Yi Song

I'm not optimistic about this book. The pacing is too bad and it won't be popular. It's a pity. The writing is quite good. There are more than 100 similar books on my bookshelf. I forgot them once and never opened them again. What persuaded me to quit was about 10 chapters in. I could write 3 chapters in Tokyo even if I entered the city. At that time, I thought that at this pace, when you succeed in the rebellion, you will get 10,000 chapters. I never watched it again. I can guess the subsequent development, 200 chapters of Tokyo City Water, 150 chapters of Fang Lashui, and then I found that it was completely unpopular, so I hurried back to the grassland and started an uprising. After another 80 chapters, no one watched it at all. I was a painful eunuch. I have read a lot of books, and the beginnings of them all are amazing, with the potential to be a hit. I guess the author didn't have much of an outline, and then he started to get frustrated. In reality, a year has passed, and the plot in the book has only been going on for half a month. The readers have lost interest at all, and then the follow-up ideas are explained in one chapter. I wanted to call the author at that time, but why did I go there earlier? I no longer wanted to read it. Journey to the West, Monkey Goes to Make Havoc in Heaven, can be explained in just a few chapters. You have no water, but you, the author, have a good idea. It's not directed at the author of this book, I just bumped into it and I don't want to complain about it. If this book becomes popular in the future, a reward of 1,000 RMB will be given, and a sticker will be posted as proof. It will be considered as being in the top 15 of the category list for 3 months. The main reason is that there is a shortage of books. What are they writing now? The information density of each chapter is too low. Even among the top ones in the history category, there are few books with new ideas. Really, I went back to watch Journey to the West again. I also gave this author a recommendation vote 😁, but I can no longer read it.

The first few chapters are quite awkward. How dare ordinary people to snarl when they encounter a tough guy like the protagonist at a critical moment? Aren't you afraid that the protagonist will turn evil and kill them in one breath?

Now that you know your identity and have soldiers, you still insist on licking the emperor in the capital, and then licking women to appear awesome and coaxing, and engaging in intrigues in the capital, then why do you write that you are awesome in force?

It's a bit nonsense. There are thousands of troops mobilized in the city of Tokyo. There is no shortage of bows and crossbows, engineers, cavalry, infantry and spearmen... There were only 800 people in the Xuanwumen Incident. This is when the entire ruling class and the emperor are nothing! As for the defense of the Tokyo Forbidden Army, with six thieves as an excuse, it is much easier to bring a prince with more than a thousand people than Xuanwumen... Then the official wanted black and white gangs to jointly arrest the protagonist, and to put it bluntly, the protagonist starved to death... As a result, the protagonist was turned upside down. Wuyou helped Minghuo to besiege the protagonist, and the entire capital rebelled, but Wuyou helped the shit... This plot is very speechless. Even if two imperial students reported rebellion, it was not a big deal. In the Song Dynasty, people rebelled every day, and the emperor didn't even bother to deal with it...

In the Song Dynasty, the God of Zhenwu (renamed Emperor Zhenwu in the Ming Dynasty) was the protector of the country. Isn't it taboo for the protagonist to be called Zhenwuhuan?

It's a mess with no theme, and the tactics used to solve the case are not that good. It's better to just write about farming.

It's ok to write, but please don't push me too much for logic, just go out and turn left.

Let me sum it up, you should write fantasy and not history. This is too much. Hahahaha, please support me.

I thought it was a historical struggle for hegemony or political management, but maybe the plot unfolded a bit slowly, and it felt more like a chivalrous style.

I was still saying in the chapter review yesterday that Erlang did not take the usual path and gave his daughter a seat to become the founding empress of the country. The sons were sent to work hard in various parts of the world. Today, after reading these two chapters, I feel that I don't want to write it. I want the Song Dynasty God of War to personally conquer Liangliang, and then end the book hastily. Is it because there are few subscriptions and no motivation to write 🙂

Why do you need to verify when grabbing a red envelope? After verification, all the red envelopes have been snatched up... There was no need to verify before.

I have seen too many examples of people cutting grass without eradicating the roots, but spring breezes bring new growth. I don't think such a person is a good choice. Since we are enemies, don't try to be friends. Maybe you have killed other people's relatives and friends? Just a quick knife. Goodbye

Liu Guozhang couldn't even read the name "Pig's Feet". It was so ugly that it looked like the name of a passerby.

All the books are good, but they are all sailors.

Wuyou helped persuade me to quit in that section

I have no interest in the ancient grassland uprising! 😒

I've read more than fifty chapters, but I still don't understand the main plot, and the identity of the protagonist. The leader of the Zhenwu Department was first introduced, and I still haven't seen the use of this identity.

What does the author think The protagonist's real name is Zhen Wuhuan, although he has a Korean flavor But he is much better than the bullshit Liu Guozhang, right It's true that he bought a casket and returned the pearl.

The murderous intention from the sky is to change the stars, and the murderous intention from the earth is the rise of the dragon and the snake.

Hasn't the protagonist ever taken a political class?

I saved seventeen chapters and read them all in one go. It was so cool.

It's so beautiful. Come on, author😁

It's getting more exciting, author, come on!

The beginning is good, but the later part is a bit taken for granted, so that's okay, it's average.

Does the protagonist have any extraordinary golden fingers?

No one comments on such an excellent work?

It took so long to write about Tokyo. .

This book is suitable for beginners. Lao Bai has some experience, but I can't stand it anymore. The author's rhythm is indeed problematic, and his writing power is not enough. He may have a sense of the picture in his mind, but he can't write it, or the deviation is too big.

Come on, author! Just try to be yourself, you can never satisfy everyone! All good things come step by step. ! Don't pay attention to what others say. Try to be yourself, just work hard step by step!

I finished reading it in one go, write quickly 😁