This Is a Time-Based Player!

A qualified online novel, first of all, uses golden fingers to solve difficulties, but after reading five chapters, I only saw a long running account, and the theme was unclear. Author, you have not realized what the core plot of this book is, nor have you conceived an emotional chain of the core plot. There are too many useless elements in the writing. The novel must pay attention to not including useless plots in the text, otherwise it will become a running account. It is recommended to understand the structure of the plot and its beginnings and transitions. This can avoid running accounts. There are also some skills such as highlighting the character, raising expectations, and ambush pens. I won't mention them. You have to learn them slowly. And the basic core of the plot is what emotions my article can bring to the readers, what kind of plot can be used to create an emotional gap (dilemma), and then the protagonist uses cheats (to solve the dilemma) to meet the emotional needs of the readers, so that the protagonist can grow with a little gain. One more point. [This is a time-based player] It seems that there is only one core plot, which is: the protagonist, the 'player', was originally a waste, and then relied on the 'time' golden finger to surpass most of his peers, and then surpassed the older generation, changed his destiny, and his class was greatly improved. So the emotional chain should be: before the foreshadowing, he was looked down upon by others → the protagonist uses his golden finger to grow and become a blockbuster, defeating other players and succeeding in the challenge → reaping the shock of the people around him and reaping the rewards. This is the basic routine for showing off and slapping someone in the face. The plots of the students in the martial arts gym and the relatives at home in the first five chapters are so useless. Let me design: Pave the emotional gap: the protagonist is unknown in the martial arts school and is a little transparent. His childhood sweetheart is a snob and looks down on the protagonist. He is actively snatched away as his girlfriend by his brothers at the same time. At the same time, the protagonist's family is not financially sound. The parents work hard to support the protagonist's cultivation, but they are simultaneously made difficult and humiliated at work. At this time, the protagonist learned martial arts through Golden Finger and became stronger. Satisfy emotional needs: the senior brothers come and insult the protagonist, the protagonist defeats the senior brothers to fight for a living, then meets a noble person and gets a financial source, teaches his parents a villain colleague, and assumes the financial resources of the family. Gains: childhood sweetheart regrets, senior brothers and students are shocked, family members are happy, and noble people like you. Swallowing Starry Sky has done a good job in this regard. I suggest you learn it. This is my humble opinion on writing, because I also learned it from ignorance and ignorance. I hope it will be helpful to you.