About My Cultivation in Naruto

Is it really just cultivating immortality and having no other pursuits? For example, spreading red ideas or something...

I don't know what the main plot is, and I don't know what the protagonist is going to do. Isn't it just to train a Hinata and then follow the story with Naruto? No, bro, do you have an outline?

They have become great masters. Is it not difficult to go out of the village to get some money? It's like squatting at home asking his uncle for money.

In the first chapter, the author says that Naruto goes to war at the age of three. I think your imagination is not rich enough. Why don't you say that you can assist your mother in forming seals to move chakra in your mother's womb, and you can go into battle after you are born?

The writing style is good, but the rest... Is too inconsistent. To what extent is it inconsistent? If you want to change Hinata's name to Zhang Xiaofan, and Hinata and Hinata to Tian Buyi, why don't you just write it as a Zhu Xian fan? What about Naruto...

After reading Chapter 40, I have gathered the narrow-minded clan elders who are targeting the protagonist, the patriarch who protects the protagonist, the eldest lady who likes to follow the protagonist, and the evil-hearted spell master who pretends to be a slap in the face The author himself designed a set of spell master professions, and made spells that can exert the power of S-level ninjutsu...

Another trick of making up a non-existent master to show off!

The super invincible water monster is still at home in the plot as of now, and Elder A, the third passerby who was the first to come to provoke him is still okay.

In a book that is also about Naruto cultivating immortality, others are almost becoming immortals through practicing the Hollow Alliance, and they are already able to reach Otsutsuki outside the starry sky. They also find that Otsutsuki is supported by Frieza, and the world view directly turns Naruto into a small planet in a remote star field in the Dragon Ball world.

Except for a whiff of fantasy, there is no ninja flavor. Everything else is pretty good

Introduction: A child with two diseases like wisdom...

It makes no sense. Hiruzen Sarutobi was a prodigal. His contribution was to use difficult tasks to consume the middle-aged strength of the Senju clan so that he, the Sarutobi clan, could take over the ANBU and power. He used the wood escape experiment to drain the new generation of the Senju clan's strength, and let Senju Hashirama's son take the blame for the wood escape experiment! Use Danzo to form the root and eradicate the opposition from Konoha Village to his Sarutobi Hiruzen!

Orochimaru is a pure turd. A person with no bottom line would never have been so popular if Kishimoto Masashi hadn't finally cleaned up this shit. I just can't figure out why all the protagonists have to go butterfly swimming in the cesspit where he is. I can only say that my brain is sick. If you take the wrong route, the more knowledge you have, the more FD you will get, but you still don't understand? Cooperating with people who have no bottom line is just trying to gain skin from a tiger. How is this different from when P2P was at its most popular, someone who knew it was a scam but went in to be fooled and eventually got himself into it?

It's too bland. It's okay for you to write about daily life. Don't write about fan fiction Instead, write about farming.

The protagonist in the back feels awkward as if he is forcing himself to dress like a superior, and he has to beat others up for everything. Cowardly and awkward, he was pushed away by the supporting cast.

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I can accept a little plug-in. When people watch Naruto, they just want to see ninjutsu. If they are interested in cultivating immortals, they might as well just read novels about cultivating immortals. Moreover, the natural energy in the setting is very explosive. Let's go.