Guarding the Isolated City: in the Red Building, Kill the Enemy and Become Stronger!

How did Xichun go to the city that had been lost for seven years? How could Xichun go there alone? Mrs. Jia had to send Jia Lian there even if her son-in-law died, let alone a son. Xichun could go there, but Jia Lian couldn't go? ? ? Even if it is for the sake of face, one must send an immediate family member there. Funerals have always been a matter of great importance to this day. Only when all the men in the family are dead will women be sent there.

Do you want to take a look at what you are writing?

I made the same mistake as most Red Mansion fans, and I was in a complete mess when I came into contact with the Jia family, ancestor? Is it necessary for your adopted son to lick like this? Calling the old lady is enough to give her face, and she has to follow it properly! And the most important point is that the Jia family has always been emphasized, but look at Huo Qubing. After he became the champion, which established force could suppress him? A champion is never alone. Is it possible that you alone are responsible for so many big wins? A champion prince must be followed by at least a dozen new nobles. He is a faction by himself, and he is also the leader of a new class of powerful military nobles. Even during the reign of the Second Duke Ning Rong, he did not dare to say that he could suppress a faction of champion princes. Why should the declining Jia family? Wei Qing was awesome at that time, right? Wasn't Huo Qubing used to balance Wei Qing's power in the army? Both parties are of the same level. The result is that in many Red Mansions fandoms, the protagonist is given a champion and then written like an Anlehou. That's bullshit.

I don't know what it is written, but the system doesn't show it clearly. In seven years, Yanmen Pass is not a small town! What's the East Factory? All the embroidered guards are dead. They can't climb to the capital. They are extremely brainless. They are a first- and second-grade official. There is no news for half a month. It's not like they have destroyed the country! Did the system just open its mouth and fart?

The starting point now is to disband immediately? Can this fucking book be recommended? Blinded by glasses?

Behind Yanmen Pass is a vast stretch of plains all the way to Taiyuan. How could the imperial court ignore the fall of such an important place? Crazy

Killed three thousand cavalry and still lacked food, so I wrote in random words without understanding. Nothing to see

Do you know where Yanmen Pass is? The first pass in the world. No court can ignore it. After Yanmen Pass is Taiyuan. Do you know what happened to Jingkang Shame?

What are you writing about? A city that cannot be conquered for seven years, or a city besieged by nomads. Do you think this can be achieved with the productivity of nomads? Bypassing Yanmen Pass to attack the mainland, the author, you don't know anything about the history of ancient Chinese wars! Yanmen is still there, who dares to bypass the Changqi Mountains and go straight in, without fear of being stabbed in the anus and attacked from both sides?

The outside world knew nothing about the city for seven years, but the protagonist's father died a year ago. Even a young lady who was not taken seriously in the Jia family knew about it and came over, but the outside world knew nothing? Isn't this nonsense?

The subject matter was obviously found on the Wu Nao Nao Shuang Wen website. I have seen four such subjects there, either Red Mansion, Zhifu or Xinghan, Zongshi, Gucheng, either Yanmen Pass or Yumen Pass, and another one about Shanhaiguan. . . Yumen Pass is okay, but Yanmen Pass and Shanhaiguan are isolated cities. The capital is either Beijing or Chang'an. If you are so close, you will be isolated for decades. . .

You might as well write it in Suiye City, Yanmen Pass? Don't you have any idea of ​​the geographical location?

This brother is so awesome. He probably doesn't read much. He's illogical. He's just talking about short drama videos that he's seen and heard about. I just want to laugh. Are you planning to poison me to death and inherit my starting coins?

Well, there is a question. This is Yanmen Pass. Behind the Central Plains Gate is Taiyuan. How did they manage to surround Taiyuan without invading the Central Plains? How outrageous is this dynasty to let Yanmen Pass fall out of its hands?

Mad, I thought it was a stupid and cool article, but after reading a few pictures, I realized that it was a stupid article.

Um~ I didn't even read the catalog, I just looked at the introduction, and I knew it was born based on the defense.

This introduction is just a piece of cake. There is no need to read it.

This looks like garbage written by AI

There is no food and grass for seven years, what do you eat?

I can't watch it anymore, I don't have basic common sense, it's toxic, it seems like it was written by AI

I'm speechless. With such an IQ, I dare to write a book. He despised the imperial power as soon as he became a marquis, which is really unprecedented.

This is really embarrassing. Wang Ziteng is incompetent, not an idiot.

If you don't have any knowledge of geography, don't write about the scene. Are Yanmen Pass and Suiyejiang City a triangle? Your triangle is too big. .

And the key is that Qi Qi actually allows this kind of thing to enter the house?

As someone who has never commented before, I would like to say that what I wrote is a piece of shit.

Why do you have the nerve to write about a big man? The highlight of the Han Dynasty is Huo Qubing. Hey, you can make up any dynasty.

There are some innovations, but the author's writing style is still not very good. Please write more and practice more.

Just this introduction, it's normal if it doesn't become popular

The best outcome of this situation is Zhang Yichao. The worst outcome is that the grass on the grave will die several times.

What are you writing about? Are you embarrassed to post it yourself?