You Are Not Allowed to Travel Through Time, Otherwise You Will Be Arrested!

I love reading it. I've watched it for 681 minutes and I haven't written a review yet. The language of this book is interesting, the story is professional, and the characters are distinctive. The dialogue between the characters will make people feel that this is it; the story plot has wonderful twists and turns; the main line is unambiguous, reasonable and interesting; it would be better if there were more emotions ヾ(Ő∀Ő๑)ﾉIn fact, I believe in the author's skill, so just follow your own pace. Finally, the author is an amateur writer. He will update two chapters on time at 12 o'clock every day and save the manuscript. I hope you can support me a lot. Thank you Boss Ma for the wonderful stories and happiness!

Highlights: Relaxed "daily life", bizarre "accidents" and abnormal invasions such as the fourth natural disaster. Reading experience: The occasional jokes and cold jokes in the article often make people chuckle, making the overall story less heavy, and making it less boring because of too many jokes. The author is very flirtatious and can interact with readers. 1. It feels like watching a unit drama or catching up on a series. Some of the plot twists are very interesting. The author's ideas are unique and strange, and the development of the following chapters will also be unexpected. 2. The author is working hard to build a world in his imagination, adding many creative ideas, which is unique and unconventional. 3. The protagonist is energetic, positive, and has his own thoughts and opinions. There are many story characters in the plot. When they appear interspersed, it will feel like a group drama. 4. The author already has a million-word version of "Dream Walker", and there are also guest appearances in the new work, but this will not affect the reading of the new work, but will give it a "multiverse" feeling. 5. Finally, it is a small shortcoming that I personally think. There are many scenes and story characters, and some characters will have nicknames. Maybe due to the length and the need to create a refreshing point, some characters are not portrayed well enough. If you don't watch carefully, you may not be able to remember who the plot characters suddenly appear besides the protagonist group. PS: Try writing book reviews to practice your writing skills. If you don't like it, don't comment. Corrections and friendly exchanges are welcome.

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Thank you for your vote, I have nothing to repay except working hard to write a good story. Thank you for the encouragement and bow solemnly. 🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️

Help, the author obviously worked very hard to update but I still can't read enough. Help, please update, I can't sleep at night! (Although I started watching it from the middle, I still lie awake at night waiting for updates) (crazy crawling) (screaming)

Strongly request Qidian to sign the contract, such a good work 👍👍🌹🌹🌹

I've tried to create a reader group, and everyone is welcome to chat. 716190371 To be honest, I have no experience in operation and management, and I don't know if anyone will like it. Since a friend said to do it, I will give it a try, hehe😁😁😁

I sincerely invite my good friends to come and read the new book. I hope you like it. {"NickName":"Eighteen-year-old Duck Chef","UserId":395262529}😁😁😁

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I accepted the suggestions of several friends and changed the title "The Top of the Origin Field" to "My Days Working in the Anti-Fourth Natural Disaster Bureau". Next, I will use some time to modify the cover and introduction. The content will not undergo major revisions, but may undergo minor revisions. The outline will not change and updates will not be affected. I still have the same attitude as always: I accept all criticisms, suggestions and opinions. I am not a person who is eager for quick success and quick success. I am not eager to gain fame and fortune, but I really want to continuously improve my abilities and knowledge. My only goal is to create a work that everyone likes and convey the thoughts I want to express to everyone. So, I welcome all criticisms and kindly ask for your comments and suggestions. Ma Jiefu bows to express his gratitude! 🙇‍♂️

Lao Ma, I'll give you the whole job Caught it

Today's recipe: Kelp knot stew is too fat. Take two kelp knots, one braised chicken leg, one spoonful of twice-cooked pork with onions for no apparent reason, one spoonful of fried bean sprouts and leeks, watermelon instead of fruit, rice + yogurt. It's cloudy today, and I'm anxious to see the bayberry stems, which are too high to reach.

Yes, the old fox has a stable group👍

There are indeed many friends (I counted, nearly 30 people) who made valuable suggestions, saying that the number of words per chapter is currently too many. Whether it is based on reading habits or other considerations, the number of words per chapter of 3000 + close to 4000 is indeed too much. This is a wonderful expectation for me. Conciseness is the beauty of Chinese. I am a long-winded person, which is a big shortcoming and needs to be corrected. Moreover, shorter chapters mean that the level of suspense in chapters, placement of cool points, and story rhythm advancement must be improved, optimized and reconstructed. This is a new and more advanced requirement for me, and it is worth thinking about. The first volume is almost over, and I don't think it makes much sense to make a major overhaul. After all, the number of words is not a fatal problem like the narrative method or paragraphing of the previous work. I decided to compress each chapter to 2000-2500 words starting from the second volume. In this case, the total number of daily updates will decrease. It seems acceptable at the moment. If circumstances permit, I will consider updating three chapters a day and keep the total word count unchanged. Thank you for your opinions. I welcome everyone to give me all kinds of opinions and criticisms. I will definitely study and accept them seriously!

Thanks to my good friend for the red envelope. To be honest, I really don't know how to read red envelopes. I don't know who sent them, so I would like to post a thank you🙏🙏🙏

The opening chapter is well written, why haven't I signed a contract yet?

I wish the author will write better and better, and the book lovers will become richer and richer.

Don't vilify me, I don't have bags under my eyes, I'm so handsome ᕦ(ò_óˇ)ᕤ

It's late today, I caught up to 18th place. Looking at your collection, it's over 500. If there are only a few people following you, it doesn't necessarily mean that your writing is really bad. It may be that you posted too fast and readers couldn't catch up. To be honest, even though I support you so much, it still takes me a while to read it every day. Think about it, you have published hundreds of thousands of words in one go, and even if people like your work, they won't have time to read it. So there may be this reason why I can't continue reading. To be honest, I really think your writing is pretty good, at least it won't lead to failure to sign the contract. Not to mention the masters, I have read many of Sanjiang's recommendations and I can write the beginning. There are many that I can't finish writing after more than ten chapters. I suggest you publish your book slowly and wait for your readers. 500 collections, if there are 50 follow-up readers, are you still worried about not being able to sign?

As a newcomer, I want to learn from you. As a reader, I would like to make a small suggestion. Would it be better to keep the number of words in each chapter to around 2,000? After reading a few chapters, I felt it was a bit too lengthy. The cover could also be changed. Taobao can make it for 5 yuan, which is quite nice.

What's wrong with the weather is that it didn't rain during the hottest period, but now it rains frequently. It used to be cool, but now it's sweltering and humid.

It rained heavily in the middle of the night, and the rain clouds came over

It's not the typhoon, it's probably getting closer this time, there's a lot of rain, and the temperature has dropped.

The typhoon has nothing to do with Ningbo again. Is this place so evil?

The typhoon went to Xiamen again, and it rained all day today

Ah, I finally didn't use the air conditioner last night, it was much cooler.

I shipped the goods yesterday. I guess I have nothing to do for the time being. I plan to sit on the chair and play with my phone all day.

The temperature has gone up again, but it's still ok at night

I just received the notification that the last drink I will receive is iced black tea and oriental leaves. In total, I will bring ten boxes back and drink them slowly.

It rains a little every day, it's cool, and there are so many mosquitoes.