Stairway to Heaven

Ahhhh! Springfield's writing is so beautiful! Being a fan! However, I have the following suggestions, which I hope will be adopted: 1. The plot advances too slowly, and it seems that there is no clear main line yet 2. There is currently no reasonable world view (it seems to be given in Chapter 30). The information is too fragmented 3. I swallowed too much, and the content of the previous chapter does not connect with the next chapter (although I don't know why? But it would be better if it could be changed) I wish this book will get better and better!

I am Chuntian, a salted fish author who just opened this platform and updated it. I hope everyone can like my work~ I wish everyone a happy reading!

The first person is not suitable for the market. You can change it to the third person. Hehehe~

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Well written. It's a pity that it's not very popular. Wo has a way to get more readers to pay attention to this book, Weiwei: CCJCCJ129

I came to visit with my work "These Big Shots Are Myself" and thank you! Added to favorites, great ideas, and the author's writing is very good!