The Toughest Man in the World

If it is a single female protagonist, write less about the emotional interaction with the female supporting character. When the time comes, if the female partner is not written as a lover, the poisonous point of giving away the daughter will be formed. Writing so many emotional lines in a male channel is almost enough. If you add more emotional lines, if you are not a harem, your performance will plummet.

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After reading more than 200 chapters in the second chapter, as a bookworm with more than 15 years of reading experience, this one looks really good. It's not bad looking, but the parts that should be better are not written out (there will be better ones later), and the problem behind it is that it's a bit watery. Other than that, there aren't any big surprises. It's just that there are some chapters that you really feel like you haven't read after reading them. It won't affect you if you just skip them.

The subject matter should be the stick-tongued man The writing is quite good. It was a bit slow at the beginning. The first few chapters are a bit ordinary. The writing is quite good at the end. It allows me to overlook some unreasonableness. Work harder

The author should not forget that the core of this book is whole life! Whether it is the title of this book or the core plot in front of it, the protagonist uses the skills obtained through the lottery to complete his life! Whole life is the core point of attracting readers of this book! You can't just write ordinary ones and put them on variety shows!

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This post is to thank a book friend called a somewhat conscientious old bookworm. I almost spent the entire early stage of the book on a single computer. Only this book friend would give a few recommendation votes every two days, and this continues to this day. I hesitated for two days whether or not to post it, and where to post it. Then I thought there was nothing to worry about, so I posted this post as a thank you.

After reading Chapter 105, I don't want to watch the plot of the variety show Longing for Life, so I should skip to the next chapter and continue reading 😒

After the first few system skills, the overall feeling to me is that the application of system skills is just a superficial taste. There is no more writing or interesting application methods. At least that's true for most skills. This feeling became more obvious after the system skills began to be wholesaled.

It's very plain. What attracts me is the skills of the protagonist in the video. I don't use Douyin, so I haven't heard of many of them. The emotional drama of the protagonist is considered a failure so far. Actually, it doesn't count, because there aren't many scenes, so I suggest you write less emotional scenes in the future. Step by step

It's about an honest person who systematically joins other people's studios and doesn't get wiped out by others. It's not in line with reality.

Search for the author. Kim Byung-man is known as the toughest man in Korea, and he can also be quite funny.

Has the author read the series about Kim Byung-wan's tough-talking guy? I thought he was writing about it

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What do you think is the best ability for the protagonist to draw in the lottery? You can give your opinions here, not supernatural, just normal 360 lines.

No matter which novel it is, as long as there is a confrontation between China and foreign countries, the people of your own country must win, otherwise they will be said to be incompetent, and then someone will kidnap them morally, and then pig's feet will come to the rescue, and then I will give up directly. I really can't stand this kind of book 😰

This sudden turn to a science and technology article at this late stage was unexpected. How does the author plan to end it? It was a little too bland later on

I always feel like it's a bit off, because the protagonist's pretense is that the audience's response is too muted. . . .

It's Chapter 99 and it's definitely going to collapse.

There were so many female characters appearing at once that I didn't even know which ones were which.

You have received 100,000 starting coins from a not-so-kind person as a reward for your work. Come and thank him!

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

The author must understand people's hearts!

This book is really well written in a variety show! There's also a sense of imagery! It's just the last bit left to subscribe🔥! Just a little bit

The author's writing is very good, and it is definitely worth reading and subscribing. Recommend a book: Mental Patients Have More Happiness "Old Man in Time Travels to Scavenge and Survive by Making Bad Movies"