Peninsula Time

The first one with more heroines?

If there are multiple women and single women, it depends on yourself. Whichever one do you think you can write well?

Your pace is too fast. Do you have any more to write later? Is it easy to collapse Maintain daily life? The career is written very awkwardly Can the female protagonist be left alone? (Give her a character who likes to be an enemy. She can form a love triangle around her relationship with Li Zhi, and then break up and make up again. The more abusive the better. I only provide opinions. If it doesn't feel right, I'll write according to your outline of ideas.)