Poisonous Points: At the beginning of the Mountain Worship Examination, the feeling of urban fantasy academy came to my face, and the use of "god" level in the world of cultivating immortals was a little bit awkward, and the sect mission was a bit similar to push. A science-based unit drama (the above-mentioned poisonous points would be okay if you can put a funny filter into it) PS: The initial impression of the master is not good Recommendation: Very novel subject matter, well written, completely enjoyable to watch

Li Changle

This book now completely fails to compare with the opening chapters. The attraction of the first few chapters is that the protagonist uses funny comic style to deflect or change the world. But now in the plot of the sect competition, the protagonist's style of painting has been changed by the world. Using funny superpowers to show off, and fitting it into an existing framework, the protagonist himself and the audience's ideas are not biased at all and are still within the traditional world view of immortality. It can be said that the dross is taken and the essence is discarded. Took it out from the bookshelf first. Maybe it will be a lot better if we meet again in the future.

He is also a beautiful master and has a low IQ. Even the fish from the Ice Age shouted "familiar" after looking at him.

I originally thought that the protagonist with a funny style of painting invaded the cruel world of immortality, and the performance of my style was superior to yours, but in the end, it fell back to the traditional routine of ordinary immortality novels.

You have gone astray, most of you want to see Tom's ability, but in the end, you still write ordinary articles about cultivating immortals. What's the point of this?

The more I read it, the more it looked like a common routine about cultivating immortals. I didn't feel that it was a spoof. A funny character like Tom is basically able to do whatever he thinks is possible, and there are cognitive differences in thinking. It is said that if you dig out everything, you don't even have rice. If you step on other people's feet, they will definitely become swollen and jump. If someone is poked with a sharp object, they will definitely scream in pain. When running in the air, as long as you don't look down, you will definitely not fall. If you look at it, you will definitely fall down. There are many similar things, and it can also develop various kinds of characters according to its thinking. Then, the more serious the characters in the world of immortality are portrayed, the stronger the dramatic contrast will be. After reading more than ten chapters, it was as dull as boiling water, alas.

I went astray and entered the traditional path of cultivating immortals, and my impression dropped instantly. To be precise, something is wrong starting from the description of the protagonist's bitterness and deep hatred. The funny and happy imaginary article must bear a bloody feud...

After reading it, the book is relatively normal. After adding the sect, it is considered a normal fairy tale novel. Basically, there is no big poisonous point, but I often laugh bitterly.

I feel that the author's setting is a bit strange. The general setting for cultivating immortals is that the quality of advanced spiritual objects does not start until the foundation building pill reaches the golden elixir. The author started from the third level of Qi training, and after one month of training, he went to find rare and high-quality spiritual objects. It is a bit stupid.

I thought it was a normal Cultivation of Immortality plus a funny stream plug-in, but the reality of your Cultivation of Immortality is also a funny stream. Now there is no contrast and it's boring.

The experience of going down the mountain doesn't feel right with the overall theme. I have immortal capital and a funny writing style. Why do I do this and that every time I go down the mountain, and each one has some shocking secret? It feels fragmented, and Tom's skills are not used It feels like I'm suffering. It becomes funny when playing, and I love to see the confused look on the other side In daily life, this Tom system is just an ordinary golden finger When you go down the mountain, there are all kinds of secrets, and it reads weirdly This system is not used, for example, it is deformed at will. Fully accepted the infiltration mission, two-dimensionalization can come and go freely I don't quite understand what style of writing you want to write It feels like you want to write something funny, but as soon as you go down the mountain, you go back to the traditional cultivation of immortals. Use I know it is written in the introduction that this is a cruel world of cultivating immortals, but since you have added this Tom system, you can write more relaxedly around the protagonist I don't know why I am very tired now. I wanted to read it, but I felt a little tired after reading it.

The protagonist is too serious and not entertaining enough. This kind of cheating behavior should be more crazy.

The subject matter is quite interesting, but it's really bad even if it's bad Especially when the sect selection started, it got worse and worse after meeting the female master.

Isn't it a little off-topic? According to the current writing method, isn't it just a normal article about cultivating immortals? There should be more funny elements

Nice introduction. I won't read the content.

It's quite interesting, but I feel that the so-and-so peak with only one person left is too cliche.

I think the author is a bit conservative and should be more outrageous when writing funny articles.

In other words, the first few chapters at the beginning can completely change later, and the meaning is not as boring as other normal fairy tales.

It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away

There is a female master who knows at a glance that she is on the incest route

I'm numb. My Tom Tom fairy is gone.

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Please read the latest chapter first if you are a book reader. Now I recommend you only read it. If you don't pay attention, you will die. You don't want a rising star to fall like this.

I feel like the author has hit the nail on the head. The one I wrote before was very good because it was too talented.

I checked back after a while and found it was broken.

A story about two male protagonists, "The Last One" The first male protagonist is ugly and lecherous. He was supposed to be the devil in the world of demons. But by some mistake, he was recognized as the holy son of the fairy world. From then on, he embarked on the path of the prodigal son's return... The second male protagonist, his personality, is upright and handsome. He was supposed to be the holy son of the fairy world. But by mistake, he was destined to be the holy son of the fairy world. Next, he was identified as the Demon Son of the Demon Realm, and has since embarked on the path of becoming a villain... The story unfolds between these two half-brothers... This is the theme of this novel, if you are interested in reading it, read it, at least the logic is online, the plot is reasonable, and there are laughs and tears. Welcome to complain

Hello, I am Ma Wan, Ma Wen's younger brother.

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In fact, this kind of thinking is not suitable for cultivation novels. A world without cultivation should be better.