I'm Walking on the Road to Eternal Life

As of Chapter 41. At present, it seems to be a food book. The writing is very clear and the writing is very streamlined. But it doesn't have particularly big poisonous spots, and it won't forcefully attack you. You can use it to kill time and just look at it, there is no problem at all. The remaining problem is the author's problem. If the plot behind it is not exciting, this type of article cannot be long. And if the results are not good after being put on the shelves, the author may have to go on a business trip.

The protagonist is immortal at the beginning, does he still need to cultivate immortality? Most of the protagonists in immortality novels cultivate immortality for the sake of immortality. Your protagonist will be immortal at the beginning, and there is no need to cultivate immortality at all, and he will be directly invincible.

How can I put it? It's not too poisonous, it's too mediocre, and it's written in a streamlined way, and it doesn't explain all aspects clearly. You can watch it to pass the time

There is nothing wrong with the outline of the story. The later section between the eldest prince and the second prince is obviously designed. It is so obvious and written so clearly that it feels like it was completely designed. This is an obvious lack of writing power, and the thinking is a bit complicated. If I don't have writing power, I can just brush it off in one stroke Let's take care of it and see what happens next.

How should I put it? The writing is good, there are no poisonous points, and everything is stable. However, there is nothing about the protagonist. It is all about the external description. Unfortunately, it is very stable.

The author's writing style needs to be improved, and the plot doesn't have any bad points. You can take a look at it and give it a mid-to-low rating.

The writing is pretty good, but it's just not that exciting. Although the protagonist is in the first echelon, he is always invincible. And it's written like a running account.

It feels like 'it's a dynasty, but it's basically a gang wearing a leather jacket'

It still depends on how the luck of the dynasty will be dealt with after cultivating immortality. At least the previous content is good and can be read.

There is neither snow nor wheat to eat or drink. What does the author mean?

I've read over a hundred chapters and it's still pretty good, but the author doesn't seem to be very popular with this book. If I continue, I feel like I'm going to be a eunuch.

Come on, your writing is very good. From the first chapter to the present, I feel that if you write well, you can get very good results, but I can't stand the procrastination in the early stage. Come on.

It's well written, but why not many people read it?

The writing is good, I like it, and I will read it slowly, but there are too few updates. I hope that if I continue to work hard, it will become a fine novel.

I'll give you all the monthly tickets. Come on, write well.

Well written but too little updated

Let's have a good time

It's a very good book, keep up the good work