One Person: Reborn as Huangxian, Seeking the Title of Feng Baobao at the Beginning

The author's writing style and brainache are both useless. People with brains should be careful not to read without brains.

Many people are discussing the issue of introduction. Let's not mention this for now, focusing on the world view designed by the author. What you wrote at the beginning was a little better, but the more you write later, the more rubbish you write. The way you write is the way you wrote 20 years ago, the typical way of suppressing first and then rising. Get some rubbish characters to dance around, belittle and belittle the protagonist. Then the protagonist is pretending to be cool and suppressing him. And the most poisonous thing is that the protagonist never exerts his full strength. This garbage character pointed at the protagonist and scolded him. The protagonist can still ignore it for various reasons. This is the most damning thing. It becomes more and more irritating later in the writing. Master Jia is an insignificant and small role. You wrote a total of 8 chapters from the foreshadowing to the end. Is it necessary to write so much about such a trash character?

The seal is based on the luck of the person being sought! If you seal others with others, you will die. Using humans as gods? I don't know if the ten tribes are enough

😒 A thousand-year cultivation can reach two thousand years in just a few years. In addition, you have to pay a price for seeking the title. It is too big for both parties to bear.

Is it possible to practice Taoism for two thousand years? 😐 Bai Suzhen will become an immortal after practicing Taoism for a thousand years

At first, Jia Zhengyu wanted to kill the protagonist, but gave him a beating and let him go. The Wang family wanted to eat the protagonist, but they let him go with an apology. They were pure cowards. Return to Quanxing, the world will meet, all companies must take shares, pure wallflowers are sick

It would take several chapters to write about two thousand years of demon beating up Zhang Lingyu 😁 It was shocking and unbelievable. The direct disciple of Longhu Mountain behaved as if he had never read the book. The author seems to be criticizing? 😜😁🤭

You think the Five Immortals Family is awesome, because they have a complete temple side door system with four beams and eight pillars. The Weasel in 2000 was outrageous. It was asking for a title that belonged to the welfare of the little weasel who had just developed intelligence. In contrast to Cihang Pudu's request for title, he was fighting for the position of the country's national advisor. What kind of weasel can you write without the four beams and eight pillars? The four beams and eight pillars developed to the later stage and became the God of the Western Kingdom of God.

It is fictitious that seeking fame, shortening one's lifespan, and linking one's luck with luck are fictitious. Similar plots have never been mentioned in traditional folk cultural stories! This kind of plot first appeared in the marketing account video of "The Strange Fairy" after its popularity. Please do not regard the storylines in second-generation literary works as inherent characteristics of traditional folk cultural stories! Traditional folk stories about seeking a title only mention that cursing Huang Pizi with bad language will lead to revenge for ruining his moral conduct. There is no mention of the situation that looking like a human being like a goddess will lead to a loss of luck, Yang and longevity. Please do not confuse literary creation with traditional folk cultural stories! The Five Immortals are righteous gods who can build temples and have a rich cultural background. They also serve as benevolent gods in some areas of our country. Therefore, please do not stigmatize the stories of our own mythical characters in China because of the second creation of literary works. After all, myths and stories are also intangible cultural heritage that we need to protect together, and they are also the national culture that carries our civilization. [PS: You don't want the gods you worship during festivals to be stigmatized in the future, right? After all, those gods used to be heroes who guarded the land of China. You can even say who your ancestors were and what gods were in your family. But after being stigmatized, when you mention it to others, others will only think that a certain evil god is from your family. By the way, places with such gods are not very good. [PS2: Although some gods have begun to be stigmatized in recent years (which has led to the relaxation of restrictions on traditional cultural festivals by the upper levels), we still hope that the second creation storyline will not be overly publicized to avoid solidifying the impression]

Stealing the Heavenly Master's Mansion is disgusting, and being so complacent after stealing it is absolutely disgusting.

I couldn't stand seeing the little fox lying to him anymore. The three outlooks are not correct and the personality is split. Pure egoists have no principles, no bottom line, and no ideals. Live to live, live to be superior to others.

The pretense and slapping in the face was a pure and enjoyable article, but the little fox couldn't stand it anymore. Putting aside this duality, you saved a plane of people earlier, then came back and deceived you again, and you still want to let others take the blame for you. It's really unethical.

If the character design is broken, then it can only be regarded as the same name, not the same person

You can read the free chapters if they are boring, but don't use the paid chapters. They are not worthy of your money.

As far as the introduction is concerned, Feng Baobao will definitely say: What a big fox, and then beat him to death

Even though he has become an immortal, he still looks like a stallion.

After reading more than 40 chapters, this book should be said to be a small hit seven or eight years ago. It is a traditional show-off and slap-in-the-face routine. It is very pure in taste and cannot be read with your brain. Pure and refreshing writing also has a certain market nowadays. Some plots are for the sake of show-off and lowering the intelligence. The writing style is enough, not good, but enough. I don't know if it only needs to be used to this point or just like this, but This genre is indeed enough. This book also requires a place for brain storage. Those who can accept these prerequisites and like the world view of one person can still read it. The writing is very smooth and does not seem like a new author. It may be an old guy who has come out to find a job again, or it may be a studio. The typos will not be corrected, but there are not many typos, so you can almost ignore them.

There is a folk story about Zhang Guolao who met the emperor and was praised by the emperor as being like a god. As a result, Zhang Guolao's merits and deeds were perfect. The good side of this Huangxian's request for the title was that he had cultivated enough merits and virtues, but he was just asking for praise. There are also bad legends that he had insufficient luck.

The biggest charm of fandom is to expand the plot based on the original characters It's good for you, but with just a few pictures, the characters are completely ruined It's so poisonous

Relying on deception, the protagonist has bad views and steals all kinds of things. He steals Zhang Huaiyi's corpse at the beginning, takes a piece of Nascent Soul, takes advantage, and then abuses Zhang Chulan in all kinds of ways. Later, he deceives the little fox, steals the Dragon Tiger Mountain and makes the little fox take the blame, steals everyone's magic weapons in the sexual assault incident, BYD steals everything he sees, and after stealing it, he still looks like his Holy White Lotus, soda ash

It is said that the gods and spirits are eight magical skills... Really, one person is too complicated, and the fanfic is not that easy to write. If you want to write about it, you have to either try it briefly or stop studying it in depth. If you don't want to study in depth, you might as well just change the original work, such as Douluo, which would be much simpler.

It's been three months since I stopped updating, and this book is so awesome!