This Star Is Too Full-Time

The logic doesn't work. First, newcomers rarely have a short-term appointment of one year. You treat it as a football trial. Secondly, the newcomer's contract is basically a contract to sell oneself, but it is not a contract to sell oneself. At most, the contract is about singing and dancing, and an actor is added. There is no real one who sells oneself, and even original works are included. Unless the ability in this area was demonstrated when signing the contract. Generally speaking, the plot logic is not very good and a little bit toxic.

After reading Chapter 48, I discovered that the protagonist's life was entirely arranged by others. Either that hot chick cheat, or the agent, or the so-called noble person, he has no self at all, isn't he just a puppet?

I suggest the author go back and promote his previous two books. It might attract some old readers. Is there any book club?

It's about to be put on the shelves. When I came over from my previous old book (online dating), it only had tens of thousands of words. The author updated two chapters every day, but there were very few people at that time. There were only 7 people who invested in it, and the book friend list only contained the author himself, which was quite bleak. Later, the water test recommendation was 100 recommendation votes. I had to wait for several days for updates. At that time, I was really afraid that the author would cut the book, but he (it should be him) still persisted until it was put on the shelves. I hope the first order results are better and the author sticks to it. You can definitely do it, but if you don't, I'll chase you

First

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It's almost 400,000 words, and it feels like it's almost finished. I hope the author will keep updating, don't be anxious, and take your time. At least perfect attendance

Let the author read it for himself

I have always had a question, will professional skills be retained after this career ends? Please give the author a clear answer

Zhao Gao

It feels like the author wants to write more, to advance his love and career together, and also have funny elements. But it didn't come together organically. The descriptions of the male and female protagonists are too thin, especially the male protagonist, who is almost like a puppet (I recommend the author to read the portrayal of My Celebrity Teacher's Luminous). He is not a living person, making it difficult for readers to get involved. Secondly, the heroine appears rarely and mostly in the background (the travel plot is sometimes not as good as Liu Xueer's). The characterization of Lao Zhaotou is good (I found out that you are good at writing about fathers. I still remember the appearance of Zhang's father who has an online girlfriend). Don't just do the setting, use behaviors and events to fill in the characters (the z and l in the online girlfriend are very good). The funny part needs to be done with contrast. It's a good idea, but it's too formatted and too rigid and cliche. It is normal for the career to develop smoothly. However, due to the relationship between the female protagonist and her agent, the company will not be on the opposite side, and the villain is too talented and has no pressure, causing the male protagonist to grow wildly. There is no effective use of abilities, such as fishing and e-sports. There is no use of previous professional skills. For example, a tour guide can improve the leadership skills of the male protagonist and can be developed. E-sports can improve his overall view and teamwork ability and also develop him. The ability of storyteller and clerk can make a low-end version of a speaker or something like that. The number of basic professions can be limited to allow the protagonist to DIY develop new advanced professions and ability development. The emotional lines of the male and female protagonists can be described more, and the female protagonist can be brought back to life from time to time. Instead of being like a dead person, you can interact with the male protagonist online and do something.