Super Future

This book is painful to read. I like the superpower theme very much and the modern urban setting. However, the author's writing makes it feel awkward everywhere. There is no sense of immersion, the character of the failed middle-aged protagonist who is extremely difficult to empathize with, the plot advancement is boring and boring, the protagonist is psychologically mature and stable, and the emotional conflict is close to zero. He looks like he has been defeated by society and has no energy and spirit. It is mediocre and boring The key is that the protagonist's ability is now the best in the world, and he is invincible at the beginning, but the position given to him by the country is to be a front-line law enforcement officer in the city and the captain of a five-person team. This gives me the feeling that Tyson comes to China to be an urban management officer, specializing in the trivial problems of stalls on the streets.

First of all, I think the background of the protagonist is not that important, because it is quite interesting to write about a person turning around, especially the changes after new opportunities in middle age are also rare. But how could you write in such a verbose way... There are at least 30% more unnecessary descriptions than ordinary online articles. Many over-descriptions not only affect the reading experience, but also make the whole thing indifferent. Speaking of the lack of priority, many of the protagonist's actions are too over-the-top and too petty... I don't know why the layout is so small. You are already writing a web novel, or a super power web novel. Can you let a lot of things go? For example, the protagonist was in a coma for more than 35 days. When he woke up, he first did a lot of trivial things, video chatted with his children, and even took a shower and carefully observed his body. Shouldn't a normal person ask what happened? No, even if these are put aside, shouldn't the article quickly and concisely explain the cause, process and result? Are you writing a diary or something... Long-winded, outdated, and narrow format, aren't these the shortcomings of many middle-aged people? But could it be that what we want to see is the good side of middle-aged people? Reliable, experienced and tough? Like our fathers, like our teachers, like our predecessors at work? Sigh😮‍💨What's going on?

It's the Holy Mother again. Haha, I can't stand it anymore.

After reading Chapter 4, I would like to give some suggestions to the author for his next book. 1. The sense of immersion needs to be enhanced. At present, although most people aged 18-35 belong to the prostitution group, this is the majority of the audience of Internet article authors. You have to make people of this age group have a sense of immersion. That is why people who write Internet articles like to start writing from high school before the college entrance examination. Even those who are 30 years old have been young after all and can understand it. 2. Sense of rhythm. Reality is already very tiring. Reading articles must be enjoyable, or in other words, only when you feel comfortable can you reach a wide audience. Internet articles are not traditional literature, and everything does not need a connotation like traditional literature. Internet articles have only one connotation, and that is enjoyment, and it is not considered connotation. 3. Highlight your own style and show off? Go for humor and joy? Playing tricks? Drive? It depends on what the author can express himself. 4. Please don't let the years smooth your edges. We want to see the vigor of youth, the fearlessness of youth, the maturity of middle age, and the calculation of old age. If we want to be ordinary, we are already very ordinary. We don't want to look in the mirror. The reality is too tiring. 5. If there are books with new routines, please book friends please give me a pat 😭

There's no big problem, it's just that the readers are a bit of a problem, and the controversy lies in the fact that the treatment of the protagonist is not good enough. In fact, it doesn't matter. The protagonist didn't say he was dissatisfied, but the readers became dissatisfied, which is normal. After all, many readers took the protagonist and felt that they got too little and did not have that kind of moral character. It can only be said that it is indeed not suitable for this group of readers, and it is not as invincible as they imagined. I feel that the author has been affected, so the best way is to either cut it off directly, or ignore the comments and write according to my own ideas. If there are so many comments with such loud voices and there are many people who are yin and yang, I can actually write a book of my own, but it seems that I don't have the strength, so I'll just change it and read it.

On the control and upgrade of space capabilities. Use space capabilities to move the core of the planet. Let the core of the planet shift and cause the destruction of the earth. Space manipulation of the moon causes the gravitational balance between the earth and the moon to break. Internal space replacement, using external stones and organs in the target body to replace and transmit. It can directly kill the target or perform painless surgery. The conceptual elements are modified to control the space version, using space movement + space to cut the nucleus. Create matter. Destroy matter. Hand rub nuclear bomb. Use space to open a portal from the surface to outer space. It will cause the air and all materials inside the earth to float into outer space. And expose the earth to cosmic rays in the universe. Move radioactive contaminants to the target. The target dies immediately. Space confines everything around the target. And form a space barrier up, down, left, front and back around it. And drain out the air and all matter inside. Using space barriers and space confinement, you can artificially create tornadoes. The eye of a typhoon and the ability to control the weather. Space welding uses this to increase the length of the upper end of other people's DNA gene chains. This can make people immortal.

I think it's good to open up your imagination and explore some superpowers together. It doesn't have so much anger, and it's a relaxing method that I can accept. Currently available.

Looking forward to it very much

Super power, story structure, and the author's writing style are okay. After reading it, I feel that the battle description has no passion, it is not intense enough to attract people, and there is no love!

The book is very good, and it will be better if it is updated soon!

If you don't want to kill decisively, you will be kidnapped by morality in the end. Even if someone should temporarily surrender to force, they will still engage in small tricks in private. This is how humans are, it's engraved in our genes and can't be changed! ! !

The author's fantasy about the treatment of top talents is an unlimited credit card. This is the most interesting part of this book. Others buy horse bones with thousands of gold, but he is lending you thousands of gold. The actual treatment is only horse bones. You love g/j, and g/j also treats you preferentially. This kind of two-way travel is the best. And the author writes as if g/j is afraid of and tests the protagonist. It cannot be that the protagonist has very good moral character, like a saint, but g/j despises and uses the protagonist because of it.

Liangcao reminds me of a post-apocalyptic super novel that was banned a long time ago. However, in that novel, the official organization has a big boss with very strong calculation ability, who can compete with the protagonist.

1. If your political skills are not good enough, don't insist on giving political lessons 2. The protagonist, Invincible, is a joke. Officials regard him as a little kalami, a coolie.

By the way, what will the protagonist do if someone buys a bad superpower and causes trouble?

After reading Chapter 18, I found that the author was very serious about personal things, making all kinds of sense, and there was very little formal plot. What you wrote is an online novel, not a formal literary novel. The important plot development is not to listen to your various reasonings about life philosophy. Anyway, it looked disgusting to me, and the word count is not that bad.

To be honest, the author really doesn't understand the national talent welfare. Beijing's talent welfare alone can provide a one-time reward of up to 10 million yuan, as well as various welfare subsidies, so there is no need to describe the national rewards as too shabby.

But how you write it is very important, forget about love and justice. Going to Myanmar to be a monkey king is not as satisfying as being a privileged person at home. With power, rights come naturally. The protagonist is too hypocritical... If you sacrifice yourself as a young man for the country, it's okay. But as an adult, forget it.

Coming from Longkong, if these contents are what the author really thinks, then I can only be convinced. The author's thoughts and treatment of the protagonist can only make me laugh for two and a half years. Well, let's see if it will be deleted next.

I don't know what cleverness the author is trying to do. There is no salary for an unlimited credit card. Does having no salary mean that there is no retirement? You have to keep working. If you don't want to work anymore, once the credit card is collected, you will have no money to survive. You may have to pay back the money you used. After all, it is a credit card. If I become disabled, will my credit card be collected? If you die, your credit card will be invalid. What will happen to your family and children? Do you want to take back the dormitories arranged by the organization with one bedroom and one living room and no toilets of 2 to 30 square meters? Parents and children sleeping on the streets to beg for food? Are these awesome superpowers treated like this? That's it for raising a dog, right?

This book has the surface of Wudi Wen, but the writing inside is extremely confusing. The author is educating people all the time and wants to add his own thoughts to the readers. It makes me vomit after reading it.

. . It seems that the author is a really honest person, but unfortunately in reality the protagonist will really be played to death.

To put it specifically, the protagonist is a strong person of order, which is normal. But there is something wrong with the author's head. After the emergence of the extraordinary, he still regards the existing system as the best system, and regards maintaining the existing unreasonable order as maintaining order. Fans also misinterpret the watchdog of the existing order into a moral idealist. A nuclear-bomb-level force is given to a single renovated room without any status and treatment that should be given to service personnel. Leaders who succumb to existing rights are insulted and their dignity is insulted. Is this called order? No, this is called surrender.

It is indeed invincible, but this is your ordinary life at work, and there is no freedom at all, as is your daily life. You don't have to be a native of the motherland, but can't you always be on the way to work and have the protagonist take action every time? To be stable, the protagonist only needs to cooperate with the country to promote his strength and come a few times. Is a department inseparable from the protagonist to complete tasks? Some novels always fight the villains personally, which is systematic and rewarding. But in this novel, I can only see the protagonist working all the time, without any real meaning or reward. There is also an uncle who has two children and is divorced. There's nothing exciting about this setting, so it's hard to attract readers.

I laughed to death. It foreshadowed the invincibility of space power in Chapter 86 and the invincibility of the protagonist. However, it turns out that super energy can defend against space cutting and compression and annihilation. It is useless. I laughed when I saw the physical ability person confronting the protagonist later. It is really not possible for the elemental type and mental type who are closer to controlling energy to directly confront the protagonist.

To summarize, the professional title status that the protagonist obtains in theory is very unbalanced with the treatment he actually receives. Just like the Monkey King who was granted the title of Monkey King by the Heavenly Court in "Journey to the West", he looks majestic, but in fact he doesn't even scream during the peach party.

The protagonist is a bitch, give up immediately

Talking about allowing more people to live like human beings without breaking the original rules, establishing a new order, and redistributing resources is simply empty talk. Even if you don't want to break the existing pattern, it's not a bad idea to go to the universe to obtain more resources. The protagonist's ability is completely a big plug-in in the scientific research world. He can participate in experiments to help build the curvature engine and help humans go to space to obtain more resources. However, the protagonist chooses to stay in an agency and stand still. Is this worthy of the evaluation of allowing more people to live like humans?

After reading eight chapters, I lost all interest. The author's patience in writing was exhausted. The dialogues similar to the official defense in the first eight chapters were painful and boring to read. It says how much we care about the protagonist, but it turns out that it requires political review before entering, which is quite disappointing. If we had paid attention to the time when the protagonist was comatose for more than a month, we would have arranged for someone to profile the protagonist long ago. It would be quite speechless to have a political review after all the details. Moreover, the protagonist should be treated as a special talent in the country. When the protagonist asked about salary and benefits, he said that the benefits are high but the salary is high, which made me speechless😒 Do you know? Chairman Mao and Premier Zhou, these two great men, were both paid back then, and it was really a show of them to show off! I have no objection to the protagonist entering the system, but I really don't feel that the protagonist is valued! And the official dialogue reply at the end is really disgusting.

Book signing today! Decided to pick one and make a pot dragon-tiger fight to celebrate! ! !