The Bourne Counterattack

The author raised my expectations in the first fourteen chapters. It was not too poisonous. I thought I had encountered a good book. But in the fifteenth chapter, it was poisonous. It was extremely poisonous. If the author doesn't know how to write emotional scenes, don't force them to write them. Let's not talk about how you, an injured person, went to the hospital and met the heroine. The paragraph is too rubbish, too vulgar. When you write a relationship, you need to have some foreshadowing. The protagonist takes one look at the woman, and then falls in love with her with a sentence that is not inferior to the famous stars in the future. The most important thing is that the two people fall in love. There is no foreshadowing, and they fall in love directly. Is the protagonist a stallion? When writing about war, just write about war properly. It's disgusting to do this right from the beginning.

I feel that the main character is a bit mentally retarded. He has an identity and a background. He gathers all his strength to fight against the Japanese. This one doesn't want it, and that one doesn't want it. He just wants the love of his children. He is a latent spy. His fiancée is the flaw. If he doesn't arrange to go to the rear, he will still be in the enemy-occupied area.

I was persuaded to quit at the beginning. Eight years after 918, it was 1937. I don't know history or can't do arithmetic. Is there any compulsory education in the 9th year? How can one have the nerve to write a novel if he doesn't have any knowledge of history and culture?

My IQ dropped when I saw it, I was really moved to the north!

After reading Chapter 2, there wasn't even a single plug-in. How can you survive at your level? Abandoned.

What you are writing about is a spy war. You don't write about how to pick up rapes and obtain intelligence, how to solve crimes, and so on. And the heroine is obviously not vigilant because she was kidnapped. Even if you learn how to send reports in the military training class, is there no training at all?

I dare to write about World War II espionage without a system. Nothing.

Develop a good habit and read the comments before reading the book. I didn't expect it to be this author. I looked at his behind-the-scenes and it was not good. Looking through the reviews of this book, it seems that it is still half-assed. Thank you for trying it!

Spy war! Several forces are intertwined, the espionage personnel are all cautious and cautious, and there is no one trustworthy around them. If the slightest mistake is made, the body will be lost, and if you still love each other, you are really afraid that you will kill yourself! Talking about love is not a plot that should appear in spy novels.

Is this the level of a starting level five author?

A time-traveler asked an indigenous veteran whether the Battle of Songhu could be won. What was he trying to express?

You are an experienced author, so don't write the introduction like a newbie's drama.

I thought the writing was good in the first few chapters, but as soon as the emotional drama appeared, the writing level completely dropped. And isn't the point of writing this subject just to save history and have fun beating Japan? If you don't want to write a recommendation, check out "Songhu, Never Fall" written by a great master recently. The plot flow is so exciting.

I feel like the protagonist is being pushed to do everything he does. He has a loose personality and looks a little frustrated.

This is the fourth bad book, I don't know what to think. . .

I didn't read the book, just read the comments. Let me give you my personal opinion. First of all, agents must be professionally trained. Look at how many training classes Juntong has opened! Most of them became cannon fodder, which made the Japanese spy agency and No. 74 Famous. How many aces can there be? Another thing, those who have come through the war are not only lucky, but also ruthless! Those who can stand out are those who excel. During that period, folk martial arts also played a certain role. As for the relationship between men and women, it was normal to hit the nail on the head when they saw each other. If you don't know which one will come first, tomorrow or the accident, how can you talk about love? !

Now this spy novel does not have the same feeling as before. It has declined compared to the previous writing.

Let's not talk about the content, but the name of the heroine is ridiculous. Who can name their child like that? Su Mo, the nickname is Mo'er. Anyway, I can only think of one such name, Su Qier.

When writing about spy wars, just write about spy wars. This emotional scene is completely redundant. It makes you feel like your toes can pop out of a three-bedroom apartment. If there is an emotional scene later, skip ahead and watch it.

Not feeling happy🙂

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Borrowing precious treasures, I recommend a book with three vulgarities and many joys. "The old man picked up rags in time and lived by making bad movies" is hilarious...

Guys, please recommend the new book "The Spy Who Survives", you won't be disappointed.

Changfeng, you still have a book about the Anti-Japanese War, The Iron-Blooded Soul of the Anti-Japanese War. It's half written. Is it banned or something?