Clear the Air Catastrophe at the Beginning

Once something goes wrong, the protagonist is a hero, the second time he is suspicious, the third time he is sure, and the fourth time the company cannot find out the man behind it (there is no one) and decides to kill the protagonist.

Write less about the grievances of wealthy families, less about the bitterness and hatred, and more about the main storyline of the cockpit.

Don't tell me that the dungeon you experience now will become reality later, so it would be unwise for you to use a simulator to test now, right? If such a big air accident occurs, it will definitely be reported. When the time comes, they will think it is exactly the same as your simulation this time, wouldn't you just send it?

The background is full of bitterness and hatred, with artificial twists and turns. . Why do all modern novels do this? . It's really just a set of procedures written over and over again.

Crisis management game (pilot version)?

I just want to know why the protagonist was so messed up before he was resurrected? What happened in the middle? Don't you want to explain it at all? And why did it change immediately after resurrection... ... Is this hole a bit big?

It's boring to have to artificially create so many conflicts and twists.

This guy should be Mei Zixu. Most of the previous books where the protagonists were flying airplanes were involved in accidents, and many of them were narrow escapes. After changing the number, this book has started a doppelgänger trend.

What annoys me the most is this kind of novel where the main character has a short lifespan. If he has the ability, he will die.

There was an accident on the plane with so many protagonists on it. No matter how hard you try to turn the tide. No one would want to. He has many things to do. The probability of one in 100,000 becomes 90% for him. Something happened

There's no need for other people to have a system, right? Can't it be just the protagonist? ?

There was a book of the same title in Qidian. The male protagonist was Xu Cang. It should be the same author. The same problem. He loved to write about reality but couldn't understand it. He insisted on copying the information and made it into a mess. The more the male protagonist wrote, the more he looked like the male protagonist of a fantasy novel. During the climax, he couldn't help but imitate the fantasy novel to sensationalize. The titles of the subsequent chapters looked so embarrassing that he was scratching his feet. Why did the author rewrite it? Haven't you figured it out yet? Not clear about subscription data analysis?

How do you say this thing? Just like a bunch of writing about what? A lot of people wrote about the one with broken glass on a Sichuan Airlines flight. Damn it, basically every time he flew a plane, there were various accidents. Then I'm curious, who the hell dares to fly on your plane? Who dares to tell me! A group of lunatics seeking excitement dare to sit down. Generally speaking, I don't need to read books of this type. I already know which path you want to take.

Meizi, Xu Xiaoxiao, pig's trotters all have the same name.

The plot is good, but too draggy. I came here for the story, not the aviation knowledge. Most of the content of one chapter is knowledge explanation. I really can't stand it

Let us follow the reading, and then the key moment is gone. Does this mean that we are digging a hole for readers to jump? ? ?

Can't you think about it: Could it be that the market for novels about plane crashes is saturated and everyone is tired of reading them? There are only two books like this on the entire Internet, not to mention the quality assurance of your writing; The main reason now is that the so-called jockey global circulation is outdated... Think about how many books there are in this genre. Everyone has dozed off and abandoned the book when they saw this setting. Isn't it good to change back to the setting of the first one? I have ordered them all.

Big thing! Alaska Airlines, AS1282, after the explosion💥, the rear door flew off, and some parts of the cabin disappeared in the air! Crew NB, bring everyone down! 😠

The main problem is that the division after the end of a scene is too blurry. Sometimes you see a new scene inexplicably and only know that the previous one has ended.

Has this book appeared before and been rewritten?

This author can handle it. If there are technical errors, he really corrects them

Just one per day. What about fools?

I knew it. . . You are the only one who writes about being a captain in Qidian!

Just keep writing when you have free time. Real work is also a guarantee of life. Novels may be the author's hobby. I hope I can continue to finish them.

What books has the author written before? Can't find it

First

Full order, well written. I like to see this kind of thing

I remember he was the defendant in Air Havoc, right? Because people can fly down using a simulator, so shouldn't the protagonist be able to do it easily if he is prepared?

The whole story is like a life-restart simulator, but it has a limited number of times, and the endless plot loops back and forth. You couldn't have put it together with the help of GPT, no matter how you look at it, it looks like it.

The initial setting is the late 20th century? The rhythm of the first dungeon is very good, but the second dungeon still has a similar plot at the beginning, which is a bit tired. If the second dungeon is an encounter like the source code💣Similar to the plot, there is a chance to make a small hit among the readers, and then transition to the day of the Twin Towers as soon as possible, and the plot will take off directly. The author's professional knowledge is online, but it's a pity that he can't grasp the long-term narrative. It's quite good to just treat the first copy as an independent short story.