I Am Saving the Airdrop of German Weapons with the Sword

No matter how good the performance of German weapons and art weapons are, they are not practical. These weapons were originally produced for Europe and the United States, and are not suitable for the Chinese and Asian battlefields as imagined. Another large-scale German weapon and art weapon is too conspicuous, and it is difficult to replenish it after it is finished. How many people can your system satisfy for sustainable development?

There are so many typos and incorrect sentences that I can't correct them. It's too uncomfortable to watch.

Overall, this fanfic is worth reading in the military section of Qidian Liang Sword. Although the system settings and protagonist settings are similar to similar works, the plot is still relatively consistent with the logic of the historical timeline. Especially the airdrop setting is refreshing, especially the German weapons, which have earned the familiarity of many German sticks. Especially the hard-working old aunt of airdrop vehicles, the krypton gold vehicle Stuka dive bomber, as well as ZB-26, ZB-37, I look forward to the exciting features of the MG series chainsaw being released as soon as possible. I would like to make a special complaint about the author who was stabbed in [hydrology]. He is simply like water in the ocean! There are also typos and mistakes in words and sentences, and the overall writing style is sluggish and unsatisfactory. It can only be made up by the pleasant points and the plot.

It's quite outrageous. In the beginning, the main actor was arrested. Didn't this cause a diplomatic incident? Besides, the Eighth Route Army still can't recognize it. His steel helmet, besides, it's all German equipment. Do you think it's reasonable or not? The kid is not a fool. People will know at a glance that Germany has come to secretly support him again. You need to let the German government know. What countermeasures will the German government take?

There are too many typos and too many sentences that don't make sense. How come the writing is second to none? Can't you read it after you finish it? Reading it yourself can basically avoid 90% of typos and grammatical errors. The author has a problem with your attitude in writing the book .

It feels like the author has a few chapters just for fun.

The idea is good, but the writing style is very thin and there are too many narrations interspersed. As a German soldier, the author should know that Germany's early equipment was not advanced, but rather its technical and tactical level was high. In the later period, Germany had advanced equipment, but in its weak industrial environment, there was great supply pressure. Although the German Zoo often had a large loss ratio in the battle against Soviet armor, it still could not save the situation under the torrent of Soviet steel.

This book can be picked up after skipping two-thirds of it. It's all popular science information + self-analysis.

You're making a movie, recalling and flashbacking for a while, except for throwing some grenades at the beginning, and then you were fighting for water, a lot of nonsense, except for the idea of ​​airdrops, which is interesting, there is nothing else.

The aid was too slow and wasted. Although I knew it was a battle-suppressing force, no one would see it without a climax.

There are serious gaps in the text, the sentences are not fluent, and punctuation should not be added. After reading so many sword-fighting movies, if nothing else, it will be uncomfortable for you to read.

At the beginning of the game, the protagonist is still a German

Not only is it bad, there are also big problems with the writing.

There are too many typos and sentences, and it's extremely clumsy. It's enough to update one chapter a day, and several chapters are connected with historical records copied and pasted from Baidu. This is too clumsy.

I originally wanted to read it, but suddenly I found that the author stopped updating for 20 days in November, and then updated it basically once a day, and charged for the 60th chapter. In order to prevent falling into the pit, it is better to wait for 500,000 words before reading.

The plot didn't move forward at all, it was just watery all the way. Most authors can write a few hundred words, but this one is better, writing a whole chapter, two or three chapters in one sentence.

There is a serious sense of disconnection before the chapters. Sometimes when I read the chapters, I don't know why I wrote them. The main line is not clear at all.

I can't appreciate your writing skills. It's gone 😅