
Zhetian: Start with an Immortal Sword!
遮天:开局一把不死天刀!
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- Completed
- Length
- 88k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Eastern Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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There are a few points. The protagonist doesn't know the plot and still has to hang around in Yaochi. In the original work, if it weren't for Wu Shi, the Heavenly Prince wouldn't be so miserable. His configuration should be seven quasi-emperors, one who will become a Taoist, and an immortal Taoist who can defeat the emperor, plus the immortal phoenix medicine.
Outrageous, simply outrageous
Do you think it's outrageous that a second-generation fairy turned into a handyman?
It must be written in such a frustrating way, what is the identity of the protagonist?
If the Heavenly Prince chooses the Heavenly Sword, it is unlikely that he will appear in Yaochi. Wu Shiqing gave Yuan Tianshi the opportunity to bring the Heavenly Prince out of Zishan. It is unlikely that such a saucy operation will occur with the Heavenly Sword. At most, it will happen with the second son, wandering in the universe. Even if the Heavenly Sword has concerns, it is most likely to escape from Beidou immediately after Yuantianshi takes the Heavenly Emperor away from the Zishan. The Heavenly Emperor does not know, and you Heavenly Sword does not know yet? Why don't you hold on tight and shout?
Let me give you an idea. Go to the ancient small world of Zhongzhou and find the undead human skin and the divine thoughts left by the Immortal Emperor The undead human skin has a defensive capability comparable to the Ji Dao emperor's soldiers. Or you can exchange the divine thoughts for the Immortal Emperor Dao Fruit to attack the holy cliff with the power of the Ji Dao and rescue the undead Taoist.
I suggest you take a good look at the performance of Yaochi in the original work. Some of your ideas are whimsical and even very unreasonable. Would a Holy Lord know about the Emperor of the ancient times? He's just a powerful person who knows nothing about it. If the ancestor knew about it, I could still barely understand it. You, a Holy Lord, have no reason to know about it. As for the rebellion in Yaochi, I think it is impossible for you to have a good relationship with a Holy Lord and a Saint without first asking whether those ancestors agree or not. What's the use of having a good relationship with a Saint? If a holy master really has that much power, then the Ji family and the Jiang family will not have so much trouble. If the Ji family's holy master can kill Lao Ba, there will be no need for internal strife, let alone Ji Zi's intervention, and the Jiang family's holy master lineage will not need to oppose the god king's lineage.
No matter how much you brag, it's useless. Once you go in and take a look, you will know that the protagonist's mental state is really not what it is set to be.
What kind of power are you using? The elixir, the spring of creation, the bloodline of the Emperor's Immortal Phoenix to build the foundation, an imperial weapon and a Great Sage Peak Protector, and then the ancient emperor's teleportation station, an elixir fruit, an emperor's scripture, two or three forbidden weapons of the emperor, can be chopped from beginning to end. Personally, I think that every enlightened person creates a force mostly to leave traces of his or her existence in the world. The ethnic group is for inheritance. The big force that rules the entire world is just to collect the power of faith or collect some immortal treasures.
You chose Heavenly Sword, but still want to follow the influence stream? There is no problem, but the protagonist is too weak now, and there is little point in recruiting some weak chickens. As for Yaochi, except for the female Holy Spirit, it is like that.
In the original work, the Emperor's son was born in the realm of the Second Immortal, and he was born with the Emperor's mark in resonance and a saint came to pick him up. Secondly, the Heavenly Sword has a spirit, and the Heavenly Sword is the Supreme, and can even kill the Supreme. Thirdly, the Emperor's bloodline cannot be insulted. It is engraved in the blood in the bones. Even if you agree not to wear clothes, the Heavenly Sword cannot agree with you. Meaning, fourth, bloodline, the Heavenly Prince can eat and drink up to the emperor level, because he is not a true phoenix bloodline, but an immortal phoenix bloodline, a giant of the Immortal King. Fifth, forbidden power, normally the protagonist is 7 to 8 forbidden, the original Ji Haoyue and Golden Winged Dapeng are only 4 to 5 forbidden and they are arrogant.
Doesn't the protagonist have the Emperor's Sutra of the Immortal Emperor? Does he need someone else's in front of Sendai? The Runkai Dao Sutra is the best, but at the fourth level of the Dao Palace, is it certain that only the Emperor Xihuang, Hengyu, and Taihuang are the strongest? Except for the lunar sun, everything else is useless.
The author is a post-00 generation working
The author is a working part-time job born after 2000. He does not rely on novels to make a living. He just loves Zhe Tian very much and has been reading it since junior high school. Then there is the update. Most of the time, the update time is in the morning and evening, and the status is good and bad. This is the first novel in the author's life. It was signed a week ago. The current collection is close to 500, and I have read about dozens. Personally, I think this data is quite good, and I am very satisfied. I saw a lot of bad reviews saying they were stupid and asked me to cut the book. Haha, it's actually okay. I personally think the eunuch is a very bad person. I am used to it, so no matter whether the book is good or bad or what the score is, I have to continue writing this book. I want to be worthy of my five hundred book friends. Personally, I don't think it is necessary to take the data so seriously. It is a bit irresponsible to read the eunuch every now and then. The grades are important, but finishing a book is more important in my heart As for pursuing reading, it depends on your mood. When you think of it, just click on the latest chapter and finish reading.
Bad review
I didn't finish reading and took screenshots of some parts that I felt were problematic. 1. The protagonist is too cold-blooded. 2. The Yaochi, which can be called the most conservative holy land in Beidou, is actually unprotected between men and women. 3. The story of the Great Emperor of China is confusing. 4. The fictional physique is comparable to Goldfinger... There are a few other parts that I didn't pay attention to when I took the screenshots. The pop-up tab covered the lower half of the text, so I won't post it here.
Did Shen Nong test poison?
I feel that the immortal emperor is nothing. He buried himself directly for eternal life, and then transformed into a corpse. If it weren't for the spiritual treasure, a great emperor would probably escape at any time. Although the sneak attack is disgraceful, have you ever thought about why he is not aboveboard? The answer is very simple, because he knows that Emperor Zun is alive, otherwise it would not be easy to kill an emperor with the immortal emperor's ability. I also created many graveyards to pretend that I could suddenly crawl out of my skin again. 😅😅😅I feel that Emperor Zun has something to do with the original. Otherwise, when there are immortal weapons and there is a Supreme on the opposite side, how do you defeat him? In this case, you are the Immortal Emperor and don't know the plot yet. How can you do it if you don't have enough dogs?
My hand was broken and is being repaired.
A few days ago, I was riding a battery scooter to work and was hit by a car driven by a drunk driver. The car was destroyed but no one was killed, and I almost lost my life. The small bone in my left hand is shattered. The doctor said that I will not be able to recover from this condition for half a year. Now I am typing with one hand and I am not tired at all. My left hand will recover in a while, but I can no longer do the work I used to do. I can only recuperate at home. God is really helping me. God has sent a disaster and forced me to embark on the path of novels. Finally, I can write full-time.
Regarding pursuing reading, I just asked the editor
The editor told me that whether my book can be put on the shelves depends entirely on the reading rate of readers, that is, reading the latest updated chapters of the day within 24 hours So readers who like this book and have collected it should try not to keep the book before it is put on the shelves. Sometimes Read the latest chapter as soon as you can, otherwise it will be held up and not put on the shelf, and the author will not be able to get full attendance 😌 So at least after it is put on the shelf, you can give me an initial order to stabilize the data, and it will not be too late to keep the book 😁 Thank you for your support! ! !
I still like the book The Emperor
What's going on with the author? ? ? It's just a few chapters and it's over. Is it unfinished?