Xingyue Dashanren: My Life Simulator

The writing is pretty good, but what I fear the most about simulator routines is that they directly simulate dozens of pictures before the protagonist's interpersonal relationships and the main plot line are laid out. The first thing to do is to be brief, simulate three or four chapters a few times, and then write 20 chapters a few times to improve your strength. Write a long story after you stabilize. It is best to finish larger chapters around Chapter 70, and it is best to write long chapters based on the main plot line. After all, the main purpose of the simulator is simulation. It can't take away too much from the protagonist's reality. It can be done, but it's not necessary.

The Sims has so many chapters? Where's the coolness?

The simulator has been prepared for several months, but the protagonist just doesn't use it and is still feeling sad about the autumn wind (maybe there is something wrong with the description). Does he want a eunuch?

The introduction is so confusing. What is it about? Why don't you consider changing it?

If Tohsaka Sakura kills or seriously injures the protagonist at the last moment, it will be a masterpiece 😁😁

Is this a plot just for the launch?

Write, write, write, write. Three days of fishing and two days of drying the net. Yesterday I stopped and one day, today I only have 2,000 words. I just cut it off and get together when I can't continue. I don't even bother to make up a reason for the break. Can you stop being so perfunctory?

The author's writing is great, it has great potential, it is crisp and clear, and the plot, character descriptions and emotions are very rich. It is worth reading.

It has a bit of a mushroom-hunting twist. The protagonist is obviously not a good person in the traditional sense, but he is not evil from the bottom of his heart. However, the current state of survival for survival will definitely not go very far. It depends on how to arrange it in the future.

To write, the last lesson! If you want to write, come on, please raise your sword! To write, if a counselor enters the situation with his own body, he will win half the battle! Simulator? How can you feel better if you don't die?

The author's writing is great, it has great potential, it is crisp and clear, and the plot, character descriptions and emotions are very rich.

Why is it that having a simulated protagonist is like being drastically cut? I'm not talking about strength but IQ. So the author didn't write him as a time traveler at all, it was just to patch him up in difficult situations, right?

I can't stand it. I haven't seen the main character for several chapters. Author, you need to distinguish between priorities.

🌚There are quite a lot of typos, so if you read them carefully, sometimes you have to guess the meaning of the typos, which is also a headache.

Where did the Origin Awakening go? I've all subscribed, why is it gone?

Only then did I realize that there was an extra word in the introduction: Yes!

Ahhhhhh what on earth am I looking at? Why does the protagonist seem to be the enemy of the whole world inexplicably? Can the author explain it to me?

Oh yo, Lao Da was defeated by your elbow

Seeing that the saint looks like a clown, I wonder what the author did to disgust the readers? And that Aozaki Orange, brought Sakura to the city where the ancestor of the Dead Apostles is, trapped her in fire and water, and finished it for your father.