Countercurrent and Become a Superstar

The twilight version of Kidd, if matched with a young and strong body, is directly stronger than the peak Kidd. I think you made the wrong choice?

After reading the quality of your last book, it's hard to believe that you wrote it seriously. So many people suggested how to write the last book well. You justifiably wanted to show off your love for someone. From the beginning of the last book, I saw that you still had good writing skills, but it was just a show.

Why does it smell like a text broadcast, and it feels like the protagonist is introduced from a God's perspective and has no sense of involvement at all?

​ ​ 1. There is too much in the article. I don't understand XX, and you can't even imagine it. It's okay once or twice, but I don't understand it every time, and you don't understand it either. It's tiring to watch. 2. Kidd does not have outstanding physical talent (of course, this is compared with other people in the NBA). He does not run fast, jumps not high, and his explosive power is very average. His high draft pick is because of his excellent basketball IQ. In his rookie season, Kidd averaged 11.7 Points and 7.7 Assists per game; on the defensive end, as the team's first line of defense, he can also rely on his keen judgment and excellent positioning to restrict the opponent's outside players. He has also brought qualitative changes to the team. He can guarantee the team's lower limit, but cannot increase the team's upper limit. After playing two seasons with the Mavericks, he joined the Phoenix Suns. Under the leadership of Kidd, the Suns made the playoffs for five consecutive years, but were eliminated in the first round for five consecutive years. Kidd's highlight moment was with the Nets. The Nets, which had No. 1 Pick Kenyon Martin and Richard Jefferson, were revitalized offensively after Kidd joined them, and the defensive end happened to be Kidd's strength, so they helped each other. His scoring ability is not strong, but his ability to help his teammates score is very strong. Martin and Jefferson, including later Carter, all had the best offensive performance of their careers during their cooperation with Kidd. His multiple selections to the All-Defensive First Team in his career are enough to illustrate his defensive skills. In the years when he led the team, the Nets rushed out of the Eastern Conference and reached the Finals for two consecutive years, but when faced with O'Neal and Duncan at their peak, the Nets knelt down directly. Kidd is not a superstar like Jordan or Kobe who can turn the tide of a war on his own. He can only be regarded as an All-Star player who is weak in offense and strong in defense. His upper limit depends on his teammates.                                                                                                                                                                                 It doesn't actually matter which team you go to, because it can't affect any situation in the league. After all, the protagonist's strength is limited, and the problem that even peak Kidd can't solve, the protagonist can't solve it with the template of peak Kidd? So according to the author's current thinking, if you want to win the championship, you have to acquire draft rights and trading rights, and recruit a few strong teammates. (But you have just achieved some value, and you are not an indispensable super giant in the league, so don't even think about it), and Kidd at his peak is not a person who can run or jump. No matter how hard you work, that's all. After all, playing well is not as good as lining up well, just like when you are playing King of Kings, choose Zhang Liang, can he C? He can C, but only occasionally. Most of the time, it depends on your teammates. When you use the power, your teammates will retreat. When you don't use the power, your teammates will scream, and you have no move. The most you can do is to make the game not lose so fast, and the data should not be so ugly. Every time you write Kidd's template, it was initially in 10-11 years. Where is the data? Let everyone check it online? Then through training, the 2009-10 template has been loaded? Then there is no more, let the readers check it out by themselves? I was drunk too. List a basic data, such as Kidd's data: Speed: 86 Strength: 84 Physical strength: 90 Mid-range shot: 40 Three-point shot: 25 Defense: 85 Then load the 10-11 template Speed: 72 Strength: 82 Stamina: 72 Mid-range shot: 60 Three-point shot: 75 Defense: 82, this way many things will be clearer and can be seen at a glance. Afterwards, the 2009-10 template was loaded through training. Is it covered? Or overlay? I don't understand. You didn't write it clearly at all. It's just a sentence of loading the template? But some things are not loaded just because you load them. They are different. Just like when you write basketball articles, you are not copying NBA data exactly. You have a lot of your own things. In the same way, even if you load the template of Kidd's 10-11, since you are playing basketball, there must be one or two things that a 20-year-old boy is better than a 38-year-old guy, apart from other things, physical strength? Endurance? Right. Similarly, every time the template should not be simply loaded, and if you want to be able to dominate the alliance, you should first become very strong yourself, right? Now that there are plug-ins, it's not too much to overlay them based on the situation of that year every time you load the template, right? For example, after superimposing the data from 2009-10, the data from 2009-10 becomes, Speed: 76 Strength: 84 Physical strength: 76 Mid-range shot: 66 Three-point shot: 78 Defense: 86. There is no shortage of game experience. And based on physical fitness, it makes sense to get stronger every time, right? By the end Speed: 120% Strength: 92% Physical strength: 118% Mid-range shot: 96% Three-pointers: 102% Defense: 107%. It's not too much to become the first person in the league with these data. Novels are just YY, they need to have a sense of expectation. If you write a basketball novel, it's not that exciting. You can't see where it's strong or weak. It's indispensable at one moment, but it's inexplicable at the next when it's not guaranteed to start in the starting lineup. And every time the template is loaded, there is nothing to look forward to, because after the template is loaded, it is impossible to tell whether it becomes stronger or not. Therefore, the author's thinking should really be changed, just to make the book more exciting. If you don't adopt it, it doesn't matter. After all, it's just a family thing.

Don't know why? Why do I feel like Jack is the protagonist?

It's really funny. I used a lot of words to write how many years and how much the contracts of dozens of other players were, but when it came to the protagonist's contract, I didn't write a single word. How many years and how much was it? How? Wasn't this a good idea? No outline?

There is a retrograde setting, so I'd better apply a patch. Because my physical fitness has improved, I need time to find the feeling of shooting.

It doesn't feel right. No matter what happens, Kidd in his twilight years can still pinch him in the NCAA.

The author writes the details of the game very well, and it can be seen that he has his own understanding. However, each game is written in detail, which makes the pace seem a bit draggy. I feel that the author can pace it a little faster without having to write many chapters for each game.

I suggest you cut it and rewrite it. This is completely tormenting the readers. The perspective keeps changing and you still don't get to the point.

I couldn't stand the first chapter. Did the author have any misunderstanding about Kidd? Kidd is one of the strongest organizers at the position of point guard. In terms of organization, he ranks among the top three in history. It is impossible to compete in an NCAA game like this. Kidd leading a team of role players may cripple the main NCAA players. This is the power of a historical level organizer. You are talking about talent. Are you really kidding? What is this if not talent?

I can accept it in the front, the template is not the same as me, but I can't stand it in the back, so I keep playing insipid games. There is no response in the country. The All-Star has nothing to do with you. Brother, you are now an NBA-level perimeter and a two-dimensional NBA-level player. Yao Ming will be so popular. I will definitely pay attention to you by the way. I will send you to the All-Star. This book is really rubbish.

The author's writing skills are okay, but the distance team's skills are too poor! If you choose the wrong team, you will lose half your readers! It's not about which team you think you can choose to write about, but which team the readers like to watch?

Originally, the Mavericks were not liked by readers, but here comes the Lakers! It's strange that some readers like it! If you choose a team, you will get readers. If you choose the wrong team, you will get no readers.

I feel that the main point of the countercurrent is to have all the skills of his career and a peak body in the end. If the countercurrent loses the skills, he will still be an ordinary Kidd in the end.

I wrote more than a dozen chapters for one game. It's really cool.

Look at the 3rd picture and come here to complain. It's too wordy. Are there foot wraps?

You're still a talent even if you play on a racist team.

The main thing is that Goldfinger didn't understand it, so even if it wasn't superimposed, the shooting would still be regressed. Please explain, otherwise you won't be able to read it, you're all fucking competing with Goldfinger.

It's all competition, all competition.

I've read two chapters and it's so long and boring!

There is a big problem with this way of writing. But I can't say it, I just feel uncomfortable reading it. Goodbye